- Feb 27, 2018
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I get the feeling the script was entirely written in a language with no gendered pronouns, and then machine-translated to English (badly). There's a line where people are talking about MC's mother and father at the same time, and it's just a string of 'he' like six times and not a single 'she'.
I'm surprised nobody's commenting on the multiple scenes where the resolution takes a nose-dive for no apparent reason.
- Dec 4, 2017
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To be fair, the gender pronouns are the least of the problem i have with the text...
I have no clue how the story is in the original language, but the translation is bad.
On the plus side, the dev changed the MC's look and he's actually better now.
Sadly still forced with that gf, with no say in the matter and for no obvious reason...
The older sister which is still planning something and i'm curious if will get a choice to reject her, so far i really don't like her. Even more so with her questions about if the MC is ok with it if his gf is in a relationship with a other girl...seriously, give the players a choice if they want that or not when time comes.
I have no clue how the story is in the original language, but the translation is bad.
On the plus side, the dev changed the MC's look and he's actually better now.
Sadly still forced with that gf, with no say in the matter and for no obvious reason...
The older sister which is still planning something and i'm curious if will get a choice to reject her, so far i really don't like her. Even more so with her questions about if the MC is ok with it if his gf is in a relationship with a other girl...seriously, give the players a choice if they want that or not when time comes.
Is it me or are there way too many "father left/died and MC finds out what happened" stories in these games?
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To get some girl pregnant the MC has to be a guy first.
Tested, sloppy made, strange Renders... Many models are looking really weird, especially the MC, though the DEV reworked him... but... it doesnt really helped. But same goes for female models too (especially skin and the clothes and everything, clipping issues all over the place and such)... Everything seems to be made kinda hasty without looking at it again to see if its looking any good.
Same goes for the text... its... more or less nonreadable. Half the time its more guessing than knowing what is said.
And how in the world can someone rate this crap with 5 stars? rofl. If this is 5 stars, what is Eternum than? 5 billion? seriously... the ratings on this side are getting more and more pointless.... Well... its clear, a one time account just to rate this game, not even posted anything... thats another way to push the own project i think. Why can people rate games without being an active member on this site? Every douche can make a new account and rate games for his friends? (or right away for himself of course)
For the story, there is none and i didnt even bother to try to understand it... Could go like this "oohhh parents died, now iam gonna fuck my sisters, but iam not a real guy, so iam screwed, maybe literally" This is not even 1 star. But iam not rating it cause i dumped this crap after a few minutes. This will go nowhere.
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- May 13, 2018
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mc a baddy LMAO. All jokes aside
Why does he look like he's about to make a pencil disappear?
yo this real? idk how I feel about this.
did the dev not change the mc face?
we sure this a male protag?
Dont know what youre talking about, top notch renders, DPC can learn something here from that DEV...
ah fuck it, its not even funny how bad that looks.
- Feb 11, 2020
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i think the game is about finding error, am i right ?
- Sep 16, 2019
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Pregnant, yeah, I think the MC gets pregnant.
wow. i've seen some real good games on this site. but this one really checks all the boxes. amazing unique story, no grammar mistakes at all and flawless renders. i will eagerly await updates of this masterpiece.
i threw up after writing that and it looked better than this game. this is trash. dogshit. smegma. never used the hide feature until now.
i threw up after writing that and it looked better than this game. this is trash. dogshit. smegma. never used the hide feature until now.
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Man, MC definitely needs to be recasted. Did creator wanted transgender MC of female MC for this game? Or is this yag MC with yag thematic? It's just wierd look if this is straight MC, where you go for female LIs.