- Jul 12, 2020
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Hmm...not bad. Curious how old Carbon is..another ridiculously sized tit man...story not too bad at the moment and renders are of good quality.
Lot of nit-pick issues....like eating spag and meatballs but needs to put the 'pizza boxes' away....hmmm...either use the right assets or change the dialogue to suit...it's a little thing but dialogue that does not match what you're seeing (or even completely contradicts) annoys me to no end. It's such a simple thing to get right.
That aside, dialogue is pretty good, not your typical clueless never seen a woman before MC...that's always a huge bonus for me. Some errors on the final continue/patreon page though, continuation may cease is duplicated in both paragraphs (if intentional, it's too much) and Synthetic is spelt Synyhetic...and leads to a dead Patreon page...again...it's just little things letting this down when it's actually pretty good overall and has potential.
Will look forward to seeing where this starts heading.
Lot of nit-pick issues....like eating spag and meatballs but needs to put the 'pizza boxes' away....hmmm...either use the right assets or change the dialogue to suit...it's a little thing but dialogue that does not match what you're seeing (or even completely contradicts) annoys me to no end. It's such a simple thing to get right.
That aside, dialogue is pretty good, not your typical clueless never seen a woman before MC...that's always a huge bonus for me. Some errors on the final continue/patreon page though, continuation may cease is duplicated in both paragraphs (if intentional, it's too much) and Synthetic is spelt Synyhetic...and leads to a dead Patreon page...again...it's just little things letting this down when it's actually pretty good overall and has potential.
Will look forward to seeing where this starts heading.
