The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.027...
Originally Reviewed on 01/04/2018
This VN/game has decent visuals, but that is about it... It does tease, once again, at including the overly used Family Sex stuff...
The visuals for the characters look like they came from a graphic novel, but done in high resolution 3D... They are cool looking, although the woman all have larger breasts than what their body frames would suggest... The backdrops all look very creative and unique... The user interface works a bit like it would in Ren'py, but I'm not entirely sure what engine this one uses...
The script has a bit of broken English now and then, but through most of it the English is alright... Probably just needs some more proofreading... The plot is a bit confusing, because the story plays out at a rapid pace, and doesn't always make sense... The overall plot, which you do not really discover until near the end of the current content, is that the male protagonists best friend has created a time machine, and claims that he needs help because he's messed stuff up for the protagonists life... Before you get to that part, the story has many moments when the immersion is tossed out the window...
One example is how when the best friends mother is being blackmailed and basically molested by the 2 primary villains... The way it plays out is so over the top... She apparently was fearful, yet seemed to be turn on by it... The protagonist and friend try to stop it, unsuccessfully, after which the villains continue their forcing the best friends mom to give the male villain a BJ, all while the protagonist and friend stand there unable to help... Then suddenly the opportunity for the protagonist to help occurs, as a bat magically appears in the protagonists possession and he beats down the male protagonist who limps off with the female villain... And after all that, what does the best friends mother do? OMG, she stands there smoking a cigarette, all nonchalant, as if nothing actually occurred... And when they go into her house, she begins rewarding the two would-be hero's... First by open mouth kissing the son as well as putting his head on her breasts (which by the way, her blouse seems to magically button up all the way and unbutton almost all the way several times during her scenes), and then goes to kiss the forehead of the protagonist, who moves to kiss her on the lips instead... And then she acts like it was all so innocent, as if it was all just normal...
It's crazy crap like that, just destroys the immersion... And that's not all, how about the protagonists sister who walks around the house with a completely see through shirt (no bra), and his mom that does the same thing... Or the perv down the street that is taking photos of his mom, out in the street, during the day, where everyone can see what he's doing... While his mom is masterbating in her bed, smoking a cigarette, with the bedroom drapes wide open, all while in front of her open laptop (apparently broadcasting it, although how would the protagonist know that from the pictures?)... There are so many things like that in this VN/Game... So many inconsistencies, over the top story telling/visuals, story holes, and so on...
Overall, even though the visuals were creative and unique, the rest of it screams B-Rated Porn Game... This VN/Game is early into it's development, but I can already tell how it's gonna pretty much play out... And I understand it is basically a sci-fi theme with time travel, but come on... No one acts like any of these characters... Maybe if everything about this game was a slapstick comedy, poking fun at it's own self, with lots of hilarious dialogue and so on, but it actually tries to play out primarily as a serious story, just with wall to wall erotica... I will definitely not be revisiting this one... Which is too bad, because the visual quality is awesome, but its a very poor execution...
Originally Reviewed on 01/04/2018
This VN/game has decent visuals, but that is about it... It does tease, once again, at including the overly used Family Sex stuff...
The visuals for the characters look like they came from a graphic novel, but done in high resolution 3D... They are cool looking, although the woman all have larger breasts than what their body frames would suggest... The backdrops all look very creative and unique... The user interface works a bit like it would in Ren'py, but I'm not entirely sure what engine this one uses...
The script has a bit of broken English now and then, but through most of it the English is alright... Probably just needs some more proofreading... The plot is a bit confusing, because the story plays out at a rapid pace, and doesn't always make sense... The overall plot, which you do not really discover until near the end of the current content, is that the male protagonists best friend has created a time machine, and claims that he needs help because he's messed stuff up for the protagonists life... Before you get to that part, the story has many moments when the immersion is tossed out the window...
One example is how when the best friends mother is being blackmailed and basically molested by the 2 primary villains... The way it plays out is so over the top... She apparently was fearful, yet seemed to be turn on by it... The protagonist and friend try to stop it, unsuccessfully, after which the villains continue their forcing the best friends mom to give the male villain a BJ, all while the protagonist and friend stand there unable to help... Then suddenly the opportunity for the protagonist to help occurs, as a bat magically appears in the protagonists possession and he beats down the male protagonist who limps off with the female villain... And after all that, what does the best friends mother do? OMG, she stands there smoking a cigarette, all nonchalant, as if nothing actually occurred... And when they go into her house, she begins rewarding the two would-be hero's... First by open mouth kissing the son as well as putting his head on her breasts (which by the way, her blouse seems to magically button up all the way and unbutton almost all the way several times during her scenes), and then goes to kiss the forehead of the protagonist, who moves to kiss her on the lips instead... And then she acts like it was all so innocent, as if it was all just normal...
It's crazy crap like that, just destroys the immersion... And that's not all, how about the protagonists sister who walks around the house with a completely see through shirt (no bra), and his mom that does the same thing... Or the perv down the street that is taking photos of his mom, out in the street, during the day, where everyone can see what he's doing... While his mom is masterbating in her bed, smoking a cigarette, with the bedroom drapes wide open, all while in front of her open laptop (apparently broadcasting it, although how would the protagonist know that from the pictures?)... There are so many things like that in this VN/Game... So many inconsistencies, over the top story telling/visuals, story holes, and so on...
Overall, even though the visuals were creative and unique, the rest of it screams B-Rated Porn Game... This VN/Game is early into it's development, but I can already tell how it's gonna pretty much play out... And I understand it is basically a sci-fi theme with time travel, but come on... No one acts like any of these characters... Maybe if everything about this game was a slapstick comedy, poking fun at it's own self, with lots of hilarious dialogue and so on, but it actually tries to play out primarily as a serious story, just with wall to wall erotica... I will definitely not be revisiting this one... Which is too bad, because the visual quality is awesome, but its a very poor execution...
