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Looking forward to the development of this game!
Great art, interesting premise. I thought it was setting up to be a sandbox, but was pleasantly surprised it was linear.
Can't wait to help the farm girl!
Great art, interesting premise. I thought it was setting up to be a sandbox, but was pleasantly surprised it was linear.
Can't wait to help the farm girl!
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Well it was a classic "You get to set the relationship" start.
But I haven't played latest, so maybe that was removed with revamp?
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Gave this a go.
I like the characters - they're different enough from each other (both in looks and personality) to make the experience more diverse. Ashley is the top girl in looks (closely followed by Leah), while Serena has the best personality. The art is quite appealing to the eyes as well. The early action is a plus, although some explaining that Ashley and MC were already a thing at the start could help a bit with the confusion (I was surprised when she showed up on his bed uninvited). The animations are fluid, which is quite important in my view.
However, I don't like that the scenes have just 1 pose. Makes things too simplistic. Especially with Anika, who has the most advanced plot for now. 2 scenes that look exactly the same?
Also, the trope of 'not!mother noticing how well-endowed her not!son is makes her horny for him' isn't endearing at all. It feels pretty fake.
Since the game is quite linear, I guess there won't be a way to avoid scenes with certain girls? I'm not into Sophia and Quinn, for example.
Oh, forgot about the most displeasing thing of them all: why is there no music past the main menu? Not even 'sexy times' music during the scenes... just plain silence.
I like the characters - they're different enough from each other (both in looks and personality) to make the experience more diverse. Ashley is the top girl in looks (closely followed by Leah), while Serena has the best personality. The art is quite appealing to the eyes as well. The early action is a plus, although some explaining that Ashley and MC were already a thing at the start could help a bit with the confusion (I was surprised when she showed up on his bed uninvited). The animations are fluid, which is quite important in my view.
However, I don't like that the scenes have just 1 pose. Makes things too simplistic. Especially with Anika, who has the most advanced plot for now. 2 scenes that look exactly the same?
Also, the trope of 'not!mother noticing how well-endowed her not!son is makes her horny for him' isn't endearing at all. It feels pretty fake.
Since the game is quite linear, I guess there won't be a way to avoid scenes with certain girls? I'm not into Sophia and Quinn, for example.
Oh, forgot about the most displeasing thing of them all: why is there no music past the main menu? Not even 'sexy times' music during the scenes... just plain silence.
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I’m just waiting on a sex scene with Anika where she’s holding her favorite pen the whole time.
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Working on it. I have no clue about coding but I'll add it somehow.
I don't want to submit a review this early in your games development, but I do want to say if I were to rate it now, it'd be 3/5 stars for average. It's enjoyable for what it is.
Pros
- Art style is good.
- Animated scenes are fluid.
- Very few meaningless choices.
- Conversations are mostly quick and concise. The player is not forced to read through 50 panels of text.
Mid
- Pacing is quick. This can be either good and bad depending on your perspective. The story is always moving forward, which can only ever be good, but it can make progress feel unnatural.
Cons
- Worldbuilding is lacking. It's very small when it should be much larger.
- Characters are one-dimensional, and the MC is a Gary Stu, which makes him utterly boring, and not at all relatable (he has no obvious biology or chemistry skills, but he is able to design a working formula for a special fertalizer in one night - a problem other people haven't been able solve years, apparently). Both problems make this game no different from 100 other games here on F95 (a conservative estimate).
I do not know what your goals are for your VN, if you're aiming for simple fap-material, you can ignore what I have in the spoiler. Otherwise, I hope it's helpful.
Pros
- Art style is good.
- Animated scenes are fluid.
- Very few meaningless choices.
- Conversations are mostly quick and concise. The player is not forced to read through 50 panels of text.
Mid
- Pacing is quick. This can be either good and bad depending on your perspective. The story is always moving forward, which can only ever be good, but it can make progress feel unnatural.
Cons
- Worldbuilding is lacking. It's very small when it should be much larger.
- Characters are one-dimensional, and the MC is a Gary Stu, which makes him utterly boring, and not at all relatable (he has no obvious biology or chemistry skills, but he is able to design a working formula for a special fertalizer in one night - a problem other people haven't been able solve years, apparently). Both problems make this game no different from 100 other games here on F95 (a conservative estimate).
I do not know what your goals are for your VN, if you're aiming for simple fap-material, you can ignore what I have in the spoiler. Otherwise, I hope it's helpful.
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I don't think it's a problem but then again I don't know
. My knowledge of these things are zero. I'll look into it though!If only 1 in 63 detect something and the one that detects something is pretty unknown provider, i'd go with false positive.
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