The Bet by RabbleLaid
Ch 16
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Unless i'm wrong, in 17 it hasn't happened as yet. Will have to wait for 18 or 19.
You are spot on, up to ch 16 and 17, so far a blowjob and lapdance, not done the dead yet.
Is it weird that the same time that nothing is updated on Kemono again Something's Off by GetBugged has also gone quiet?
Great observation...I was wondering what happened to him/her....somethings off is weird in a good way..
Yeah!!! I'm such a dumb ass, a real jerk.
I confused RabbleLaid's "The Bet" with Bridgekicker's "My Crude Boss Cucks Me". lol
Deeply sorry!!
Bridgekicker took 23 chapters to make this happen...
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It's become fashionable for many authors to tease for endless chapters. In the end, the bulls are as slow as the cucks. lol
With kemono not being updated does anyone have any story recommendations similar to "Behind the Neighbors Door"?
With kemono not being updated does anyone have any story recommendations similar to "Behind the Neighbors Door"?
Or a copy to post of the same author's A Young Couple's Journey by Antarctica77? There is actual character building I have been told...gasp!!! (I would forever be in your debt).
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LOL 23 chapters for a payoff is quite long. However there is a use and need for delayed gratification. I guess it's tantamount to edging the reader. Personally I don't like stories that start off with the two (or more) characters boning and then transitions into a flashback or telling of how it all started. If it works for others great, but I feel like it robs the story of any tension and build up because you already know what's going to happen. However you aren't wrong, progress has to be shown sooner than later and 23 chapters later is too long in my book. I haven't actually read the story so these "chapters" could actually be scenes which alters the conversation some.
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someone have the black belt affair ch. 19 to 22 by Eddie Wilder ? thx
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The Black Belt Affair Ch. 23
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8 horas atrás
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The evening class at Iron Grip Academy was in full swing, the familiar sounds of bodies hitting mats and strained breathing filling the converted warehouse. Carlos moved through the rows of paired students, adjusting stances and offering instructions. His teaching style had always been hands on, but those watching closely might have noticed his attention lingered longer on certain female students, especially those whose husbands weren’t present.
It had been five days since Jacob’s silent departure from the apartment, five days since Ashley had watched him pack his bag and leave without a backward glance. Five days of unanswered calls and texts, of desperate pleas sent into a void. Five days of alternating between crushing guilt and defensive justification. Five days of sleeping on the couch because she couldn’t bear to enter the bedroom where Jacob had discovered her betrayal.
Nope, but my deduction apparently holds..."Something's Off" by GetBugged also has not listed a new chapter for the same length of time that Kemono has been inactive. That author was incredibly good about getting his chapters out and now 14 days of nothing. Could both activities be run by the same person??? Wondering minds wonder.
I don't mind a retroactive scene or even going back to the past to show or explain what happened to get to that moment, and then moving forward.
What bothers me the most is when the story goes back and forth from the past many times.
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Long time no see
Got busy with life but I really liked the true throuple idea
But silver is really putting off his imagination here and padding it for jis readers
So much to do and explore here including the fact Lester sleeping with the couple on the same bed. They going on dates with lots of humiliation for Dan
But Dan as a character has really regressed so far. He ain't even in the game forget about playing it.
Got busy with life but I really liked the true throuple idea
But silver is really putting off his imagination here and padding it for jis readers
So much to do and explore here including the fact Lester sleeping with the couple on the same bed. They going on dates with lots of humiliation for Dan
But Dan as a character has really regressed so far. He ain't even in the game forget about playing it.