- May 9, 2018
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This VN could really use a proofreader, preferably someone who is fluent in English. It's pretty bad when I have to reload after correcting nearly every single line of dialog that it breaks the immersion for me. The renders and story are good, it's just the writing... it's a mess. The dev I work with is still in the pre-development stage of his game that we probably won't have a test version to look at for the next few months. I'd be happy to volunteer cleaning this one up in the meantime. I mean, I'm already doing that now for my benefit. ![Laugh :LOL: :LOL:](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
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