So usually I don't judge v0.01 of games (mostly cause its just a starting point), but this is pretty rough. Here's some critiques:
-The dev should really fix the MC's face. Like it wouldn't matter as much if he wasn't in every other shot. Everyone agrees, for a 19 year old, he looks like a creepy 30 something.
-Bugs: the job quest can't be completed, points can be added to infinity, and making sure actions actually pass time.
-Overview. Just write something. Hell, I could do it for you:
"A 19 year old (Player Character) moves back in with his Mentor (Relationship can be changed) and her Housemate (relationship can be changed). How he balances family life, school, and a job is up to you!
That's a pretty boring intro, but it's better than nothing.