The Smoke Room Build 34 (WIll): "A Hundred Visions And Revisions"
Hey folks, this is George. The team has been working on restructuring Will's chapter 3 for a good while to make it mesh better with the tone and the timing of the animatic. Scenes with Todd and Marcy have been restructured to be before and after the stag. I also added a good deal of new writing to fill in the missing choices from the prior update.
I still intend to do a little more pacing adjustments for the public update, as well as including some new cg's for certain new scenes, but that will have to wait for now.
-Writing By George Squares
-Editing and copywriting by George, Kardamom, and cafealopex
-Illustrations by Kardamon
-Teaser by solosolosolomon
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