I didn't say anything about an improvement, really. There are less text walls sure, but I have still noticed that the MC tends to recap to himself about a scene that literally just finished. After the ride to work for example, I know she gave me a ride and gave me her number. Or waking up late and explaining, again, that he needs to eat and get dressed before he leaves.
It seems you missed the part about the MC perving every other line of inner monologue? Or that nearly all of his inner monologue is him doing that. Because that has gotten exponentially worse in this game. I'm already sick of it personally. If it were removed his inner monologue would be cut by 90% and he would only be talking to himself about what is actually relevant, not a bad thing if you ask me.