I enjoyed that. Now here are a few things I have to say:
- There is a bug here (see image)
- Lila calls Jill Mom in the incest version.
- I'm looking forward to the 1080p version. You can leave the animations in 720p though if they get too large or take to much time to render otherwise
- What was the place where the MC went? Mom sounds like she was against him going. Is this supposed to be kept a secret for now? If not please tell the player why MC went in the first place. You don't have to give a specific location but a reason! In storytelling you don't keep something secret from the audience that every character knows unless you have a damn good reason to do so.
- What kind of relative is Lila? MC's grandgrandgrandgrandmother? Maybe she doesn't know but shouldn't MC at least be interested?
- Please don't give the player the option of playing in sandbox or VN mode but chose something and stick with it! Personally I prefer VNs but that's just me. Think about it: If you make the game VN compatible then there is probably no reason to play the sandbox game at all if it's just there to find the next trigger to forward the story. Sandbox games are supposed to give the player a better feel of the world and also sometimes extra challenges like mini games (like in the games by ICCreations). If the game doesn't provide that it will not feel that great. Take Indecent Desires for example. Started of as a pretty solid VN (similar to Dreams of Desires) and was practically ruined when turned into a sandbox game.
- I enjoyed what I have seen so far, keep up the good work!
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Hi, thanks for what you said.
And to answer what you asked, until now the user knows what he has to know, as the story progresses, he will know the reasons.
And as for where Lila comes from, in the official version (patreon) clearly lila will not belong in the bloody line of the MC, so if I can find a point where I can link Lila more with mc, I will, but for now it will continue as something "magical".