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[Em Lear]

It's showing chapter 3 on his Patreon.

Oh then kahwa78 might have it, or else no hopes

 

[Ndbaelor]

We made it to triple digits!!!!

 

[Verisimilinude]

Oh then kahwa78 might have it, or else no hopes

Well Congrats Em Lear - you are the lucky winner (My post doesn't count).

 

[King_Gonta]

I am a huge fan of this series and I don't think I'll even be around the time this ends so yeah I deserve to be here on this 100th post .


Plus I am actually waiting for one explosive chapter where Sarah goes all out on dan

 

[DarkStutzel]

Guys, who can help, by including materials from antarctica77, I opened this topic so I could talk about this artist who also has good writing, reminding me a little of Don Silver.

https://f95zone.to/threads/antarctica77-_-lisas-co-worker-cuckold.246106/

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Well, I still want to be on the page and not from a quote and keeping it to business, I do really hope that Sarah reacts in a non-supportive way if Dan gets fired. Tells him that she is trying to keep the family and the house going by herself now. Dan should have just swallowed his stupid male pride, knowing what was needed by his family financially. Dan gets upset and asks if that is all he is to her: a wallet and a check. She informs him that she has been out-earning him for 6 months, and that doesn't included paying his rent. It all goes off the rails from there with him saying he was going to stay in Chicago for awhile, he saying that's ok, I'll just get my support from the only person who has been supportive to her lately. Dan says, don't you say it. Sarah yells, Lester. Calls are ended, Dan sulks and pinches the bridge of his nose in a most feckless manor, and Sarah calls Lester and invites him over to spend the night fucking her in her bed. Lester for his part asks, Don't you mean your and Dan's bed? She says, no, MY bed. Then starts crying and says I need you Lester, now. The phone hangs up and Lester Oh Shits himself and we go from there.

 

[Em Lear]

Well Congrats Em Lear - you are the lucky winner (My post doesn't count).

I just realised I am using 100 posts per page lmfao. No wonder I was thinking what are y'all saying 100th Page and all that.

 

[Ndbaelor]

When Lester and Sarah were talking about Chicago boyfriend/fiancé/husband, I wished Lester brought up the time he banged her in her wedding dress (That was one of my favorite chapter).The whole thing had wedding vibe to it, with exchange of rings and screaming I Do and all that. Maybe Sarah even asks him did he steal her veil (that we last saw him using as his cum rag)

 

[adamblack144]

When Lester and Sarah were talking about Chicago boyfriend/fiancé/husband, I wished Lester brought up the time he banged her in her wedding dress (That was one of my favorite chapter).The whole thing had wedding vibe to it, with exchange of rings and screaming I Do and all that. Maybe Sarah even asks him did he steal her veil (that we last saw him using as his cum rag)

Yeah that was a great chapter. It's hilarious that Dan is protesting when he was letting that happen in their first few sex sessions

I hope they build on the theme and he takes over her marriage even more. Public PDA is the next step. Lester needs to convince Sarah to let him stay over at her house more often. More secrets kept from Dan. More intimate moments, more novel sexual experiences.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Yeah that was a great chapter. It's hilarious that Dan is protesting when he was letting that happen in their first few sex sessions

I hope they build on the theme and he takes over her marriage even more. Public PDA is the next step. Lester needs to convince Sarah to let him stay over at her house more often. More secrets kept from Dan. More intimate moments, more novel sexual experiences.

I'm looking forward to her going to Chicago with her Chicago husband and she travels with Lester because he has to go back to get something with his computers. Sarah goes with him for him, not even thinking about Dan. When they get to the apartment they come in the door making out and she tells Lester that she loves her Chicago husband, which Dan thinks is himself. They, however, ignore him, go into Lester's room, and lock the door. The entire weekend is spent in there, with Sarah screaming out about how much she loves getting fucked by her Chicago husband. Dan hears every word.

 

[adamblack144]

Dan needs to hear Sarah saying "I love you" to Lester again. He's very insecure and didn't believe Sarah when she said it was just sex talk.

That's a good idea. Next chapter should be a road trip to Chicago with Lester and Sarah where she tries to resist him throughout but gives in. Dan finds them fucking at the Chicago apartment. She promised him that she would take a break but their relationship has only escalated

 

[SlowCheetah]

Let me answer it this way. I've published one story so far, but I've got 5 others brewing in various states of written completion. The things I want to base my stories around are the motivations and rationale for why they do the wicked things they want to do. So I'm going to lean on that as the backbone of what I write. However I've got a secondary purpose that I have to write to as well - will the reader enjoy it enough to keep reading what I write. I have to weigh other factors as well; if I write about a cheating spouse I'm going to piss off the BTB Moral Brigade on one hand but please the fan base who gets turned on by cheating spouses. If I write a slow burn forbidden romance - I might please fans who want romance but piss off the fanbase that just wants to read hot sex scenes. How do you choose the right approach, who do you cater to? Can you find a balance?

I've given my fair share of criticism for DS's handling of TA, but one thing I think he mostly gets right is he tries to be balanced for his reader's enjoyment. I could care less about the other NPC men in Sarah's life, but as this forum's members have stated they want that. I like stories that are grounded in realism, but again there are readers who think it's fluff (Even I will admit he provides too much background). You and others want post sex dialogue/exploration - if you asked I'm sure you'll find there are readers who think it's word count better devoted to more sex scenes. Point being is that, IMO, DS at least tries to be balanced by giving everyone a little bit of what they want.

Very insightful analysis!

 

[Verisimilinude]

Very insightful analysis!

Thank you for the kind words, my attempt at providing perspective.

 

[UrMomEzMine]

Jesse officially stole from Byron the "Worst and most boring character" award, it's so sad that he will continue to show up with his new obsession. If DS really want a Dark history like people said here, next chapter he finds Sarah, she dumps him and he kills himself.
DS opened so many interesting doors for nothing (Lizzie/ blackmailed landlord/ Dan's humilliation during sex/ anal with Lester), and now he can just put Lester and Sarah together in a room (Hotel/house/work) and have them have sex until he cums in her pussy. They are literally fucking almost every day, and ter another chapter with nothing relevant between them. Lester wants degrade her but dont go for anal, cum in mouth, make her call Dan while riding him, maybe a drop of BDSM, etc.
And my bet for Lester's ending is the secret Company he hacked tracks him down and make him disappear.

 

[swewx]

When Lester and Sarah were talking about Chicago boyfriend/fiancé/husband, I wished Lester brought up the time he banged her in her wedding dress (That was one of my favorite chapter).The whole thing had wedding vibe to it, with exchange of rings and screaming I Do and all that. Maybe Sarah even asks him did he steal her veil (that we last saw him using as his cum rag)

I agree with you. That chapter was one of the good ones. It opened so many possibilities but, DS ignored them as he's been doing regularly due to his cheerleaders requests at Patreon. Now the story is boring as hell. There are still good sex scenes but even this is getting as predictable and unappealing as watching 27 VCR porn movies with the same porn stars. Please, don't forget to rewind.
But the money is still flowing in..... lol

 

[swewx]

Let me answer it this way. I've published one story so far, but I've got 5 others brewing in various states of written completion. The things I want to base my stories around are the motivations and rationale for why they do the wicked things they want to do. So I'm going to lean on that as the backbone of what I write. However I've got a secondary purpose that I have to write to as well - will the reader enjoy it enough to keep reading what I write. I have to weigh other factors as well; if I write about a cheating spouse I'm going to piss off the BTB Moral Brigade on one hand but please the fan base who gets turned on by cheating spouses. If I write a slow burn forbidden romance - I might please fans who want romance but piss off the fanbase that just wants to read hot sex scenes. How do you choose the right approach, who do you cater to? Can you find a balance?

I've given my fair share of criticism for DS's handling of TA, but one thing I think he mostly gets right is he tries to be balanced for his reader's enjoyment. I could care less about the other NPC men in Sarah's life, but as this forum's members have stated they want that. I like stories that are grounded in realism, but again there are readers who think it's fluff (Even I will admit he provides too much background). You and others want post sex dialogue/exploration - if you asked I'm sure you'll find there are readers who think it's word count better devoted to more sex scenes. Point being is that, IMO, DS at least tries to be balanced by giving everyone a little bit of what they want.

I understand your point of view.
But, I think what most people who criticize DS, for one reason or another, are unsatisfied with the change in the charachters behaviour with no plausible explanation at all. Too many characters involved, too many repetitive sex scenes.
What got the attention of so many readers was the innovative way DS showed the development of a couple monogamous relationship into a cuckold relationship and the invevitable triangle relationship with the wife learning more and more about her own sexuality. That was the catch!
I don't believe so many people think the story is bad.
I believe they are disappointed with the development of the story.
DS can do whatever he wants with the story. It's his story and he's being paid to do that.
However, for those who want a good plot with well written sex scenes DS wasted a good opportunity to make it big.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I understand your point of view.
But, I think what most people who criticize DS, for one reason or another, are unsatisfied with the change in the characters behavior with no plausible explanation at all. Too many characters involved, too many repetitive sex scenes.
What got the attention of so many readers was the innovative way DS showed the development of a couple monogamous relationship into a cuckold relationship and the inevitable triangle relationship with the wife learning more and more about her own sexuality. That was the catch!
I don't believe so many people think the story is bad.
I believe they are disappointed with the development of the story.
DS can do whatever he wants with the story. It's his story and he's being paid to do that.
However, for those who want a good plot with well written sex scenes it's a waste of a good chance.

Oh don't get me wrong, I agree TA has gotten messy - it's what I would call scope creep. The original intent was the 3 main characters just as you've eloquently pointed out - sharing/cuck/triangle (at least that's my belief based on the first 14 chapters) but it's morphed into a lot of side plots/characters that I think were intended to be narrative tools, but became clutter. However I can say I don't like it as a reader but understand the dilemma as a writer, even more so for one who has paying clients. Hence my comment about where do you find the balance between telling a good story and satisfying your paying audience.

Lack of credible character growth is something I couldn't agree more with. Lester has stayed true to his motivations, Sarah to an extent has been pretty consistent with her growth with the exception of her "reluctance". Which I think even DS would agree with, evidenced by Sarah's internal dialogue remarking on how she's had more sex over the last X months with Lester then she has had with Dan. I think ch28 on we will see her accept this truth, IMO it should have happened sooner but at least he's addressed it.

Dan is the one character that just defies logic. Up until ch6 I could see Dan living out his kink, by ch14 he should have said enough is enough and asked her to stop and/or make Sarah choose, beyond those chapters his motivations and behaviors have become unbelievable at best, and a bad joke at worst. He increasingly treats Sarah's actions as a cute and harmless eccentricity - like she keeps forgetting to turn down the right road to her house - instead of being outraged that she hasn't already stopped. Having said that I was having a convo with another forum member and it occurred to me that it's possible DS can't see himself as a cuck and therefore it's hard for him to write Dan's character. Ofc that's speculation on my part.

You make excellent arguments and I agree with most of them. I try to see the good in things and give people the benefit of the doubt vs. picking up a pitchfork and roasting DS. Because for all any of us knows by the time the final chapter is written, all these things we've discussed could make logical narrative sense, or at least that's my hope.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Jesse officially stole from Byron the "Worst and most boring character" award, it's so sad that he will continue to show up with his new obsession. If DS really want a Dark history like people said here, next chapter he finds Sarah, she dumps him and he kills himself.
DS opened so many interesting doors for nothing (Lizzie/ blackmailed landlord/ Dan's humilliation during sex/ anal with Lester), and now he can just put Lester and Sarah together in a room (Hotel/house/work) and have them have sex until he cums in her pussy. They are literally fucking almost every day, and ter another chapter with nothing relevant between them. Lester wants degrade her but dont go for anal, cum in mouth, make her call Dan while riding him, maybe a drop of BDSM, etc.
And my bet for Lester's ending is the secret Company he hacked tracks him down and make him disappear.

I don't know about the rest, but I was so looking forward to Jesse shiving Dan in the lobby of his workplace. Dan would have survived but how long in the hospital before Sarah finally got the message.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Hey guys and gals, I found this last night and really liked it. I look forward to future chapters which, I assume will belong less and less in the NC category, which I question it there now, in truth...much more of the Undiscovered Cucktry.

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[Ndbaelor]

That's a good idea. Next chapter should be a road trip to Chicago with Lester and Sarah where she tries to resist him throughout but gives in.

Two words : Glory hole.... Wait, is it one word?! Jk, though I would assume Lester at least bring it up during their trip. He would definitely try to make a possibly 2hr drive into longer than it needed.

Also remember, it will most probably be a two way trip so there a lot of possibilities (and positions) to explore! Maybe she a little hesitant at the first leg of the journey, but after a fight with dan opens up during their trip back to Middleton.I would personally like to see some fun dialogue/game between them during the drive, like truth or dare during the drive.