LWtbo
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- Feb 11, 2018
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Oh my god do's timetravel destroy braincells? I mean in the first part I thought the MC was a few snadwiche's short of a picknic.
But in this one now the poorsod's now all kinds of stupid.
How the hell is he supossed to save his sister when being sent to almost the exact time and in to the right place.
Yet despite being told that two man where seen to abduct a blond woman by shoving her in a red car on that very day by a drunk who witnessed it yet on seeing the two men and a red car leaving the scene he still thinks she might be around and not in the trunk and his only real thought is were is the socalled old drunk witmess?.
Then he runs round town looking for his now missing abducted sister.
He figger's he should to talk to her partner in the beach house.
How he had the brains to think of that one who know's.
So he go's to talk to a teacher to aparently find this Woman and then spend first spend 10 minutes saying bye multiple time to the guy in the gym.
once he finds the teacher who may know were the patner is he spend another 10-15 completely distracted while having sexual thought's about the two teacher's in the teacher's lounge.
F-k me I'm glad his sister's life isn't linked to a timer. He is on what must be thee slowest most casual and aparently distracting abduction rescue attempt ever undertaken by man.
Truely hope by the time I reach the end of this update she gets rescued
because if not then,
God help his sister because with his brains someone's got too.
But in this one now the poorsod's now all kinds of stupid.
How the hell is he supossed to save his sister when being sent to almost the exact time and in to the right place.
Yet despite being told that two man where seen to abduct a blond woman by shoving her in a red car on that very day by a drunk who witnessed it yet on seeing the two men and a red car leaving the scene he still thinks she might be around and not in the trunk and his only real thought is were is the socalled old drunk witmess?.
Then he runs round town looking for his now missing abducted sister.
He figger's he should to talk to her partner in the beach house.
How he had the brains to think of that one who know's.
So he go's to talk to a teacher to aparently find this Woman and then spend first spend 10 minutes saying bye multiple time to the guy in the gym.
once he finds the teacher who may know were the patner is he spend another 10-15 completely distracted while having sexual thought's about the two teacher's in the teacher's lounge.
F-k me I'm glad his sister's life isn't linked to a timer. He is on what must be thee slowest most casual and aparently distracting abduction rescue attempt ever undertaken by man.
Truely hope by the time I reach the end of this update she gets rescued
because if not then,
God help his sister because with his brains someone's got too.
