VN Ren'Py Abandoned Timeless Vendetta [v0.4.0] [ABUBA]

[Simpgor]

will there be a point where we can actually mind control people? I feel like using hipnosis to get what you want seems largely pointless as you usually get what you want with out it, most of the time its grayed out or is the fail choice.

good potential storyline, but the hypnosis gimmick need to provide something a little more fruitful.

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wow look at this guy able to separate games from real life what a fucking freak


I am the largely the same but I always play a "good" guy because in real life I cant help but to use everyone and everything to my own advantage.

I would argue that you can go after the boss for non vengeance reasons and instead for more """""justice""""" reasons even at this early point, after all he is in a position to hurt several people you care about and we know he is willing to lie cheat steal and degrade people (mostly women so far) that are below him (just his daughter mostly but rei is just as vulnerable to him as Hana was perhaps even more so since she isnt a part of the sketchy project).

before I left her because at the end of the day she chose to cheat on the MC regardless. But that wouldn't really make for an entertaining story.

as someone who is borderline asexual irl, and who unironically gets hyped up when a game has tracking for non "degenenerate" points I deeply undersantd the idea that a "perfect" to us in this genre would not sell well or likely work much at all

 

[Bse]

Well, let's take Hana out of the equation here for a moment. MC wants revenge on his boss for x reason. Let's say the MC is up for a promotion, but boss gives it to his wife or daughter or something. Then it happens again. We build the animosity towards this character naturally. Then we reach the peak - his nepo-hire fucks up, and they conspire to blame the MC and get him fired or demoted (so he still has access to the workplace). Now the MC has a reason for revenge, and he can do so by seducing all of the women in the boss' life. So we get a revenge story where the MC has an actual reason for wanting revenge, and we get the porn by way of netori of the boss's wife/daughter/friends/his boss/etc.

I mean, we could even keep Hana and just have her get fed up with the MC for failure after failure, or whatever reason, and leave him. If you've played Shalehill Secrets, the ex in that one didn't cheat, but she did hurt the MC. She does have a redemption path in that game, though. This way, Hana can be the bitch ex and still have a redemption path back with the MC that is not so divisive.

But now I'm just trying to write a story that isn't mine. So we'll see where this goes, but I'm just frustrated at the options to deal with Hana so far.


I'd definitely rather seduce than corrupt, which is the first run I've taken here, but that doesn't mean I won't play the corruption path afterwards.

So let me ask you one question. Did you even write the story before you start the game making?

 

[ryansFLYIN]

So let me ask you one question. Did you even write the story before you start the game making?

I'm not the dev.

 

[Hfap5]

There's a pointless fight in the comments lol. Luckily many of us like rei and Lili and the "demon", as long as a bastard doesn't touch them, there are no problems

Hana is used by another bastard, I'm just not interested in her, I'll use her for dirty jobs
If the blonde who's a damn is a virgin, I'm going to tame her, if not, I'll use her for dirty work

Revenge makes sense at first, but from what I see, there's a project in the company where the protagonist would be blamed. The hana thing is in the past, now you have to discover the secrets of the company and steal everything that the boss has, including his wife and daughter

I hope that more female relatives of the boss will appear, and if there are more bosses in the company who also wanted to cheat on the protagonist, his wife should be stolen

 

[Simpgor]

If the blonde who's a damn is a virgin, I'm going to tame her, if not, I'll use her for dirty work

If you use hypnosis/mind control that person is not being "tamed" because taming implies that you could fail. You dont say you tame a sex toy you've bought (i hope) and here you arent even spending resources so its less. Do you feel catharsis when you step on an ant in street?

 

[Bse]

I'm not the dev.

But you Know what i ask the dev or? nothing against you.

 

[ryansFLYIN]

But you Know what i ask the dev or? nothing against you.

He mentioned that he has future plans for Hana somewhere, so sounds like he knows where the story is going. Might not all be written, but most AVNs here aren't pre-written. If you check out other AVNs' chapter update logs, most of them have a progress bar for how much of the next chapter has been written.

 

[Mipecio]

Another promising game that I added to my collection. Good job so far, and I look forward to the next update!

 

[Hfap5]

If you use hypnosis/mind control that person is not being "tamed" because taming implies that you could fail. You dont say you tame a sex toy you've bought (i hope) and here you arent even spending resources so its less. Do you feel catharsis when you step on an ant in street?

Dude, there are many ways to use hypnosis, such as mental subversion or changing common sense. Hypnosis can be used to make your body more sensitive, in many ways

You could see the manhwa "panty note" "admin privileges" "Desire Realization App" "The Turning Point" "Body Bind"

 

[Hfap5]

I dont care how you use it the point is there is 0 challenge you will always succeed If you can fail with hypnosis then God is straight up killing your bloodline personally

No one is going to be able to get you out of the hole, I gave several examples and you keep thinking the same thing, nothing can be done
You'll have to have fun alone down there

 

[bobdillan]

Also gals aren't inherently promiscuous.

This needs to be blasted on a Megaphone around Japan...

For those that don't get the reference, that's how a lot of their politicians do their campaigns.

Like... even Marin, is shown in a lot of animations with the MC (goujo or however you spell it), to not be a virgin... despite her being one. (like I get it, blood requires more effort... but not even one bit of dialogue?).
Even a recent one where she is basically acting kinda like a virgin... but when it gets to it, acts experienced.

 

[bobdillan]

i like the model of the ex-gf almost tomboyish.

however not only does she cheat...but fuuuuuck again with the cheating backstory in a harem game. a formula that almost never works and especially never works in a honey select game.

but hey at least this one doesnt seem to be a rape victim.

on top of that you go back in time. so even if you could prevent with magic or whatever you still realize that she was gonna cheat if you didnt. honestly i would've preferred a story where she died and thats what lead to MC's suicidal end.

if that were the case we would really have a reason to keep her, no NTR feeling, and maybe an extra sex scene when MC realizes shes back and "celebrates" with her.

as for the revenge bit. honestly have the Boss frame mc for something and that alone will give him reason to seek revenge...if the boss being a P.O.S wasnt enough of a reason.

i can look forward to MC's balls dropping when he gets more used to his powers at best. cause right now he's meh.

but the intro as it is now... i don't know i think ima pass on this one. i like harem and mind control games great. but the whole cheating GF thing? yeah i'm out. if it changes i'll give it another shot. hopefully there's a mention in the changelog if not then i wish dev the best.

Hey... at least we get mild entertainment from yet another one shooting themselves in the foot...

Then wondering why the main demographic ain't biting.

p.s. not being a rape victim makes them a worse LI... cause at least they were loyal.

p.s.s. My brother in allah/christ/"the infinite nothingness after death", please, let's never hold out hope any of these MCs will have their balls drop.
A thousand years of global peace is more realistic.

Unless it is a game where either their balls already dropped, or their balls dropping is the premise of the prologue (LISC for example).

 

[wiseold6996]

This needs to be blasted on a Megaphone around Japan...

For those that don't get the reference, that's how a lot of their politicians do their campaigns.

Like... even Marin, is shown in a lot of animations with the MC (goujo or however you spell it), to not be a virgin... despite her being one. (like I get it, blood requires more effort... but not even one bit of dialogue?).
Even a recent one where she is basically acting kinda like a virgin... but when it gets to it, acts experienced.

Yup Gyaru is defined by fashion sense and not by being the town bicycle

 

[bobdillan]

Yup Gyaru is defined by fashion sense and not by being the town bicycle

Indeed.

It's like people think it is similar to Geisha. (which has been used for both the style and for paid town bicycle).

 

[ABUBUBABA]

I'm growing brain tumors trying to understand what the last 5 replies even mean, if anyone understand this shut in language please let me know, im out of the loop right now.

 

[lkdang2007]

Why You remind me of Anohana ? why bro?

 

[Simpgor]

I'm growing brain tumors trying to understand what the last 5 replies even mean, if anyone understand this shut in language please let me know, im out of the loop right now.

"I am deeply unsatisfied with life if I can't verbally abuse people not like me!!!1" is a rough translation

 

[GoblinLover01]

 

[ABUBUBABA]

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That's good, very creative sloth46.

 

[Paitryn]

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No thats just getting a different scene. I'm talking about moving the storyline forward via hypnosis. Right now it just unlocks alternate scenes. But Tessa is a prime example. You could try to use hypnosis and fail or just talk to her and succeed. Hypnosis is actually more difficult to do and largely a waste of time.

The whole point of hypnosis is that its a shortcut to get what you want. Why else manipulate someone's mind for no true gain?