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Not my place to say, but it's a work thing is what I meant - not always in a place with a good connection.
actually he has said on the board that he travels for work and on any given day can be in any area of the country. I was looking at it, hating the $35 fee but then I took my car in for a simple brake job and left paying $800, so unfortunately $35 becomes a little issue for my budget. I started with Don over on Avid's page and was close with him when he set everything up on Patreon so he could offer a regularly timed, reliable story because we loved Avid's story but hated his unreliability and refusal to tell anyone what was happening. Don went in, though, seeing the models they offered and he sat and figured out a business model that could work for him, where he would rake in some good cash, while not screwing over fans. You only know if you were there but Avid was taking in hand over fist money and not giving anything. We figured at one point that he was making somewhere in the area of $75,000 a year on his story on Patreon and rarely giving anything for it and since he was first, people hung on and kept paying for months, waiting for anything, while others were getting more and more angry.
Don's business model made him some good scratch but prices started getting higher on everyone's writing on Patreon, including Don (I know I was a regular subscriber and I never paid $35 a month). Patreon is now getting rid of that particular model so who knows what that will do with the cost.
Some of us, I am pretty sure that Chillie and I were among the first were given the address for his site, one other, and the site which catalogues the stories (sorry, short term memory of a gnat, gnat I tell ya). I had no idea who this was, never talked to anyone about not getting the stories any more so no one should have known but this person was kind of like a Robin Hood character, taking stories and giving them to people who could not afford to continue paying. (People started postulating that Don is the person who did it and when I think about it, I would not doubt that at all, as he was receiving some pretty good ideas from some of us and when we couldn't keep up with Patreon, we were no longer a part of his process, so it could very well be that Don set this up secretly to see what some of us were saying about his writing, without seeming like he was handing out a system to allow some readers to get the story on the cheap, while he charged others for it. Different people have paid over the past year or so (2 years, maybe? I don't know, like I said short term memory = gnat) and Chillie had decided to take over some months back. I wish I could pay that back and will someday removed from almost $1000 car repairs, but Chillie, long, long story made short, Glad I have known for a lot of this and thanks for picking up the tab lately, you are appreciated.
Just finished the Alpha. As usual, I'll save the final verdict for the final version. But I gotta say, this is a significant improvement from last alpha. Seems like Don (and his elves) have listened to all the criticisms and took some good notes. Loved the first sex scene and the sexting scene was also pretty good (for me atleast). Also loved the whole build up to Lester hotel and the dialogue at the room . That's what we've all been asking: put these characters alone in different situations, that's where the magic is.
The phone call between Dan and Sarah could've been better. It's still not ckear if and when Dan knew Lester is her boss. We all predicted Jesse rampage, I wasn't expecting it to come this fast. That's one part I feel was rushed and raised a lot of questions. Overall a good job.
The phone call between Dan and Sarah could've been better. It's still not ckear if and when Dan knew Lester is her boss. We all predicted Jesse rampage, I wasn't expecting it to come this fast. That's one part I feel was rushed and raised a lot of questions. Overall a good job.
Two out of three predictions came true !
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Good chapter. Sets up the next one really well. They'll have to discuss that final exchange. That's not one that can be ignored and she immediately thinks about it to herself . Weird he replaced their usual kissing in the sex scene with his finger in her mouth. I didn't find that appealing at all.
Jesse and Dan scene was hilarious to read. Love that he got exposed in front of his coworkers.
Jesse and Dan scene was hilarious to read. Love that he got exposed in front of his coworkers.
Prediction for next chapters: Based on Lester and Sarah mentioning Chicago trip at separate occasions, we might be getting a road trip chapter in the near future (unless Don makes and major changes)
About Jesse VS Dan: Dan already got a public disturbance in his record, will aggravated assault also be added, or will he be let go based on self defense? Also l think the timeline need to be tuned up a bit- Dan gets a call from Sarah, then confronted by Jesse, punches him, and it cuts to Sarah alone in her house unbothered?! I don't know, if I punched someone, my next step will be calling my partner about it. Either Don might add a scene where we get that phone call or switch it up a bit - Dan confronted by Jesse, punches him, let go by cops, THEN gets a call from Sarah. Now they both have something to hide, Sarah about Lester's visit and Dan about the assault.
About Jesse VS Dan: Dan already got a public disturbance in his record, will aggravated assault also be added, or will he be let go based on self defense? Also l think the timeline need to be tuned up a bit- Dan gets a call from Sarah, then confronted by Jesse, punches him, and it cuts to Sarah alone in her house unbothered?! I don't know, if I punched someone, my next step will be calling my partner about it. Either Don might add a scene where we get that phone call or switch it up a bit - Dan confronted by Jesse, punches him, let go by cops, THEN gets a call from Sarah. Now they both have something to hide, Sarah about Lester's visit and Dan about the assault.
Hey,
Does anyone have the new chapters for Antarctica77 "My Neighbor"?
Also, has anyone got Chapter 7 for VZB "Corruption of the Greek Goddess"?
Does anyone have the new chapters for Antarctica77 "My Neighbor"?
Also, has anyone got Chapter 7 for VZB "Corruption of the Greek Goddess"?
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I don't know, I see it differently. The purpose of that phone call was to show Dan wanted things to stop and Sarah actively recognizing that she was growing, learning things about herself and that she didn't want it to stop. Supported by her calling him the second time and getting VM twice, when she said they hadn't really finished the conversation. The fight scene I think happened while she was trying to call him, hence the timeline is fine. But you're idea that now Dan has a secret, will be telling - if he shares it with Sarah in the next chapter.
At this stage the whole Sarah/Dan dynamic - it's getting hard to suspend disbelief. Its bordering on comical that Dan would still be standing by believing that this was a sharing fantasy. Too much has occurred without him for him to still be conflicted. He should be confronting her and saying "I don't like this anymore and I'm asking you to stop." Not that Dan has any ownership over her actions, their married - she isn't his property. But anyway - I'd be fine if DS, just wrote him out of the script moving forward or only talk about him in passing. Dan served his narrative purpose and now is just fluff taking up valuable space that could be devoted to showing Sarah's descent into corruption.
Agreed. Unless Dan actually finds Lizzie I find myself wanting the story to be exclusively about Lester and Sarah's adventures and her change in feelings. Lizzie being reintroduced would add a lot to the story. It seems like Dan is just filling up space with the Dan/Jesse stuff. Get her back in the story and give Dan something to work with. Or just leave him out
Now, if only Walt would fire him, starting a domino effect of terminations.
I still want him to find Lizzie but then Sarah comes to visit him and Lester has arranged for Lizzie to seduce Dan and Sarah walks in in middle of it.
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I'd be open to that, just for the change of pace, but more deviously, I'm curious to see if they catch Dan fucking a pregnant Lizzie. Did Lester do the deed from the last time he blackmailed her or is it Issac's?
If DS is going to make a chapter out of every fuck, this story may exceed 100.
I still don't get why DS is obsessed with cutting away as soon as the sex ends. I don't care about Sarah dodging Otis, I don't care about her coworker finding Cheetos stains on her uniform. Why not spend those paragraphs with them riding back to work together? There was no kissing in this chapter, make Lester demand a kiss before she leaves the car. Make her thank him for the sex. Why the immediate cut as soon as they both cum?
I liked this chapter a lot but this is a serious flaw in his writing.
I liked this chapter a lot but this is a serious flaw in his writing.
Money, money, money...lol
Like lawyers use to avoid solving their clients problems and keep going on as long as they are able to.
If they not, the money stops flowing in.
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