He has been in all my games also, saying how much he didn't like this or that, but still playing updates to keep complaining... It wouldn't affect me if he just mantained like that, because the majority of things of what he says doesn't makes sense but... He actively does things to affect not only the dev but also the game itself...
Don't take it so personally. Devs should have thick skin... Our (players' or reviewers') comments are not always positive. But some of them at least try to help, me including.
I think it's still too early to review the game. In any case, it would be nice to see some changes / improvements in subsequent versions.
1) At this stage there are no choices / options; hope there will be some in the future. Maybe two separate perspectives (MP/FP)? I can imagine many choices and options, e.g. depending on the MC's actions, resulting in various pace of corruption. I think also about more or less uninhibited photos on the flyers (this in turn may depend on Tifa's financial situation or desperation that may result from previous decisions), relations with Barret, etc.
2) Please do not make the MP completely stupid and blind. If I see such guys, I feel no compassion, as they deserve what they get - is it really intended?
3) Some better motivation for the protags' behaviour would be nice. See point 1.
4) The text needs some proofreading. Examples: 'on the house' and not 'from the house'; 'there were photos', not 'there was photos', 'what do you mean by that' rather than 'with that', 'Mr Marvin' which is really unusual in this context, etc.
5) Please do something with the fonts on the page with preferences - to me they are illegible.
6) A slider for the textbox opacity would be useful (for my own use, I removed the textbox at all).
7) The art - this is a matter of taste, so I would only say that Tifa is not my dream girl (tits... and I don't mean that they are too small
) and that when I look at the renders of the bar, I understand why customers don't bang on doors and windows there. Empty shelves, and cozy as in a hospital common room...
Sorry for my remarks but they are made in good faith. I like the general idea and I see potential here; this is why I write this post. But of course, this is you game and your decisions.
All the best
HC