A few words on perception of
time in The Successor.
Story overall will play out throughout a
year or
two of MCs lifetime. You might think, that is a lot of time and you'd be correct. Also it is here that the main issue arises. How do one keep the story
consistent and
condensed enough without adding a
"One week later..." after each step you take. Well, after giving it a lot of though, I've decided to change the perception of time in my novel, to something way different from what we know.
The
year in The Successor universe is divided by
4 months (or
seasons if you will - Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter), where each again is divided by
31 days. Days are 24 hour long, although they might feel a lot longer than what they are in real world - you can safely ignore that part, it's not significant, as
I'm not going to use hours for the setting of the scenes.
Okay, with that settled let me explain
why exactly I felt the need to make the year more compact.
I feel like this is the best way to keep the story going throughout
longer period of time
without bringing a lot of
repetitive fillers. You know very well what I'm talking about, every sandbox game has them

Yeah, so the year is shorter to keep you all
away from empty grind and repetitive scenes. I happen to hate it too and I understand sometimes one wants to get to the porn part ASAP. Although from the
storytelling point, you've got to have some
fillers for consistency sake. In my opinion
each and every of these should add at least a little to the story, be that by dialogue, setting of the scene or way the scenes where shot.
Don't get me wrong, but some
time skips - as I will call them from now on -
will still
happen.
Not every day of MCs life
is that
significant to the story and also there is the fact that jumping few days forward will allow me to
bring some larger
changes to the world and people, and
advance the story in a bit different way. Like for example skipping
menial tasks, that are
not worth showing more than once but
still have a significant
influence on the story. I've got one of these time skips planned for upcoming updates. I hope it will be all clear when we get there
Okay, I think wall of text of this size is enough for today. I hope it will make it easier for you to understand what am I planning to do with this project
Shot below comes from one of the filler scenes, that
might turn out to have more influence on the story than expected...
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