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[john_doe6711]

This is an excellent point that you made as always I'm asking if you were at the helm writing TA how or what direction would you have taken the story by now

 

[john_doe6711]

Has Eddie wilder been updated yet on kemono or mad stories?

 

[Em Lear]

Has Eddie wilder been updated yet on kemono or mad stories?

Nah nothing so far. I keep hoping for Executive Privilege chapter 7

 

[DarkStutzel]

Yeah this was the reason I stopped reading after chapter 9, it didn't make any sense and defied all the foundation that Ant77 had built up to, it was like the rug got pulled out from underneath the reader and the couple had this fairy tale/no consequences conclusion to the arc.

The writing is great and the sex scenes are among the best, but then a lot of Ant77's endings don't hit right (for me). He did a much better job with My Neighbor of building the foundation and telegraphing the ending, but even so, the ending didn't feel earned. Louise did everything John asked her to do, to satisfy his kink and yet she's the one that gets punished for it while he walked away scott free.

Of course not. She cheated on him when she broke the only rule: doing it without a condom and cumming inside. She degraded herself at work, not because of her husband, but to please her lover. He had sex with the other student, because of her lover—her husband—she's long forgotten. Then the girl from France took what she thought was hers, what had been abandoned. Same thing with Sara. What's Dan's fault? She's breaking the rules and losing herself. We have to admit that writers lose themselves, in the case of a teacher with a student. Much worse than Sara, Sara's problem is not locking the doors.

 

[King_Gonta]

What's yall predictions for the next chapter ???

It aint gonna be another step back wouldn't it??

 

[Davidsays1]

Idk, I've noticed with a lot of writers they have things they like, then they take too much advice from fans, and change their story. It happens with Nebic all the time, he has a plan, some of his fans want darker stuff, so he changes his plans in favor of darker stuff. At one point he said I predicted one of his stories completely until his fans convinced him to make it darker.

 

[Davidsays1]

Right now where things are headed, Sarah is losing Dan. Dan ends up with the girl flirting with him at work. Lester goes down.

 

[john_doe6711]

That sounds really interesting...

 

[Verisimilinude]

What's yall predictions for the next chapter ???

It aint gonna be another step back wouldn't it??

The logical prediction is that we see the fallout from the hospital and either 1) Richard steps in to 'save her job' or 2) Sarah is lead down the dark road, seeing Lester as her only salvation.

What we will get, likely, is 2/3rds of the chapter about Dan and Sentinel and him tracking Lizzie down. Or in other words the non-sense most of us don't give a shit about.

Edit: That's not fair, I'm sure someone likes reading it, it's just not me. I usually check out of any sections dealing with Dan. He hasn't been a sympathetic character (imo) since chapter 2 and 29.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Hello friends,

I have had a problem with "kemono" since yesterday. It can no longer be opened / started up!
Can anyone help me?
Or do you have the same problem, too?

Thanks in advance

-- PC

I have seen some error strings lately, but usually I just refresh and it resolves the issue. Otherwise it still works for me. You might try going into your browser settings and deleting all your cookies and then opening it again (though keep in mind if you do that it will delete any saved info).

Hope that helps and have a great day.

 

[Verisimilinude]

This is an excellent point that you made as always I'm asking if you were at the helm writing TA how or what direction would you have taken the story by now

Honestly if I was writing TA, I would have ended it at ch14, with an epilogue or final chapter with Lester having achieved his goals of breeding Sarah and the aftermath of those decisions.

As it is now? It's a good question. The story has gotten so tangled, it's like a plate of spaghetti. There's so much to resolve. I would start by focusing on closing off all the open plot threads and narrowing it back down to the three main characters; Sarah, Lester, and Dan. I would be working towards the final chapter, because the important questions are; will Sarah get pregnant by Lester, if she does will she keep it, and then her final decision of deciding which path to take - sexual freedom with Lester or go back to the life she had before all this started with Dan. You could easily write four or five chapters and an epilogue of the conflict and discussions centered around answering those questions and the fallout from said choices.

To me everything else is just white noise.

 

[swewx]

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[adamblack144]

The logical prediction is that we see the fallout from the hospital and either 1) Richard steps in to 'save her job' or 2) Sarah is lead down the dark road, seeing Lester as her only salvation.

What we will get, likely, is 2/3rds of the chapter about Dan and Sentinel and him tracking Lizzie down. Or in other words the non-sense most of us don't give a shit about.

Edit: That's not fair, I'm sure someone likes reading it, it's just not me. I usually check out of any sections dealing with Dan. He hasn't been a sympathetic character (imo) since chapter 2 and 29.

Agreed. I skip entire sections of Dan. There's never anything good there. I too suspect the next chapter will mostly ancillary plots. Id be shocked if Sarah is saved.

The subscribers clearly want her to be dragged into the dirt with Lester and every chapter to be a new fetish that Sarah suddenly finds thrilling. With the way they teased Lester's attraction to her mother, don't be surprised if incest is one of them. Lester's nerd friends are definitely going to fuck her

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Yeah this was the reason I stopped reading after chapter 9, it didn't make any sense and defied all the foundation that Ant77 had built up to, it was like the rug got pulled out from underneath the reader and the couple had this fairy tale/no consequences conclusion to the arc.

The writing is great and the sex scenes are among the best, but then a lot of Ant77's endings don't hit right (for me). He did a much better job with My Neighbor of building the foundation and telegraphing the ending, but even so, the ending didn't feel earned. Louise did everything John asked her to do, to satisfy his kink and yet she's the one that gets punished for it while he walked away scott free.

I agree, but this time, I don't have all the same problems just because I think she was trying to portray herself as the valiant hero to her husband: Yes, I love fucking him, but he is not you, so I will stop everything just for you and be only the person you want me to be. Then, given enough time and enough people, she decides that being bad feels good and that, all in all, she really wants Cody to win. He's already won her, and now she wants to help him devastate her husband, teaching him that no matter how good he looks, he was never good enough for her and because he dared to take Cody away from her, now he will pay: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! (Kim then twirls Snidley Whiplash curled mustache)

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Idk, I've noticed with a lot of writers they have things they like, then they take too much advice from fans, and change their story. It happens with Nebic all the time, he has a plan, some of his fans want darker stuff, so he changes his plans in favor of darker stuff. At one point he said I predicted one of his stories completely until his fans convinced him to make it darker.

That is why I am writing my new story completely and then will start posting paragraphs. You cannot make me change what I have already finished.

 

[swewx]

Hello friends,

I have had a problem with "kemono" since yesterday. It can no longer be opened / started up!
Can anyone help me?
Or do you have the same problem, too?

Thanks in advance

-- PC

kemono.su is working for me.
Have you tried using another PC?

 

[swewx]

This is an excellent point that you made as always I'm asking if you were at the helm writing TA how or what direction would you have taken the story by now

Sorry. Who are you talking to?
I would like to know too.

 

[john_doe6711]

Sorry. Who are you talking to?
I would like to know too.

Oh that was for Verisimilinude...and he replied,you can check it out...

 

[Big K2]

Honestly if I was writing TA, I would have ended it at ch14, with an epilogue or final chapter with Lester having achieved his goals of breeding Sarah and the aftermath of those decisions.

As it is now? It's a good question. The story has gotten so tangled, it's like a plate of spaghetti. There's so much to resolve. I would start by focusing on closing off all the open plot threads and narrowing it back down to the three main characters; Sarah, Lester, and Dan. I would be working towards the final chapter, because the important questions are; will Sarah get pregnant by Lester, if she does will she keep it, and then her final decision of deciding which path to take - sexual freedom with Lester or go back to the life she had before all this started with Dan. You could easily write four or five chapters and an epilogue of the conflict and discussions centered around answering those questions and the fallout from said choices.

To me everything else is just white noise.

If I was writing..totally re.write 31...make whatever excuse u wznt....would start arriving at apartment after leaving theater..Lester gives her GLASS OF WINE..has her get showered and cleanded..then starts the re.claiming process of power
Fucking Sarah..maybe taking her ana. Cherrywhich would break her thoughts process completely..keep parent scene but no mom shower..keep Middleton scene hospital..no sex scene with otisOtis. Otis becomes confidant..Sarahgoes home..it's Friday night..Sarah and Dan talking on phone..kids out of town with grandparents..Dan tells her he's home Satafternoon late..they both agree talking needed. Sarahgets in shower... Lester has key to house ass noted previously..in Dan's office..nears total conversation with Dan..as Sarahshowers surprises her..gets blowjob..then al, night fuck session where Lester is in charge.
Dangets back ..Sees Lester fucking Sarah in living room...next chapter..

 

[Verisimilinude]

If I was writing...totally rewrite 31...make whatever excuse u want....would start arriving at apartment after leaving theater...Lester gives her GLASS OF WINE...has her get showered and cleaned...then starts the reclaiming process of power
Fucking Sarah...maybe taking her anal Cherry which would break her thoughts process completely...keep parent scene but no mom shower...keep Middleton scene hospital..no sex scene with Otis. Otis becomes confidant...Sarah goes home...it's Friday night...Sarah and Dan talking on phone...kids out of town with grandparents...Dan tells her he's home Sat afternoon late...they both agree talking needed. Sarah gets in shower... Lester has key to house ass noted previously..in Dan's office...hears total conversation with Dan..as Sarah showers surprises her...gets blowjob...then anal, night fuck session where Lester is in charge.
Dan gets back...Sees Lester fucking Sarah in living room...next chapter..

It's definitely a good angle to take the story. I think the only change I would make is that while Sarah is on the phone with Dan, she'd be in bed with Lester, and when Dan gets home on Saturday she'd be facing the door with Lester behind her on the couch, she'd say to Dan "Hey you're right on time, go sit in that chair, you know how turned on I get when you watch."