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UNOFFICIAL IDEA - INVISIBLE SIN
Olgrum or Sereneth could develop a spell or magic potion that makes them invisible. This way, they could have fun with Caelen without him noticing. Visually, the author could give Olgrum or Sereneth a blue or green halo to show the audience that they're invisible. In this sense, Aleksandr14 could use a third-person perspective, with Caelen gazing at the horizon while Olgrum and Sereneth have fun in the background (hahaha). It would be very exciting and funny.
Please, Dev, do this. Oh, and another thing: don't forget to add pubic hair to Sereneth as the story progresses. After they reach an inn, Sereneth could shave it again.
Excelent! I liked the idea.
Unofficial Idea 2 - Bathed in Sin.
At some point in the story, Caelen, Sereneth, and Olgrum decide to have fun in the hot springs. Sereneth is wearing a bikini while having fun with Caelen. During one of the games, Sereneth's bikini comes off, leaving her naked. Sereneth decides to stop having fun and leaves only her head above water while the water covers the rest of her body. Caelen decides to take a dip. Olgrum takes advantage of the situation and brings the bikini to Sereneth, but she notices Olgrum's erection. The hot springs are so hot that steam fills the place. When he returns to the surface, he looks for Sereneth but can't find her. The steam intensifies, and then he notices two moving shadows ahead, but he doesn't know who they are. He says, "Sereneth, is that you?"
She gets scared and decides to dive in. When the steam begins to dissipate, Caelen sees only Olgrum. Olgrum says he didn't see Sereneth. Caelen then decides to look for her in another part of the fountain, but what Caelen doesn't realize is that Sereneth is sucking Olgrum underwater. The end.
I don't know how the author will animate this. But it's nice to share ideas.