Fokker1917
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- Mar 14, 2023
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I enjoyed the chapter, though it felt brief. I like Otis's role and would love to see Sarah descend further into depravity. However, introducing the parents feels like a tactic by Don to unnecessarily pad the story. What could have been a slow but satisfying conclusion now risks dragging on into a 4,000-chapter sprawl where Lester gets involved with the mom, the grandmother, my mom, and so on. I love the story, but this is my gripe.