jinjonkun Cool idea for a game (made me return to your Patreon after a monthly break). I have few questions and comments:
1. the ballbusting job doesn't give you money, guess it's a bug since the other job works properly.
2. I assume you're planning it, but some scene could use sound effects (ballbusting being one of these).
3. would be cool if the scenes in jobs would have some context/dialogue options for additional immersion; I know that MC will be working a lot (similarly to Femdom City) so you can't have hundreds of such scenes, but having some scenes (maybe 1-2 short scenes with each update?) appearing from time to time would be imo a good idea.
4. I assume there's going to be a story, so are you planning giving the player a lots of choices, dialogue options etc. or is more linear and the player will mostly work, fight (I assume) and refuse some kinds of behaviors (like the futa)?
5. and speaking of choices, is there going to be some kind of system or relationship points or possible love interests, characters with whom you can form a deeper relationships?
6. and speaking of systems and points it could be a good idea (that you may have planned already) to add MC additional skills relfecting his submissive activities (I guess like Darktoz is doing, have to say your game is quite similar in some ways to Femdom City and Captured by Dark Elves), some kind of reputation system among cities and groups (like among Elves, in his town and so on).
7. It could be nice to have some random scenes or effects when MC is doing jobs on the farm or elsewhere, like sudden death of an animal, some kind of natural disaster destroying crops or weird client during the job (that can give additional money or you may leave without payment or even pay yourself depending on choices and/or circumstances).
8. I played only once for a short time (Day 10 atm) and I haven't seen the scene with the futa-elf, is it in the game or is my refusal to touch Amber locked out all futa content? If the 2nd is true I don't think it's a good idea. EDIT: I've replayed day 1 and I see that's probably a random scene from a job, so scratch that point. Although I'll mention that I believe that saying no to any scene should cut you out from any kind of content (not that you intended smth like that).
9. I also think it would be fun to have longer, more intense femdom scenes (I'm not speaking of violence now, but the general lenght and excitment they generate) with insights into MC's mind and how he succumbs in his submissiveness or smth similar (I guess slightly akin to what was done in Mistresses of the Forest).
10. I guess you're planning this, but I'll just mention that I believe various jobs should take various amounts of energy and give various amounts of money (ballbusting is imo more depleting [maybe depending on MC's skills] than being molested in the job [cool idea btw, would like to see it much more developed], and regarding ballbusting it would be nice imo if there would be an option to get a promotion and receive some good ol' beatdowns [mixed with some general verbal humiliation, spitting, etc. - just an idea that popped to my mind while writing this]).
All in all, I think the game has a lot of potential, as I said I like it already and I wish you all luck and hope it'll be a real femdom paradise.