Honestly it was a good start, however it does need some polishing. NO blue balls here on this end. I am not sure of what your experiance is in regards to tomboys, but it is not the female characters pro-trade in the demo. As they are more like sailors with there use of fowl language which is unbecoming of any kind of tomboy.
The tomboys I grew up with in Missouri had class, were well mannered, somewhat stubborn, held the strength of a bear mentally and physically, with an attitude of a bobcat, reflexes and speed of a cheetah, yet quietness like a church mouse, with loving genteelness of an otter and just as playful.
I feel honored that a developer used Missouri. I am humbled to see the areas I grew up in and around used in a game. With that said I thank you and if you don't mind, I respectfully offer my knowledge of my stomping grounds if you have need of them.
Finally and please remove the Cozmo bear. This was a good start although I am uncertain of you goals or layout of your idea but please We don't need another 23 sisters game. The one was bad enough. Well thanks for your time I look forward to your next release. Until then have a wonderful day.