AndreaTheNord

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Been playing it for a bit now and it's just a VN, but in RPGMaker.
I think I'm on chapter 9 and I haven't gotten to make a single choice yet so it's essentially just an e-hentai gallery without any porn. The story is also ass, the MC goes from wanting to remain a virgin until marriage to walking around in a US flag bikini top and trying to fuck a dude in like 5 minutes.
Once you get past the intro story, it becomes more sandboxy and there are choices everywhere, it just has a long story. I could try making further improvements to that story, its not completely set in stone yet, but considering you mistook the game for being purely a visual novel, you can see its already long enough as it is, which is why theres the sudden progress from her being miss goody two shoes to seeking revenge, but perhaps i could smooth out that transition without it extending the story too much, i'll certainly ponder on it, thank you for the input :D
 

AndreaTheNord

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It's just a good'ole bimbo game without much thought put into it, instead or you're typical RPGM it's been converted into a VN with no choices(to my current knowledge) also has a restaurant management game in it for some reason. IMO I like the it.
it becomes more sandboxy once you make it past the long story introduction. Then you will have plenty of choices. I wouldnt say theres not much thought put into it, its just the underlying themes and moral messages are subtle and decorated with the ornamentation of humor and light-hearted fun.
 

AndreaTheNord

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Not much of an FMC game fan for the lack of a story and most of the questionable shit happening there, but I do love me some ridiculously attractive, naughty blondes like Andrea, and I have to say this one has a pretty good start, a lot of content and surprisingly good animations too, which is always a plus in my book.

Like it's usually the case, there's not many things to praise the story for, however, the sex scenes make up for it, IMO. Andrea's a perfect 10, head to toe, watching her fall into the depths of thottery is something I'm looking forward to, cuz the game's pretty straightforward, simple and good as it is... there's no need for complex or convoluted storytelling in all porn games. Sometimes, some peeps just want to kick back, drink a few beers and just fap to attractive hoes getting dicked down into ho/bimbo nirvana... ain't nothing wrong about this.



Basically, a high percentage of modern, independent, 'empowered' women's mindset in a nutshell, amirite ?? Glad the dev keeps it real and ontopic, so to say.;)



Missed the whole point of what this game is really about, which is bimbos, corruption and lots of fucking, didn't you ??:whistle: And I honestly think most FMCs in this type of games could be considered bimbos and dumb sluts simply bcz that's the whole appeal of FMC porn games for probably all fans of corrupting attractive female characters.
I have to say i'm kind of giggling at the idea of there being a lack of story when i just explained to a couple people that the reason they thought the game was purely visual novel was because they hadnt finished the story intro that eventually leads to an open world sandbox
Thanks for the compliment on the animations, i'm honestly a pretty noob animator but i'm getting a lot of practice with this game :D
"Andrea's a perfect 10", you flatter me sir :)
When i finished desiging her, i knew i had something special, a perfect porn character.
I'm glad your enjoying it so far, but really what i try to do is mix together the convoluted with the simple, the straightfoward with the complex. It has serious underlying themes and ideas, but they're subtle, not obvious, they're going under the radar for some, but that's okay, because the goofier, fun, humorous, and lighthearted side of it is supposed to be more apparent, as the game is supposed to be mostly just good ol horny fun, but once its finished, and the underlying themes become more revealed and apparent, it will then be more noticeable that there is actually a lot of heart in this, i'm just careful not to rub philosophy and morality into the forefront more than is needed, its better that its subtle.
 
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AndreaTheNord

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Well this turned out to be better then thought it would be :sneaky:
Not much of a story....more like a fuckfest.
But surprisingly well made with some good animations.
Is just missing the futa/trans tag.....not much...but there is a scene you could go for it.
And eventhough 1 scene of a parody sort of situation and very animated....the bestiality tag...but debatable I gues.
But good game in my book, looking forward to the next chapter (y)
There will be more fantasy sex added in the future, this game is really only just getting started, i absolutely intend to add more futa and monsters later on. Its maybe 10% done, maybe not even that. still a lot of work to do.
 
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AndreaTheNord

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Is anyone having problems with the restaurant workplace H-scene? It's lagging and can't move animations
When i shift focus back to that part, i'll have to experiment with that because i myself dont have that problem but others do, but i do certainly intend to make improvemts to that job anyways and more jobs will be added in the future
 

AndreaTheNord

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Got a game breaking bug at the following scenes:
2nd time bar drinking challenge...nobody wins...drinks stay at the top...game freezes.
Girl hang outs....last girl second page...in to the date and when you think it gets spicy you get an error....need to restart.
Just for the info :sneaky:
First time hearing of the bar drinking challenge bugging out, so thank you for bringing it to my attention! :)
I assume your speaking of the casey contacts, dont worry, already fixed that for the newest build
 
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AndreaTheNord

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next update?
I try my best to do at least one update every month, but i cant really commit to a specific day each month because they're just sort of ready when they're ready, there's always a lot of playtesting and bug fixing involved before a new build's release
 

AndreaTheNord

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This has to be the dumbest use of rpgm I've ever seen. Why not renpy since it's just a story with no gameplay? idk though "played" for a bit and other than the game asking if you want to continue, save or quit after each scene I've seen no choices. So in a way worse than even putting a story in renpy
Its still in development. As of now, the story introduction is just visual novel, but i've been pondering how i can add gameplay elements to it based on the feedback i've been recieving. But its not that way throughout the entire game, its just the intro story is long, eventually it leads to becoming more sandboxy. If you go back and choose to skip the intro, you'll realize that, its just the intro demands some patience, its like watching a movie, but i can always tweak and improve it, it is a work in progress after all. Also my first attempt at developing a game, so i'm learning things as i go, absorbing as much feedback as possible. Thank you for the input :)
 

AndreaTheNord

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May 26, 2024
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A fun little game with a few issues: Hooters minigame is long and annoying, animations are unskippable, there is no dialogue during sex animations, men cumming in the game is weird most of the time - a few times it works just fine, but usually they don't and there is one scene where it just looks like pissing.

Still, there is quite a lot of potential here.

P.S. For anybody thinking it's just a kinetic novel: that's just the intro, after that there is a minigame and a sandbox, I know that the way the intro plays is weird to say the least.
I certainly intend to make improvements to the waitress minigame and have already started reworking the sex scenes to add more player agency and dialogue. I'm a noob at game development but rest assured i'm learning as much as i can from all the feedback :)
The cumming should look better in the newer animations, my skills are gradually improving with practice, i'm basically learning them by doing them.
Thank you for the recognition of its potential, that's all i'd really ask for, its a work in progress, none of it is set in stone, any of it may be subject to change based on the feedback i'm receiving, I really want to learn from everyone has to say about it. I just hope more can understand that its not a finished product, its still being worked on, but thank you again for recognizing the spark that i'm still trying to blow into a fire.
Your P.S. makes me giggle because i've had to explain that several times now . Indeed it is a long intro, and i certainly recognize it has room for improvement, choices and sandboxy elements could be incorporated, more player agency and gameplay could be incorporated, and so on. Of course, it could also benefit from the addition of a real pause menu during the story intro instead of the checkpoints, but that's something i'd have to experiment with, a pause menu is easier to implement during the sandboxy part due to how rpgm functions.
For the next update (alpha 10) I'm thinking i might go all the way back to the start, redo the main menu scene, make some improvements to that, then the story intro and go from there.
The ultimate vision for the game is so much more than what you've seen so far, its gonna be huge, but i also want to be as deep as it is wide and the feedback is helping me to understand how to achieve that so thank you so much
 
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AndreaTheNord

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New hottest girl on f95?
Thank you! It'll eventually be the best game too, just going to take time and effort to fix all its issues and make all the improvements desired by those providing feedback. I won't stop working on it until its perfect. My response to all who are stating negative criticisms is that I am listening, I am learning, and I will do better. It's a work in progress, my first game project, and none of it is set in stone, whatever i have to change and improve to make it perfect, I will, and I'm grateful to hear its faults and blemishes being pointed out so that i may know what needs to be worked on.
 

AndreaTheNord

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Needs renpy!
The rpgm battle system is what enables me to create the waitress minigame. Obviously that minigame needs some work, its far from perfect, as many have pointed out, but I don't think its impossible for me to improve it and make it more fun, I'll eventually shift my focus back to that and make it better, and then later i'll add more job minigames once i understand how to make them more exciting. I'm not sure it that would be a possible function with renpy, i have no experience with renpy
 
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