VN Ren'Py Abandoned Tinder [v0.3] [JRFalls]

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nobrumski

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Might want to dial back the light also. At least in the preview pics it looks like they have all the lights on and their own personal sun.
 
AdultKing

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Suggest increasing the render time there is lots of noise in the pictures for the rest great work :)
 
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nobrumski said:
Might want to dial back the light also. At least in the preview pics it looks like they have all the lights on and their own personal sun.
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The images where they are in the room it's just one light on the center of the roof and a sun outside the window, but for the pngs i put three distant lights from different angles.
 
Erik1986

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Nice models, especialy Aiko,but something about her calves seems off. Im guessing your trying to make her look fit, but for me it just seems a bit to angular, it would look better if it smoothed out better with the rest of the lower leg.
 
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Erik1986 said:
Nice models, especialy Aiko,but something about her calves seems off. Im guessing your trying to make her look fit, but for me it just seems a bit to angular, it would look better if it smoothed out better with the rest of the lower leg.
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Honestly I think it's just the angle because I didn't really mess with the legs but I will look out for that in future renders.
 
Heroine Hunter X

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JR Falls said:
They do? How so, and is that a bad thing?
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It's their eyes. They're all staring off into space in random directions and the one girl near the bottom is winking, but also looking to her right. I think the over all photo looks awkward because of it. I would suggest having some of them interacting with one another, or have them all looking at the camera to give more life to the shot. :)
 
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J.R.Grim said:
It's their eyes. They're all staring off into space in random directions and the one girl near the bottom is winking, but also looking to her right. I think the over all photo looks awkward because of it. I would suggest having some of them interacting with one another, or have them all looking at the camera to give more life to the shot. :)
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I'll try but I can't promise anything
 
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