Royarus

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Positives first. I quite like the changes. Videos are a good addition. Quality is good enough while remaining small. There's always going to be people who say the videos break immersion. Oh, it's a different guy fucking her every time. That's the main issue with real porn games. I definitely don't mind it as you would end up with only one or two scenes if you tried to keep the same guy in every scene. I guess POV is another avenue but then that would be limiting in other ways.

I won't go through the bugs that have been mentioned before. There is a bug with the gym. Works great if you want to cheat! The gym doesn't take your money. I'm also getting a bug "Error: cannot find a closing tag for HTML <i>" when trying to look at pictures of Noelle on my PC. There are also quite a few typos around but I don't know if you really want us nitpicking them all.

Now to the main gripe that I have about the current build. It's way too grindy to reduce your Faithfulness, and I can stomach a lot more grind than most people I think. Think back to when you were a teenager, watching a whole movie just for peek at a nipple. That's me now :p

You only get 1 point for peeking, sometimes zero (like when you spy on her when she is showering). Faithfulness then goes up when you cook for everyone, or help with the baby. Peeking should reduce it more and maybe faithfulness should only go up when you are in a situation where you are have to decide if you should stay loyal to your wife.

One example may be, Noelle is doing something where her cleavage is showing. You have the opportunity to look closer. If you look, it lowers your faithfulness, and depending on Noelle's relationship score, maybe she gets angry, maybe she lets you look, maybe she opens her blouse to let you look more etc... If on the other hand you want to remain loyal to Sarah, then you stop yourself and that's when your faithfulness would then go up.

If you really want to keep faithfulness increasing when you help Sarah, then you really need to increase how much you lose when peeking. You should also lose bit if you looking at Noelle's pictures on your computer and a lot if you jerk off to them. I'm guessing I still have a fair bit to go in the game so I don't know if things change but right now it's pretty painful reducing faithfulness.

All in all though, I like where this is heading. Keep up the good work.

Edit:

Ok, so I'm a tiny bit further along and your faithfulness does go up when you stop her from going further which is good. I still think it could be tweaked a little. I have noticed that I can repeatedly watch her masturbate outside but she gets angry when I watch her do it in the shower. She even gets angry after you masturbate together. I get she might not want you to watch her uninvited in the shower but I think she should be saying something in a different tone, perhaps more playful or something. She shouldn't be so angry anymore.
Hi! Thank you for your feedback!
I do appreciate it if you tell me any typo you find. Also thank you for reporting the bugs I'll look into them and fix them.
As for the faithfulness, I'm going to balance it / remove it.
You do make a good point about the bathroom peeking as well, I'll work on that as well.

7 days have passed since the cumslut scene but i still cant trigger the cheating scene. Am i missing something?
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Elpescador

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So no more creampie/ pregnancy drama? Or am I not getting it to fire for some reason? He always pulls out.
 
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Thank you for the feedback. Balance is indeed the factor that I'm the most unsure about. Can you tell me more specific which parts are the most out of balance? Is the relationship stats, money, the faithfulness or all the above?
It's not that it's out of balance, it just feels excessive. I played through it and I think I went for like 3 weeks and was bored because every day I just did the same actions in order to increase stats. No real scenes or story moments. Just stat grinding.
 

phlore101

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One other thing that I thought was a bit off. Pretty early in the game, Sarah and I hadn't really done anything yet then all of a sudden you start fucking her ass in the bathroom. Was this intended?
 

Royarus

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So no more creampie/ pregnancy drama? Or am I not getting it to fire for some reason? He always pulls out.
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It's not that it's out of balance, it just feels excessive. I played through it and I think I went for like 3 weeks and was bored because every day I just did the same actions in order to increase stats. No real scenes or story moments. Just stat grinding.
I agree, as I said earlier in the comments, I'm probably going to remove it since it has no function in the rebuild anymore.

One other thing that I thought was a bit off. Pretty early in the game, Sarah and I hadn't really done anything yet then all of a sudden you start fucking her ass in the bathroom. Was this intended?
Hi! Thank you for telling me. That was definitely not intended and after checking it, I see what I did wrong, this will be adjusted.

everynight sarah is on the sleeping pill i only used it once
Same problem
Thank you both for telling me, this will be fixed.

Does this rebuild have same amount of content as the original?
No not yet, better quality, but due to rewriting of the storyline some aspects will come later (see dev notes for more).
 

ayy

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I feel like some of the UI choices need to be modified. I understand its a Twine based game now so it can be a bit more difficult to fix it, but personally I preferred the previous QSP UI over Twine's. Feels less immersive now, but I guess since this is your first build these improvements are to be expected.

As for what you can tweak for now, perhaps changing the color palette on the location buttons would be a start? Font to be more readable etc.?

I too encountered the gym bug, as well as a bug in Noelle's questline where I can continue to advance her corruption, but for some reason can't get her to proceed with a kiss. If there is a condition that is needed to be filled prior to her doing this, a hard lock on the corruption stat until that condition is met would be more helpful than an infinitely high ceiling for points and corruption flavor text change with the "Talk" option.
 

d3xt3r

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Can't progress beyond spy event on noelle. Left dildo in her room. Watched her play with dildo in the shower. Is this it?
 

phlore101

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Can't progress beyond spy event on noelle. Left dildo in her room. Watched her play with dildo in the shower. Is this it?
You can do lots of things with Noelle. What's your Faithfulness stat? Do you have a camera yet? Have you tried approaching? her, Sorry I don't remember the exact wording for button but it's like a get closer (rather than look/kiss) to her button.
 

korko

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Reach Noelle 200,do camera thing. Stuck 200 no matter what i do cant pass 200,cant kiss him.There is no more content in this version?
 

phlore101

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Reach Noelle 200,do camera thing. Stuck 200 no matter what i do cant pass 200,cant kiss him.There is no more content in this version?
There definitely is. I think 200 is max relationship though. What is your faithfulness?
 

phlore101

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Faithfulness is at 83-95
You need to keep at it and don't do anything to help Sarah as it can increase your faithfulness. I would basically just scum save and try to look/peek/get closer to Noelle in every situation you can. Eventually I think you will run into Noelle drunk at night in the kitchen. I'm pretty sure it's easy after that point.

Dev is looking into faithfulness so it should be less painful in future.
 
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TgMaker

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You need to keep at it and don't do anything to help Sarah as it can increase your faithfulness. I would basically just scum save and try to look/peek/get closer to Noelle in every situation you can. Eventually I think you will run into Noelle drunk at night in the kitchen. I'm pretty sure it's easy after that point.

Dev is looking into faithfulness so it should be less painful in future.
Actually you have to find the party flyer on friday (so search the room than) or else the event won't trigger
 
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