Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[Ndbaelor]

That's a good idea. Next chapter should be a road trip to Chicago with Lester and Sarah where she tries to resist him throughout but gives in.

Two words : Glory hole.... Wait, is it one word?! Jk, though I would assume Lester at least bring it up during their trip. He would definitely try to make a possibly 2hr drive into longer than it needed.

Also remember, it will most probably be a two way trip so there a lot of possibilities (and positions) to explore! Maybe she a little hesitant at the first leg of the journey, but after a fight with dan opens up during their trip back to Middleton.I would personally like to see some fun dialogue/game between them during the drive, like truth or dare during the drive.

 

[Ndbaelor]

I don't know about the rest, but I was so looking forward to Jesse shiving Dan in the lobby of his workplace. Dan would have survived but how long in the hospital before Sarah finally got the message.

Yikes! If that happens, Dan has to move back to Middleton and is bedridden under the care of Sarah while she gets ridden in bed downstairs by Lester. A messed up version of 'Misery' if you will!

 

[Stestall]

I don't know about y'all but this is takin too long what is the point of this it was cool at first but now it's not making know since how he her boss now plus why do I they still have to stay with him if they got jobs this is stupid he need to end this shit and start something else if sara want to be wit Lester do it then he done fucked her since chapter 7 now it's chapter 27 dam

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Yikes! If that happens, Dan has to move back to Middleton and is bedridden under the care of Sarah while she gets ridden in bed downstairs by Lester. A messed up version of 'Misery' if you will!

Damn, I never thought of it like that...you are like a Stephen King of net porn.

 

[Kinggonta]

I don't know about y'all but this is takin too long what is the point of this it was cool at first but now it's not making know since how he her boss now plus why do I they still have to stay with him if they got jobs this is stupid he need to end this shit and start something else if sara want to be wit Lester do it then he done fucked her since chapter 7 now it's chapter 27 dam

Whatever it is . The author has created his characters so good that you really want to know what would their eventual fate

The sex scenes have been a hit or miss post chapter 18 but sarah's slow corruption keeps me hooked.

Silver really knows hows to introduce corruption of his female characters in his stories

 

[Em Lear]

I don't know about y'all but this is takin too long what is the point of this it was cool at first but now it's not making know since how he her boss now plus why do I they still have to stay with him if they got jobs this is stupid he need to end this shit and start something else if sara want to be wit Lester do it then he done fucked her since chapter 7 now it's chapter 27 dam

I agree, as interesting as it is. I stopped caring after chapter 11

 

[adamblack144]

I hope this story goes on for at least another 20 chapters. I enjoy it but think it could be better. When it does end, I hope he does a pre/sequel with the Lester character.

 

[powerconti]

Oh don't get me wrong, I agree TA has gotten messy - it's what I would call scope creep. The original intent was the 3 main characters just as you've eloquently pointed out - sharing/cuck/triangle (at least that's my belief based on the first 14 chapters) but it's morphed into a lot of side plots/characters that I think were intended to be narrative tools, but became clutter. However I can say I don't like it as a reader but understand the dilemma as a writer, even more so for one who has paying clients. Hence my comment about where do you find the balance between telling a good story and satisfying your paying audience.

Lack of credible character growth is something I couldn't agree more with. Lester has stayed true to his motivations, Sarah to an extent has been pretty consistent with her growth with the exception of her "reluctance". Which I think even DS would agree with, evidenced by Sarah's internal dialogue remarking on how she's had more sex over the last X months with Lester then she has had with Dan. I think ch28 on we will see her accept this truth, IMO it should have happened sooner but at least he's addressed it.

Dan is the one character that just defies logic. Up until ch6 I could see Dan living out his kink, by ch14 he should have said enough is enough and asked her to stop and/or make Sarah choose, beyond those chapters his motivations and behaviors have become unbelievable at best, and a bad joke at worst. He increasingly treats Sarah's actions as a cute and harmless eccentricity - like she keeps forgetting to turn down the right road to her house - instead of being outraged that she hasn't already stopped. Having said that I was having a convo with another forum member and it occurred to me that it's possible DS can't see himself as a cuck and therefore it's hard for him to write Dan's character. Ofc that's speculation on my part.

You make excellent arguments and I agree with most of them. I try to see the good in things and give people the benefit of the doubt vs. picking up a pitchfork and roasting DS. Because for all any of us knows by the time the final chapter is written, all these things we've discussed could make logical narrative sense, or at least that's my hope.

Similar, indeed almost identical considerations to mine. I have already expressed similar sentiments in earlier comments.
The author has (perhaps he felt pressurised by his ‘paying’ clientele!) made the main protagonist Dan more than just a joke,
he has turned him into a circus clown who is even made fun of by small children.
But there is a large clientele who enjoy super villainous, criminal and dirty Lester, jerk off and even find that super cool.

The story can no longer be described as fantasy, and is light years away from reality...

- PC

 

[Ndbaelor]

Tainted conception final is out FYI. If some one kind enough to update the kemono for the completion-ists out there that will be great!

 

[Ndbaelor]

Let me preface this by saying I am not a lawyer. How do y'all think the Jesse vs Dan will progress? I was thinking Dan will obviously file a restraining order against Jesse, but then thought he might need to show some proof that Jesse was stalking his family (besides the fact that Jesse trespasses to confront Dan) and this might involve Lester too for documentation. Meeting a lawyer and building the case might take most of the couple's time during the weekend. Jesse on the other hand have a much better case to file RO against Dan since he almost killed him.

I'm also interested in how this will affect Dan psychologically: will he be traumatized by it or gain a newfound confidence. Remember, last time he had satisfying sex was after kicking lester out of his house. Anyways, here's one of my earlier inspiration for Sarah:

 

[footywizard]

Tc 5 full version anybody ?

 

[Verisimilinude]

Let me preface this by saying I am not a lawyer. How do y'all think the Jesse vs Dan will progress? I was thinking Dan will obviously file a restraining order against Jesse, but then thought he might need to show some proof that Jesse was stalking his family (besides the fact that Jesse trespasses to confront Dan) and this might involve Lester too for documentation. Meeting a lawyer and building the case might take most of the couple's time during the weekend. Jesse on the other hand have a much better case to file RO against Dan since he almost killed him.

I'm also interested in how this will affect Dan psychologically: will he be traumatized by it or gain a newfound confidence. Remember, last time he had satisfying sex was after kicking Lester out of his house.

Based on Dan's character as written, he doesn't want any part of a lawsuit - the details that would come out in discovery and deposing witnesses would bare all of his sexual secrets - that isn't something he wants. It could be a narrative catalyst DS is using to show Dan waking up and finally taking his wife/life back, or the appearance of. Leading to his renewed effort to find Lizzie and other Lester targets. It could be the wake up call he needs to realize he's lost Sarah. The one thing DS can't do, imo, is leave Dan in neutral just accepting everything that happens around him.

 

[Gussetlicker]

Has ch27 been kindly posted on here yet?

 

[DarkStutzel]

I don't understand why DS revealed Dan's fears if he's not going to make Sara use them against him. In the final chapter he could make Sara's phone fight with him more heated. I would like to see the end of the marriage (if Dan uses the word pineapple and Sara , continue and the end of the marriage). Also bringing the information that one of the children woke up at night and thought it was their father and putting it in the fridge was also bad. I find it strange that Dan never calls the children (he has almost no contact with his children - it's okay that in the USA, people are very different to Brazilians). I think that the moment Sara thinks and calls her husband pathetic, the respect and love is gone (only Dan didn't notice), he has to start getting back on his feet financially. I would like Sara to humiliate him, for him to give the best response by moving on, finding a normal woman who isn't a size slut. (not every woman likes the size because it can hurt the cervix, among other things). Ideally, if Sara is left with nothing, if her attitude at work is leaked, it will cause her to lose her job and possibly even custody of her children, if Dan separates from her.

 

[DarkStutzel]

Hey guys and gals, I found this last night and really liked it. I look forward to future chapters which, I assume will belong less and less in the NC category, which I question it there now, in truth...much more of the Undiscovered Cucktry.

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This writer's stories are very good. I really like stories where people betray others, they are in the dark about the betrayal and when they find out it's the end. The story with slow corruption is also very good. Lisa's friend from work is taking slow corruption step by step. until the person transforms completely and moves towards the end.

 

[Kinggonta]

I asked Ai to write me an ending for toxic attraction .

This is what it came up with



Dan sat in the Chicago apartment, staring at the cracked ceiling, a half-empty beer sweating in his hand. Sarah was gone again—third night this week. Lester’s shadow loomed larger every day, his smug grin etched into Dan’s skull. It wasn’t just the sex anymore—Sarah on her knees for that slob, moaning louder than she ever had with him. It was the way she looked at Lester now, like he owned her, like Dan was just the guy who paid the rent.
He’d tried to stop it once, months back, after catching them on the couch, Lester’s fat fingers digging into her hips. Sarah didn’t even flinch—just turned and said, “You wanted this, Dan.” And he had, hadn’t he? That first night, watching through the door, hard as hell while Lester took her. But now it was different. She didn’t come home some nights. Her phone buzzed with texts he wasn’t allowed to see. Lester started leaving Polaroids around—Sarah sprawled out, lipstick smeared, eyes glassy—like trophies.
Tonight, Dan heard the key in the lock. Sarah stumbled in, reeking of whiskey and Lester’s cheap cologne, her blouse half-buttoned. “He’s waiting,” she muttered, not meeting his eyes. Dan followed her out, numb, to the parking lot where Lester leaned against his rusted van, smirking. “Told you she’d bring you,” he said, tossing Dan a blindfold. “Put it on. We’re taking a ride.”
They drove for hours, Sarah giggling in the front next to Lester, Dan in the back, blind, stomach churning. When the van stopped, he heard gravel, then a door creak. Hands yanked him out, shoved him forward. The blindfold came off—he was in a basement, dim and damp, surrounded by men he didn’t know, their eyes hungry. Sarah stood beside Lester, naked now, her wedding ring glinting as she lit a cigarette. “You’re the entertainment,” Lester said, clapping Dan’s shoulder. “She’s mine. You’re theirs.”
Dan didn’t fight when they grabbed him. Didn’t scream. Just stared at Sarah, her lips curling as the first stranger stepped forward. She exhaled smoke and turned away, clinging to Lester, while Dan’s world collapsed into grunts and darkness

 

[powerconti]

I asked Ai to write me an ending for toxic attraction .

This is what it came up with



Dan sat in the Chicago apartment, staring at the cracked ceiling, a half-empty beer sweating in his hand. Sarah was gone again—third night this week. Lester’s shadow loomed larger every day, his smug grin etched into Dan’s skull. It wasn’t just the sex anymore—Sarah on her knees for that slob, moaning louder than she ever had with him. It was the way she looked at Lester now, like he owned her, like Dan was just the guy who paid the rent.
He’d tried to stop it once, months back, after catching them on the couch, Lester’s fat fingers digging into her hips. Sarah didn’t even flinch—just turned and said, “You wanted this, Dan.” And he had, hadn’t he? That first night, watching through the door, hard as hell while Lester took her. But now it was different. She didn’t come home some nights. Her phone buzzed with texts he wasn’t allowed to see. Lester started leaving Polaroids around—Sarah sprawled out, lipstick smeared, eyes glassy—like trophies.
Tonight, Dan heard the key in the lock. Sarah stumbled in, reeking of whiskey and Lester’s cheap cologne, her blouse half-buttoned. “He’s waiting,” she muttered, not meeting his eyes. Dan followed her out, numb, to the parking lot where Lester leaned against his rusted van, smirking. “Told you she’d bring you,” he said, tossing Dan a blindfold. “Put it on. We’re taking a ride.”
They drove for hours, Sarah giggling in the front next to Lester, Dan in the back, blind, stomach churning. When the van stopped, he heard gravel, then a door creak. Hands yanked him out, shoved him forward. The blindfold came off—he was in a basement, dim and damp, surrounded by men he didn’t know, their eyes hungry. Sarah stood beside Lester, naked now, her wedding ring glinting as she lit a cigarette. “You’re the entertainment,” Lester said, clapping Dan’s shoulder. “She’s mine. You’re theirs.”
Dan didn’t fight when they grabbed him. Didn’t scream. Just stared at Sarah, her lips curling as the first stranger stepped forward. She exhaled smoke and turned away, clinging to Lester, while Dan’s world collapsed into grunts and darkness

I don't know who or what *Ai* is,
but one thing I know for sure is that he described himself as *Dan*.
So Ai (he, she, it) is a ‘nothing’ a moron !!!

 

[Dickdangerous]

Hey guys and gals, I found this last night and really liked it. I look forward to future chapters which, I assume will belong less and less in the NC category, which I question it there now, in truth...much more of the Undiscovered Cucktry.

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Just a heads up, the story is plagiarised. The original author is lucy54 on literotica, who wrote it over 15 years ago. The story is 3 chapters long (2nd chapter is even better) and there are a few other stories from him that are worth reading.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Based on Dan's character as written, he doesn't want any part of a lawsuit - the details that would come out in discovery and deposing witnesses would bare all of his sexual secrets - that isn't something he wants. It could be a narrative catalyst DS is using to show Dan waking up and finally taking his wife/life back, or the appearance of. Leading to his renewed effort to find Lizzie and other Lester targets. It could be the wake up call he needs to realize he's lost Sarah. The one thing DS can't do, imo, is leave Dan in neutral just accepting everything that happens around him.

I could, however, see Jessie having a no trespass order put against him by Howard and Dan's workplace, because they would need to do something about Jessie, if for no other reason than liability. If they did nothing and Jessie came back and hurt or killed someone that company would be sued in dizzying fashion by the victims and victims families.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Just a heads up, the story is plagiarised. The original author is lucy54 on literotica, who wrote it over 15 years ago. The story is 3 chapters long (2nd chapter is even better) and there are a few other stories from him that are worth reading.

I had no idea, did not mean any harm, just thought I saw a good story, did not know it was someone else's.