Okay, just a quick run-through. It somehow crashed, after I talked to the draenei and then went to the deck on the next day, so I didn't even get to the doggy scene.
From what I saw until now:
-The story needs some more background, rather dull in my opinion.
-It is rather a click-fest (going to the goblin every fucking day, then to the sister to see if I can interact with her and then back to goblin, back to sister.... you get what I mean)
-The animation(s) need more perspectives or just make different ones, because it is kinda over too fast
-WIP WIP WIP (that's to be expected from 0.2...or?)
-Grammar, please
-It gets to blowing rather quick, maybe start with something more innocent? (just my opinion)
This list is just a quick run through it, it's 2:24am atm. and Im tired, please bare with me.
Edit: Currently it is not worth the time, sry.
Edit2: Just played it through this morning and yes, the sex screnes are way too quick, please flesh them out. I'd rather have decent, multi perspective scenes than a dozen animations which go by in the blink of an eye.
And I still think that you get to the fucking way too fast, you gotta corrupt them, don't whore them.