JenMistress
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You know, every time I see her name, Ai, I keep thinking of A.I. as in Artificial Intelligence, and wondering if she is an Android. 
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You know, every time I see her name, Ai, I keep thinking of A.I. as in Artificial Intelligence, and wondering if she is an Android.
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Well, I kind of felt like there's something off about that face too and I've already modified it heavily (there was one shot with her in 0.2, while texting with MC). Probably will do some more experimenting, as I'm designing new characters anyway. But still, I don't want her to lose her characteristics.
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well, the post i made after the first scene with her in the street so the lightning needs rework there probably.
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Well, I kind of felt like there's something off about that face too and I've already modified it heavily (there was one shot with her in 0.2, while texting with MC). Probably will do some more experimenting, as I'm designing new characters anyway. But still, I don't want her to lose her characteristics.
The story looks very promising , so hopefully you will continue to the awesome finish!
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That was so long ago... I like to think I improved since then, we'll see how 0.3 comes out
Remaking older scenes is the last thing I want to do and if I ever do so, it'll be much further into the story or more likely after it's concluded. Like you've said yourself, I'd love to continue on with the story.
Thank you for the feedback and a kind word!
loikl
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You know, this is the MC is a cuckold BUT since he agrees to being a cuckold then he is not a cuckold
that is why it is not NTR and they disguise it with swinging... although for that to be the case the MC would have to share and receive something in return and not just stand there watching... but who thinks about those technicalities?Really enjoying this. Well written swinging and all the girls are great. Overarching plot is interesting and seems like it's going to lead up to some good scenes.
Hope the next update has some more Lin focus. Her already going after the brother (if you chose the male option) feels kinda rushed. Even more with how we haven't spent that much time with her ourselves yet. Kinda expected it to be a smaller side character for her first time and the brother to come after you become more involved with Ai.
It also seems the MC won't be present when it happens? Even though when you gave Lin the pass, the MC implied them switching roles, with him being the voyeur this time and her being with someone else. I'm sure it'll be done well, but I'm a bit disappointed with that change.
Hope the next update has some more Lin focus. Her already going after the brother (if you chose the male option) feels kinda rushed. Even more with how we haven't spent that much time with her ourselves yet. Kinda expected it to be a smaller side character for her first time and the brother to come after you become more involved with Ai.
It also seems the MC won't be present when it happens? Even though when you gave Lin the pass, the MC implied them switching roles, with him being the voyeur this time and her being with someone else. I'm sure it'll be done well, but I'm a bit disappointed with that change.
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Ah, originally there was a direct mention of Lin seducing Wilhelm(suggesting it will be a process), but for some reason I've changed my mind and settled on "doing it", like it was obvious she needs to seduce him first - hence MC calling his brother a "monk". I admit, character buildup for Wilhelm was sparse and very, very subtle - I was hoping he's easy enough to read, simply due to his attitude to the shady part of the business or the way he treats his wife, Ai. There's much more depth to his personality, many facts haven't been revealed yet...
Presence of MC in foreshadowed scene is also a little vague, but I can assure you (as I've already written scenario for that scene, though it more likely will be part of Chapter IV), he will be there and there might be a little surprise waiting for him
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MC's fucking somebody who is in a relationship, while kind of being in a relationship himself...
Also, from now on I'll be dropping here only the most important posts from my SubscribeStar.
There's a free tier if you want all the updates(and links) as soon as they are posted. Oh yeah, there are the occasional polls too, if you'd like to have some influence on the development.
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Gumshoe08
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Funny. Because this statement radiates weak beta male energy; like if you're not gonna play it, why are you even in this thread XD
Nimbus Commando
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He will share "his" women take it as a show of power. The power of being a cuck I guess. lol
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I rather enjoyed Carolines scene, can't wait for more!
You know, this is the MC is a cuckold BUT since he agrees to being a cuckold then he is not a cuckold
Ladies and Gentlemen, I present to you, the collective "Shy girl's husband".
loikl
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Don't worry little "duck", you are in control at all timesLadies and Gentlemen, I present to you, the collective "Shy girl's husband".
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Alive and well, if I'd dare to say so myself.
I do, I'm keeping the regime of posting weekly as a matter of fact. Decided against copy-pasting everything to F95, since it was making a mess and there's not much movement in this thread.
Currently I'm about 60% done with renders and there's "only" coding & dialogue left after that. The update is coming, can't give you any particular date right now tho.