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berylflame

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For any LapisLit fan here, just saw his works are now on Kemono.

The Rent Agreement is mid-burn pace imo. Not a fan of the ending but the journey was spicy enough. Some suspension of belief needed but the language is very easy reading. Give it a go while waiting. I discovered him cause he used to be under Don's favorites in Literotica.

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berylflame said:
For any LapisLit fan here, just saw his works are now on Kemono.

The Rent Agreement is mid-burn pace imo. Not a fan of the ending but the journey was spicy enough. Some suspension of belief needed but the language is very easy reading. Give it a go while waiting. I discovered him cause he used to be under Don's favorites in Literotica.

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Yeah I read that a while back, I was hoping Josh would smash Ethan's head wit a bat or something. There's know way I would let a buddy do me like that. And at end of the story for all she posed to be in love with Ethan I don't see. Seriously the only time she likes him was when they fucked and as God as good sex can be after a while you would want to have a conversation.
 
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yes a scene in lesters car after the theatre scene

lester is putting it on the line regarding lesters feelings saying she is his mate states she’s still Dan wife and it’s not as easy as that but she admits to herself in the cold light of day that she does live lester after only saying it in the heat of the moment

she’s genuinely conflicted at what’s happened in the theatre and just stairs out of the window
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So she went far off as admitting her love to Lester in cold day light .

I am reading beyond the lines here cuz Sarah doesn't just like Lester . It has gotten far beyond that

ans if 30 is part 1 and 31 will be it 's direct continuation .

We can assume Sarah will finally make a declaration of love of some sort to him . Maybe beyond sex.

Or Don will backtrack t just like usual and insert some random filler ( hope not )

30 -40 will be her ultimate declaration of love for her Lestee .
 
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Her parents got involved but instead of getting some fresh insight they are now another long list of "variables ". Considering the part they took Lester (a complete stranger ) 's words about Dan without a doubt makes me think they never liked Dan in first place e

Dan 's subplot with his girl will drag for next 4 or more chapters . sarah lost her job . She still thinks she is in "control" . And the funniest thing is they are fighting over some lost underwear .

I amhoping this is the end of otis and he has fulfilled his purpose . He can be one of the main suspects alongside Lester in Sarahs pregnancy .

Dan still has no clue about Saraha mindshift .he is taken her love and fate for granted . No character development

Over all not quite i was expecting but not bad either
 
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I cannot believe a character as boring as Otis has dominated multiple chapters now. We already have Lester. Why do we need a dumber and bummier version? And why does he get to fuck Sarah multiple times? Has Sarah ever showed as much initiative with Lester as she did in this chapter with Otis?

I'm ambivalent about Sarah getting exposed. I'm willing to be patient and see how it gets resolved. But this story is seriously devolving in quality.

Only true positive about it the reintroduction of Lizzie. Glad she's back. Hope we see more of her
 
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