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[Fokker1917]

I enjoyed the chapter, though it felt brief. I like Otis's role and would love to see Sarah descend further into depravity. However, introducing the parents feels like a tactic by Don to unnecessarily pad the story. What could have been a slow but satisfying conclusion now risks dragging on into a 4,000-chapter sprawl where Lester gets involved with the mom, the grandmother, my mom, and so on. I love the story, but this is my gripe.

 

[berylflame]

Needs to be written first.

It was...

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Happy Father's Day! Sorry, this one took a little longer to get out than I'd hoped. I was really trying to get it out before the weekend. A...

 

[TeamEquipe]

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[Insider] Executive Privilege Ch. 07
5 days ago
Happy Father's Day! Sorry, this one took a little longer to get out than I'd hoped. I was really trying to get it out before the weekend. A...

My bad, I'm a subscriber and it didn't show up on my feed for some reason.
Anyway, I've just clicked on some tab other than the "Home" page and I see the post you refer to.

 

[DarkStutzel]

For any LapisLit fan here, just saw his works are now on Kemono.

The Rent Agreement is mid-burn pace imo. Not a fan of the ending but the journey was spicy enough. Some suspension of belief needed but the language is very easy reading. Give it a go while waiting. I discovered him cause he used to be under Don's favorites in Literotica.

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Thanks for the suggestion. I liked the idea, something simple, the man didn't want the woman either, let's be honest. I play video games when my wife doesn't want sex. If it were up to me, I'd take the time off in the bedroom and have lots of sex.

 

[berylflame]

I enjoyed the chapter, though it felt brief. I like Otis's role and would love to see Sarah descend further into depravity. However, introducing the parents feels like a tactic by Don to unnecessarily pad the story. What could have been a slow but satisfying conclusion now risks dragging on into a 4,000-chapter sprawl where Lester gets involved with the mom, the grandmother, my mom, and so on. I love the story, but this is my gripe.

!SPOILER WARNING!

Yeah. It made sense to use Otis in this regard as that will discard him as a character in the future. What I would've wanted more of was:

1) Sarah purposefully thinking of being a bad girl vs good girl as she gets it on with Otis. The jump from her fuming to getting it on with Otis was a bit jarring a transition.

2) More viceral description of Otis one final time. This will tie nicely with Sarah's original kink of doing someone beneath her, and the final humiliation of being caught. The contrast of miss prim and proper, the one that would have been CEO vs Otis the janitor. That would make for a more descriptive downward spiral -- how the mighty have fallen situation. As it was the theme all along with Mary and Sarah's meeting.