Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[adamblack144]

Id love to see Lester have a conversation with her rather than just fall asleep as soon as they fuck or leave. Make her admit he's better than her husband and demand more time with her. Demand more dates and make her act like his gf (not just sexual but affectionate) in public and in front of Dan. For example, he should say "I want a sloppy kiss everytime we see each other, regardless of who can see"

Id also love to see a jealousy chapter where Liz comes back and he uses her to increase the attachment between himself and Sarah. She sees him as an ugly loser now, but if Liz was back, she'd see her has options.

 

[D2taA]

DS started out with different view with his concept and his approach on how to got the dialogue on each characters emotions and inner fears. It felt different ( stupid as it sounds). But now he's turned it to the same run in ta mill trash story. One of thousands that are all over the place. Now its just about some poor sap stuck in the fantasy in super cuckland.

 

[Oresttitos]

it is hard to imagine that in real life a mother would bet on her lover more than on her children, except to run away with him, I agree. But to disgrace one's family and most importantly to break the life of children... is fantastic

 

[Biggjay]

it is hard to imagine that in real life a mother would bet on her lover more than on her children, except to run away with him, I agree. But to disgrace one's family and most importantly to break the life of children... is fantastic

It's called an "addiction", Lester is gradually getting her hooked. Just ask any addict you may come across and you will amazed what they are willing to give up, to get their 'fix'

 

[Oresttitos]

It's called an "addiction", Lester is gradually getting her hooked. Just ask any addict you may come across and you will amazed what they are willing to give up, to get their 'fix'

Drug addiction is a disease, sex addiction too? An educated woman who has achieved a certain success in life would commit such an act, I have doubts that she is so openly ignoring society and maternal instinct. IMHO

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Drug addiction is a disease, sex addiction too? An educated woman who has achieved a certain success in life would commit such an act, I have doubts that she is so openly ignoring society and maternal instinct. IMHO

Sex addiction is very much a full fledged addiction. There was a filmmaker, Caveh Zahedi, who made a film titled I Am A Sex Addict. In it, he descibes how his entire life fell apart, including familial relationships due to this addiction that he seemingly could not stop, as it controlled him. Really powerful film.

 

[Wife is Hot]

In Don’s defense he is accommodating requests from members to add variety and not just Lester. Interjecting other players is fine but there should be a distinction between Lester, Dan and the others. Lust, passion and submission belongs to Lester. Dan is love, passion and security. The others are merely props. Byron didn’t deserve her submission. Lester worked so much to achieve that. There is always something special with Lester.. Oh yeah his huge cock. So far this is what made Sarah submit and her slow decline to full submission is becoming more evident. Their connection is undeniable and I wouldn’t be surprised if she eventually falls for him not just physically but emotionally as well.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

In Don’s defense he is accommodating requests from members to add variety and not just Lester. Interjecting other players is fine but there should be a distinction between Lester, Dan and the others. Lust, passion and submission belongs to Lester. Dan is love, passion and security. The others are merely props. Byron didn’t deserve her submission. Lester worked so much to achieve that. There is always something special with Lester.. Oh yeah his huge cock. So far this is what made Sarah submit and her slow decline to full submission is becoming more evident. Their connection is undeniable and I wouldn’t be surprised if she eventually falls for him not just physically but emotionally as well.

There is no denying Sarah and Lester have a connection beyond just the sex to one another. I feel it will go beyond sex eventually. I remembered Sarah commenting on their attraction as toxic early in their relationship. We see the small steps recently as Sarah picked certain lingerie for Lester after being texted he was coming to the hospital.. After Byron and after the hospital sex scene all her thoughts were about Lester. I would love to see Sarah initiate the intimacy with Lester and finally admit her true feelings.

Lester makes good use of his big cock but big brain as well. You see the manipulation by how he tells Sarah to repeat the words “I love you” while debasing Dan at the same time during sex. Currently she only chooses Lester while in the heat of passion, as this story plays out I would like see how her decision evolves between choosing family or Lester. Especially when she is not under the influence of Lester’s cock

 

[Chillie_Willie]

it is hard to imagine that in real life a mother would bet on her lover more than on her children, except to run away with him, I agree. But to disgrace one's family and most importantly to break the life of children... is fantastic

I thought it was interesting tidbit Don put in there when Sarah commented to Dan that her parents would love having the kids full time. I wonder if Don is foreshadowing where the kids might end up eventually.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

All I have to say is that the next hurricane to possibly hit us here in Florida, possibly next week will be named Hurricane SARAH!!! However, I doubt that it will blow or suck in the same way Lester's Sarah does.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

I agree with D2taA,
And not even in a negative way - there are some genuinely interesting concepts being pitched here.I t'd be great to see more stories in this genre cropping up on Literotica and elsewhere.
Hell, DonSilver only started his writing after reading the Neighbor Chronicles series by AvidReaderNoviceWriter and getting inspired.
If any of you are willing to put yourselves out there enough to write something and post it online, I'll be your first five star review.

I suggest a lot of ideas, but story writer I’m no. I give Don all the accolades because dedicating yourself to write a chapter each month is not only time consuming, but mentally exhausting. He has been doing it longer than I would have imagined. There are a ton of Literotica authors I follow, however, they pen a few chapters and then suddenly disappear for whatever reason. Maybe they may return, but generally you are left disappointed never know the story might end. As long as Don churns out monthly chapters of Toxic Attraction and I see the trifecta’s (Sarah Lester and Dan) relationship and storyline progress I’m content.

 

[Wife is Hot]

I suggest a lot of ideas, but story writer I’m no. I give Don all the accolades because dedicating yourself to write a chapter each month is not only time consuming, but mentally exhausting. He has been doing it longer than I would have imagined. There are a ton of Literotica authors I follow, however, they pen a few chapters and then suddenly disappear for whatever reason. Maybe they may return, but generally you are left disappointed never know the story might end. As long as Don churns out monthly chapters of Toxic Attraction and I see the trifecta’s (Sarah Lester and Dan) relationship and storyline progress I’m content.

One truly gifted author on Lit is j267. He suddenly disappeared. I read in a forum similar to this that he has passed away. I hope that is not true.

 

[adamblack144]

In Don’s defense he is accommodating requests from members to add variety and not just Lester. Interjecting other players is fine but there should be a distinction between Lester, Dan and the others. Lust, passion and submission belongs to Lester. Dan is love, passion and security. The others are merely props. Byron didn’t deserve her submission. Lester worked so much to achieve that. There is always something special with Lester.. Oh yeah his huge cock. So far this is what made Sarah submit and her slow decline to full submission is becoming more evident. Their connection is undeniable and I wouldn’t be surprised if she eventually falls for him not just physically but emotionally as well.

Yeah I didn't like this. Lester had to work to fuck her unprotected and Byron got it the first time they met? Why was she so submissive to him? A guy like that is happy at any attention you give him, she didn't have to do all that

 

[Oresttitos]

There is no denying Sarah and Lester have a connection beyond just the sex to one another. I feel it will go beyond sex eventually. I remembered Sarah commenting on their attraction as toxic early in their relationship. We see the small steps recently as Sarah picked certain lingerie for Lester after being texted he was coming to the hospital.. After Byron and after the hospital sex scene all her thoughts were about Lester. I would love to see Sarah initiate the intimacy with Lester and finally admit her true feelings.

Lester makes good use of his big cock but big brain as well. You see the manipulation by how he tells Sarah to repeat the words “I love you” while debasing Dan at the same time during sex. Currently she only chooses Lester while in the heat of passion, as this story plays out I would like see how her decision evolves between choosing family or Lester. Especially when she is not under the influence of Lester’s cock

As real life shows, relationships built on manipulation, lies, and humiliation cannot be happy in principle, unless they lead to NTR or prostitution, which is completely fine with Lester. In this case, it has nothing to do with the word Love, it is a manipulation of feelings.

 

[Dougy60]

Hey everyone let me start with love this group of readers and some writers. FYI I just saw on Don's Patreon TA23 is out, Neighborhood Encounters Chapter 3 Alpha, Destestable Liaisons Chapter 5 Alpha Draft and one I don't know about; Tainted Conception: Chapter 4. Does anyone know anything about TC this last one?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Yeah I didn't like this. Lester had to work to fuck her unprotected and Byron got it the first time they met? Why was she so submissive to him? A guy like that is happy at any attention you give him, she didn't have to do all that

I remembered her conversation with Dan she was on an espionage mission and she had to flirt with a Byron to gain access to his office so she can plant the USB. Once she realized there was no chnace to plant the virus she was cornered and had to play a submissive role with Byron so not to alert him. I’m happy Don made the wise revision to have Byron cum inside Sarah in the alpha draft to Sarah lifting herself off Byron and took a facial in the final. Sarah soon had a revelation the only man to satisfy her sexually was Lester. Not her husband or Byron.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I remembered her conversation with Dan she was on an espionage mission and she had to flirt with a Byron to gain access to his office so she can plant the USB. Once she realized there was no chnace to plant the virus she was cornered and had to play a submissive role with Byron so not to alert him. I’m happy Don made the wise revision to have Byron cum inside Sarah in the alpha draft to Sarah lifting herself off Byron and took a facial in the final. Sarah soon had a revelation the only man to satisfy her sexually was Lester. Not her husband or Byron.

Not to mention it clears up all the nasty who's the daddy tropes, thereby getting rid of cheap and unnecessary mysteries.

 

[adamblack144]

Yeah but she could have just sucked him off. The guy's a loser and would be happy with that. It just seemed like lazy writing to make Sarah an all purpose slut who's easily dominated. Which makes all the chapters where Lester does it gradually seem pointless.

 

[adamblack144]

Can't wait for the next chapter though. It has everything it needs to be one of the best. No interference from dan. They'll be at her home. I hope he lets this chapter be just Lester and Sarah. No need for updates on the background characters. Just good sex scenes and deep conversation between the two where their relationship progresses.

 

[Whitelist777]

In the insider discord, Don accidentally wrote about Sarah's pregnancy in chapter 30 and the beginning of arc 3, but deleted it after about 20 seconds