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[Verisimilinude]

While I'm thinking about it, I feel it would be nice if we started using the spoiler feature. There are a few here who really don't like reading the alpha and want to wait for the final before reading. So no obligation of course, but it would be kind of us to consider those who don't want to be spoiled by using the feature responsibly.

 

[Minscnboo]

Above all, it is an Alpha, and in the past things have changed from the initial blurb. It may very well be a test of reactions to determine the next steps or path, however ambiguous it is.

 

[stevenlee03]

this comment came to mind again after the latest chapter...

"The year is 2089. Toxic Attraction is on chapter 673. Sarah has been fucked by every single man on planet earth while Dan pinches his nose muttering 'pineapple' like a mental patient. It is rumored Lester will get Sarah pregnant in the next 500 chapters"

 

[DarkStutzel]

Guys, what do you think of the stories?

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[DarkStutzel]

You should, it can be a bit nerve wracking, but also rewarding.

I'm thinking of the story of a knight who has his first love, but is deceived by a succubus and begins to fall into a spiral of sex, depravity and violence.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I'm thinking of the story of a knight who has his first love, but is deceived by a succubus and begins to fall into a spiral of sex, depravity and violence.

Its a good premise to begin with, especially if you made the order the knight belongs to one where she/he is suppose to be celibate. It would make their corruption even more powerful and tragic. Depending how you took the story.

 

[Verisimilinude]

this comment came to mind again after the latest chapter...

"The year is 2089. Toxic Attraction is on chapter 673. Sarah has been fucked by every single man on planet earth while Dan pinches his nose muttering 'pineapple' like a mental patient. It is rumored Lester will get Sarah pregnant in the next 500 chapters"

LOL umh that can't happen, I don't have that many years left.

 

[Minscnboo]

this comment came to mind again after the latest chapter...

"The year is 2089. Toxic Attraction is on chapter 673. Sarah has been fucked by every single man on planet earth while Dan pinches his nose muttering 'pineapple' like a mental patient. It is rumored Lester will get Sarah pregnant in the next 500 chapters"

On the Earth Alliance space station Babylon 69, Sarah discovers alien physiology.

Remember Centauri have 6!

 

[Big K2]

Personally I feel sorry for the kids, child protection maybe.
Mother's now a raving nymphomaniac.
Father's got major mental health issues
And Uncle Fester is lurking in the background

I typically don't comment the story. In one way or the other even if I don't agree/like the way story goes/stalls I normally get some good part ... but this chapter ... it just feels like what someone said above ... someway it's rushed and even the sex scenes ... for some reason feels like weren't written by the same person that wrote other chapters. I can't peek what it was specifically but something feels off. But this is just my 2 cents! thanks for the ones that can/keep sharing!

Again

Did anyone liked this chapter cause I didn't we are back at square 1

No..Pretty sure he hasn't written anything since Alpha 32. The rewrite of ending of 32 honestly made no sense
Don't remember any rewrite, like this in other chapters.. The Richard scene is a throw awa.y..Too many people witnessed
The Otis scene..And again threats on the kid's...This Chapter 33 seems to me not Don Silver writing..The rewrite of 32 and this post is someone else's story

 

[DarkStutzel]

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I've read some of his work. I liked the black belt. I just have to read some chapters 4 to 9 and 3 to 18. I've already read them. I'm team Jacob, I hope I didn't screw him over, because he doesn't seem like a pervert. He confronted Carlos even though he's a white belt. He was a man to say he did it on purpose. He told the truth, the story will lose a lot of quality. Jacob is a nerd, but he has his own personality and characteristics. Ashley sided with Carlos even knowing that Carlos was bad-natured and hurt him. She didn't go home with him to be with her lover. At the beginning of the story, she already gave up on the marriage; the beginning was clear. May he move on, have his family, and she have her own life. Her leaving her will even improve her life. And apparently, she won't be the first woman he's done this to, if he doesn't have other students besides her.

 

[Firebeast735]

Parum - Camille Gets the Creeps and The Mix-Up :

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DOWN CAN YOU RE UP PLEASE

 

[Dickdangerous]

This chapter is probably the worst one written so far. Normally I can find some logic in how characters behave, but this chapter was just plain awful.
The only good thing about the pointless plot of Sarah fucking Richard was that it ended quickly. It only showed that Sarah is becoming a dumb bimbo, which is not what her character is supposed to be.

But the worst part of this chapter was the second part, which contradicted Lester's character as well. The whole throuple nonsense is just a bad attempt to rehash what happened between chapters 11-20, which is when TA was at its peak. After spending so much time on the pregnancy pills plot, Lester thinking about not using it is just plain stupid, the complete opposite of what Lester is as a character.

Like I said after last chapter, it's clear that don isn't writing what he originally wanted. It's clear that he's catering to the whims of some high paying customers, which honestly is fine, it's a financial decision. But sadly it has ruined a story which had potential to be something great.

 

[Verisimilinude]

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[john_doe6711]

Question....why does every male in this series have a big dick and everyone is bigger than Dan...and Lester has a super dick because no one is bigger than him or can perform like he does no matter how much Sarah enjoys it...and wouldn't it be funny if at the last chapter one of them wakes up and realizes it was just a dream..

 

[Dickdangerous]

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I get the logic of lester making things challenging for himself by not using fake pills, but the problem is Sarah won't willingly agree to get knocked up, no matter how stupid she's been acting lately. If by some miracle she did, Dan would never accept it. He enjoys watching her with other men, but he won't go along with Sarah willingly getting knocked up by Lester. Lester switching birth control and knocking Sarah up by " accident" is more in line with everything he's done so far. Sabotaging and making things look like an accident is his main MO.

The way I see it, Sarah already has feelings for Lester. When he does knock her up eventually by "accident" , she'll definitely consider keeping the baby. Like Lester said last chapter " accidents happen". Once he's thinks that Sarah is in love with him, he'll switch the pills and get her pregnant. Till then, this throuple shit will go on, where Sarah will be fucking every one Lester tells her to. Don has simply put the pills thing on hold just for that purpose.

 

[bbc4sluts2]

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[Minscnboo]

I postulate that someone else wrote Ch 33. Its similar in structure with the other 2 times I recall this happening. DS may have some influence but it offers a path he may or may not go down. I have suspicions that the longer the story goes, the more deviant it gets. The scene with Richard made no sense. She did not like him caressing her shoulders in their first meeting and then the dressing down he gave her later. DS portrayed Sarah (and Dan) as intelligent professionals. She would not whore herself out for a job, especially since Lester is offering to assist. Perhaps another job, or one in Chicago?

The biggest factor rare the kids. I am uncomfortable with their inclusion, and see it attempts to add suspense and danger to the liaisons.Inclusion of the mother has been tossed around for some time. I'm on the fence with it.

Once the final version is released we'll be able to see how it is cleaned up, scrapped, etc.

 

[CuckAmok]

On the Earth Alliance space station Babylon 69, Sarah discovers alien physiology.

Remember Centauri have 6!

Minbari: "There is a hole in your mind, Dan...and Jesse lives there RENT FREE!!"

 

[john_doe6711]

I agree with you alot minscnboo on the part with the kids...unnecessary....also every chapter since the dinner with the parents Renee has been mentioned in some form or fashion...veris

I postulate that someone else wrote Ch 33. Its similar in structure with the other 2 times I recall this happening. DS may have some influence but it offers a path he may or may not go down. I have suspicions that the longer the story goes, the more deviant it gets. The scene with Richard made no sense. She did not like him caressing her shoulders in their first meeting and then the dressing down he gave her later. DS portrayed Sarah (and Dan) as intelligent professionals. She would not whore herself out for a job, especially since Lester is offering to assist. Perhaps another job, or one in Chicago?

The biggest factor rare the kids. I am uncomfortable with their inclusion, and see it attempts to add suspense and danger to the liaisons.Inclusion of the mother has been tossed around for some time. I'm on the fence with it.

Once the final version is released we'll be able to see how it is cleaned up, scrapped, etc.

I agree with you on the part of the kids...unnecessary...and Veris spoke about the chapters length and it was too short for his usual work...maybe he's working on NE or the unnamed undercover story but this was definitely not his handy work...I get why Sarah is acting out of character...written any other way she won't be as susceptible to Lester's shenanigans...maybe in 2089 our grandkids reading the story will find out...

 

[john_doe6711]

And if anyone can tell me if Zane and Claire finally had sex that would be awesome...this is taking even longer than dan growing a backbone..