Tomy75
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@TakMycket
You did a wonderful work with this VN. I had some doubts back when I played release 1.5 because I was afraid that it would end in something way too complicated with way too many paths, but with your walkthrough and the different allegiances seen in the game, I now find it somewhat clear how my different paths will be going forward.
But what strikes me the most are the quality of the renders and the writing. The facial expressions are just incredible, rarely seen anywhere else, you have the talent to perfectly illustrates a face going from one mood to another, and again, it’s something rarely seen anywhere else and highly appreciated because I guess it takes a shitload of work to render those. As for the writing, it’s a perfect balance, not too many words, not too little, and THANK GOD THERE IS NO F*CKING INTERNAL MONOLOGUE FOR ONCE! I also really enjoy the playful banters between the protagonists, I often smile or even laugh while reading them.
My only complaint is about your soft-core approach for the lewd scenes. I read the reasoning behind it (thanks Milton for the screenshot) but I disagree with it because, unlike the renders, the animations are of average quality and far from arousing, they feel somewhat bland, not immersive. Sorry to be so blunt but that’s my own opinion and that’s the only thing I'm not fond of in your AVN. Fortunately the story, renders and dialogues make it up for it.
PS: Lorelei is a goddamn beauty! I’ll keep her to myself, no other player is allowed to romance her
You did a wonderful work with this VN. I had some doubts back when I played release 1.5 because I was afraid that it would end in something way too complicated with way too many paths, but with your walkthrough and the different allegiances seen in the game, I now find it somewhat clear how my different paths will be going forward.
But what strikes me the most are the quality of the renders and the writing. The facial expressions are just incredible, rarely seen anywhere else, you have the talent to perfectly illustrates a face going from one mood to another, and again, it’s something rarely seen anywhere else and highly appreciated because I guess it takes a shitload of work to render those. As for the writing, it’s a perfect balance, not too many words, not too little, and THANK GOD THERE IS NO F*CKING INTERNAL MONOLOGUE FOR ONCE! I also really enjoy the playful banters between the protagonists, I often smile or even laugh while reading them.
My only complaint is about your soft-core approach for the lewd scenes. I read the reasoning behind it (thanks Milton for the screenshot) but I disagree with it because, unlike the renders, the animations are of average quality and far from arousing, they feel somewhat bland, not immersive. Sorry to be so blunt but that’s my own opinion and that’s the only thing I'm not fond of in your AVN. Fortunately the story, renders and dialogues make it up for it.
PS: Lorelei is a goddamn beauty! I’ll keep her to myself, no other player is allowed to romance her