So far it looks good, but earlier comments are correct about the engrish and slow progression of the images.
My advice is to get someone who is decent at english grammar to proofread and correct test versions and use that to fix at least the engrish a bit, also try to speed up walking speed a bit (when in the house), the character walks really tediously slow in the RPGM parts of the game.
As for those times where renders are shown in a slide show, shorten the time a little bit between the transitions to make the repetitive actions go a bit faster, people often don't like unskippable slow and long sequences.
Other then that, the game looks good, renders are interesting and i like the genre's being used here. Good luck, and keep up the good work.
PS: some errors i found,
Sacred is used, while i assume you meant Scared as in afraid.
West North should be North West, you always start with the main direction on the compass of either North or South, then add the side direction after it. So you can also write is as: "NW". The common directions used are then N, NW, W, SW, S, SE, E, NE and back to N again.