It feels like every single piece of dialogue is a run on sentence. For example a random sentence from the game: "I must not be giving him what he truly desires am I such a horrible wife for not taking care of his needs", should be: "I must not be giving him what he truly desires. Am I such a horrible wife for not taking care of his needs?". Or "Issy whats up with that he never calls me that?" should be "Issy? What's up with that? He never calls me that." It's like a fifth grader wrote it. And that's not even mentioning how silly the actual story is... daughter kisses the dad and his response is to grab her ass? Yeah I get it aliens and whatever, but at least make it a tiny bit believable.