VN Ren'Py The Swordbearer [v0.11] [Caramel Cowboy]

[Sadowdark]

The game is sometimes boring, especially in the interactive elements, the dialogues are boring and I have nothing interesting there. There are a lot of old women in the game, but you can't do anything with them. I also don't like the look of the underwear of the female characters, because to people from the Middle Ages they look like they were bought in a modern store. The mother and daughter characters look equally young, without the captions I wouldn't know who is who, it would be enough to age the mother a little, add a few gray hairs and wrinkles. The adult female characters also look too childish. The main complaint is the lack of hair between the women's legs.

 

[RobLocksley]

The game is sometimes boring, especially in the interactive elements, the dialogues are boring and I have nothing interesting there [...]

I don't think it's boring, but won't disagree about some writing, though wouldn't say I could write a better game/visual_novel myself.

I also don't like the look of the underwear of the female characters, because to people from the Middle Ages they look like they were bought in a modern store.

Exactly! They'd wear a type of upper-leg-covering shorts or even full-body undergarment.

The mother and daughter characters look equally young, without the captions I wouldn't know who is who, it would be enough to age the mother a little, add a few gray hairs and wrinkles. The adult female characters also look too childish.

I can tell them apart, though it's close, but in Mediaeval-type societies, it was common women become mothers by age 13, so young mothers were common even when their kids were teens (some places, like Sparta, typically later, like 18+, where women had more rights than anywhere else in Greece).

The main complaint is the lack of hair between the women's legs.

Exactly! No one would have this style in a Mediaeval society.

 

[Sadowdark]

I don't think it's boring, but won't disagree about some writing, though wouldn't say I could write a better game/visual_novel myself.

I say the interaction elements are boring. I mean, we're supposed to fuck the merchant's wife. And we get a boring conversation with her about books. And the story has some boring dialogue, is drawn out, and moves slowly. But overall it's an engaging story.

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[LinkBox88]

I would try to limit the scenes that don't feature the MC's party. It's pretty much half the scenes and I kept finding myself wanting to click past them. I can see their use for exposition but let's not waste too much on character development for bit players. I couldn't give less of a shit that Jasper doesn't like being treated as a noble or that Nola knows Iselda has a crush on Aren. Make them more important first and then we can care about them.

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[WardroberVT]

Is it a save bug or the last 3 episodes don't have any love scenes?




And some misspells

 

[RobLocksley]

Is it a save bug or the last 3 episodes don't have any love scenes?

Seems most recent is all battle action (other than possible kiss) but I don't recall previous two (possibly).

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

Why did Cassandra suggest banishment for Greyson instead of letting him go to prison? Isn't that just...letting him go?

 

[Sadowdark]

Why did Cassandra suggest banishment for Greyson instead of letting him go to prison? Isn't that just...letting him go?

Because she said

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[bigfuckinE]

The dev was pretty well influenced by elder scrolls eh?

 

[Meiri]

I actually liked the fights this last update, this was the first real mission after everyone's training, and you could see how everyone has evolved their fighting styles.
However, I do agree with the sentiment that the choices in this last update made no sense, I don't think we even needed them tbh...

 

[Anon4321]

CaramelCowboy

After a whim, I check the developer section
and noticed a lot of tags, specifically Harem, not listed under Genre

any chance you can include those under the Genre section, because not everyone going to think to look under developer notes for more tags

 

[Moonis]

Plenty of what I also thought has already been said about the fight, but couple points more...

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Btw. There was typo on previous update. Perhaps fixed already?

You're mising out on some of his best moves, by the way.

 

[DevinHesi]

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[RobLocksley]

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Can the main character (MC) put a bun in her oven?

 

[MichhLopz]

Heyy, you know if Neveaha is a LI?

 

[RobLocksley]

Heyy, you know if Neveaha is a LI?

not so far but hopefully eventually

 

[MiltonPowers]

Heyy, you know if Neveaha is a LI?

She is yes, but there's no content or advancement with her yet.

 

[japdre42]

Any of the women have a full bush?

 

[HornyyPussy]

Any of the women have a full bush?

No idea, don't think we've seen anyone's garden yet.......

 

[Sadowdark]

Any of the women have a full bush?

No