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VN Ren'Py Abandoned The story of Aarong [v0.25] [Iggy Venz]

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IggyVenz

patreon.com/iggyvenz
Game Developer
Sep 29, 2017
9
1
Are all games on this site made in Russia? I clicked a total of 5 times in this game, menu included, and the grammar already hits you in the face. I like Warcraft stuff, so thanks for making it but its really hard to enjoy when every sentence is a riddle. I mean even google translate does a better job than what you get in most porn games.
Edit: Also, not to sound ungrateful but already your second dialog is "Hey, I made some device that can mind control people". Not only is this very unoriginal, pretty blunt but pretty lazy too. If you want to make a "Dating Sim", make it about dating, not mind control.
Right now most dialog sounds like Russian robots talking. Get some finesse, if you don't have any, maybe a story driven game just isn't for you.
Yes, I completely agree with you. Dialogues should be much better..
At the moment I'm working on editing the dialogues and editing the current content in general. I think gradually I will be able to up the project to a decent level.
Thank you for feedback :)
 
Jun 19, 2017
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Okay, just a quick run-through. It somehow crashed, after I talked to the draenei and then went to the deck on the next day, so I didn't even get to the doggy scene.

From what I saw until now:
-The story needs some more background, rather dull in my opinion.
-It is rather a click-fest (going to the goblin every fucking day, then to the sister to see if I can interact with her and then back to goblin, back to sister.... you get what I mean)
-The animation(s) need more perspectives or just make different ones, because it is kinda over too fast
-WIP WIP WIP (that's to be expected from 0.2...or?)
-Grammar, please
-It gets to blowing rather quick, maybe start with something more innocent? (just my opinion)

This list is just a quick run through it, it's 2:24am atm. and Im tired, please bare with me.

Edit: Currently it is not worth the time, sry.
Edit2: Just played it through this morning and yes, the sex screnes are way too quick, please flesh them out. I'd rather have decent, multi perspective scenes than a dozen animations which go by in the blink of an eye.
And I still think that you get to the fucking way too fast, you gotta corrupt them, don't whore them.
 

amgwtfover

Member
Aug 11, 2017
188
690
Game consistently stops working and crashes halfway through the goblin blowjob scene, right after clicking to advance after *slurp* *slurp *slurp*. Can't continue further =/
 

IggyVenz

patreon.com/iggyvenz
Game Developer
Sep 29, 2017
9
1
Game consistently stops working and crashes halfway through the goblin blowjob scene, right after clicking to advance after *slurp* *slurp *slurp*. Can't continue further =/
Upload screenshot with error in my discord. Ty
 

prew

Newbie
Dec 24, 2017
22
8
The project is cancelled? :(
Are the links still working? Has someone the "0.25 + extras" version?
 
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