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Hm, i wouldn't say a good update, it was ok.
The update is basically just one large combat scene in the village. The combat is good, but without much else happening it kinda falls flat for me as an update.
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The update is basically just one large combat scene in the village. The combat is good, but without much else happening it kinda falls flat for me as an update.
There are too many issues with the whole village/bandit scenario.
1. When talking to the villagers in the tavern, the MC decides not to say they're from the Knights Guild, so that Greyson won't find out. However, Cassandra literally just informed him of that fact a short time before.
2. Why are the bandits so fixated on murdering everyone? It would be far more likely that they would have the intention to kill all of the men, but capture, rape and possibly sell the women.
3. Why were the MC's trio struggling so much while fighting solo against some random bandits? The MC and Lyra have been receiving training from/sparring against some of the top individuals in the kingdom. The MC was also recently able to put up somewhat of a fight against a vampire. It just doesn't make sense.
4. Why didn't Lyra play to her strengths? She could have perhaps climbed onto a roof in order to get a better overview of the village and snipe bandits.
5. The MC doesn't immediately press the advantage after disarming the bandit. He instead stops to listen to the nonsense about facing him like a man and even considers it. It is neither a spar nor a duel. It is a battle to the death and the longer it continues, the more people will die.
6. The cyclops. I can understand having them struggle somewhat against it and while I can also understand that arrows would have issues dealing with its tough skin and the same could be true for Arun's sword, I find it hard to believe that the MC's super special sword would stuggle to the same extent.
I'm sure there were other things that I'm forgetting, but overall it just felt forced. I'm guessing that the intent was to build tension, but it instead left me feeling underwhelmed and disappointed. I get that it's their first real mission, but still.
1. When talking to the villagers in the tavern, the MC decides not to say they're from the Knights Guild, so that Greyson won't find out. However, Cassandra literally just informed him of that fact a short time before.
2. Why are the bandits so fixated on murdering everyone? It would be far more likely that they would have the intention to kill all of the men, but capture, rape and possibly sell the women.
3. Why were the MC's trio struggling so much while fighting solo against some random bandits? The MC and Lyra have been receiving training from/sparring against some of the top individuals in the kingdom. The MC was also recently able to put up somewhat of a fight against a vampire. It just doesn't make sense.
4. Why didn't Lyra play to her strengths? She could have perhaps climbed onto a roof in order to get a better overview of the village and snipe bandits.
5. The MC doesn't immediately press the advantage after disarming the bandit. He instead stops to listen to the nonsense about facing him like a man and even considers it. It is neither a spar nor a duel. It is a battle to the death and the longer it continues, the more people will die.
6. The cyclops. I can understand having them struggle somewhat against it and while I can also understand that arrows would have issues dealing with its tough skin and the same could be true for Arun's sword, I find it hard to believe that the MC's super special sword would stuggle to the same extent.
I'm sure there were other things that I'm forgetting, but overall it just felt forced. I'm guessing that the intent was to build tension, but it instead left me feeling underwhelmed and disappointed. I get that it's their first real mission, but still.
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Yeah, like at least DD!ummm... can you add Li with medium/big boobs?[...]
In Dukes of Hazzard (film, not original television) one guy told the waitress 'I notice your initials are a double D' (though she may have just been CC).
- Mar 4, 2020
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The game is sometimes boring, especially in the interactive elements, the dialogues are boring and I have nothing interesting there. There are a lot of old women in the game, but you can't do anything with them. I also don't like the look of the underwear of the female characters, because to people from the Middle Ages they look like they were bought in a modern store. The mother and daughter characters look equally young, without the captions I wouldn't know who is who, it would be enough to age the mother a little, add a few gray hairs and wrinkles. The adult female characters also look too childish. The main complaint is the lack of hair between the women's legs.
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I don't think it's boring, but won't disagree about some writing, though wouldn't say I could write a better game/visual_novel myself.
Exactly! They'd wear a type of upper-leg-covering shorts or even full-body undergarment.
I can tell them apart, though it's close, but in Mediaeval-type societies, it was common women become mothers by age 13, so young mothers were common even when their kids were teens (some places, like Sparta, typically later, like 18+, where women had more rights than anywhere else in Greece).
Exactly! No one would have this style in a Mediaeval society.
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I say the interaction elements are boring. I mean, we're supposed to fuck the merchant's wife. And we get a boring conversation with her about books. And the story has some boring dialogue, is drawn out, and moves slowly. But overall it's an engaging story.
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I would try to limit the scenes that don't feature the MC's party. It's pretty much half the scenes and I kept finding myself wanting to click past them. I can see their use for exposition but let's not waste too much on character development for bit players. I couldn't give less of a shit that Jasper doesn't like being treated as a noble or that Nola knows Iselda has a crush on Aren. Make them more important first and then we can care about them.
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Seems most recent is all battle action (other than possible kiss) but I don't recall previous two (possibly).
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Because she said
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I actually liked the fights this last update, this was the first real mission after everyone's training, and you could see how everyone has evolved their fighting styles.
However, I do agree with the sentiment that the choices in this last update made no sense, I don't think we even needed them tbh...
However, I do agree with the sentiment that the choices in this last update made no sense, I don't think we even needed them tbh...
CaramelCowboy
After a whim, I check the developer section
and noticed a lot of tags, specifically Harem, not listed under Genre
any chance you can include those under the Genre section, because not everyone going to think to look under developer notes for more tags
After a whim, I check the developer section
and noticed a lot of tags, specifically Harem, not listed under Genre
any chance you can include those under the Genre section, because not everyone going to think to look under developer notes for more tags
Plenty of what I also thought has already been said about the fight, but couple points more...
Btw. There was typo on previous update. Perhaps fixed already?
You're mising out on some of his best moves, by the way.
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Btw. There was typo on previous update. Perhaps fixed already?
You're mising out on some of his best moves, by the way.
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She is yes, but there's no content or advancement with her yet.