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What's Left Unsaid - Chapter 9
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I parked next to the curb rather than pulling into my driveway. Mainly because I couldn’t. Someone’s car was parked where Daisy’s car should have been. I didn’t recognize it… but it wasn’t hard to figure out who it belonged to. A sports car. Sparkling cherry.
I gripped my steering wheel as I stared at the red paint… seeing red… red… so angry… an image of a bull snorting and grunting, hoofs stamping on the ground, head tilting down and aiming deadly horns…
What I wouldn’t give to smash into that stupid little car. Ram it over and over with my Subaru. But that wouldn’t solve anything. It wouldn’t even make me feel better. It would just result in paperwork. Police. Charges. Money.
 

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I m disappointed...So many different ways this should have played out..Dan in many chapters showed backbone, made Lester bend to his will just to curl up like a baby the next. Chapter..after reading a posted copy of 34 I'm glad I'm not o patreon . Then again maybe I should write some porn..may e a WHAT IF..Chapters 30 to 34..rewrite
That would be a turning point, perhaps, and would be welcome as an alternative course and progression of the story, which was destroyed step by step by the original author DC from chapter 19 onwards...

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Dan recognising Sarah is no longer his best friend and well wisher will be something else. A major plot point
The complicated part is that we have no idea. The characters change drastically depending on the paying audience. So, today, Dan is weaker than before, to take the initiative and go back five steps in the next chapters. Sarah has already cheated and cut her husband several times. Dan's recovery arc with the Sentinel employee will be great; Sarah is throwing her husband into the arms of any woman who wants to get it.
 

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I would add and justice served for the vilest of crimes. To be extremely clear on this topic: It would be a violation of a lot of Site TOS's as well as IRL laws, if minors were present. However my point was that without said characters present, it was just a room. A hammer isn't evil, but people can use a hammer to do evil things.

Edit: Furthermore if it had anything even remotely like that as content - I'm out and would not continue the story. It's why people got outraged when DS floated the idea of Lester "removing" the daughters from the picture. It was unnecessary and a far darker place than most of us would stand for. I still believe this was a mistake on his part; it's fine to provide knowledge that Dan and Sarah have offspring, but they don't need to be brought up in the story in any way other than thru oblique references; picking them up or who could watch them, etc.
Seems Don wants a DARK ENDING..Eitherheor the person who's been writing the story since Alpha draft change of Dan tossing Lexter to SARAH walking him out..I don't believe Don is the writer of the last few chapters..Wording and sentence
Structure is so different. Guess we all will see
 
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Yeah, I was really hoping to see seeds being planted with the mother more but there really hasn’t been much, it needs a proper build up if its going to eventually happen.

That part was definitely a bit much lol, I cannot say I am a fan of all the SPH bits either but I know a lot of people in this genre like that stuff.
I say it was failed comedy.
 
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I would add and justice served for the vilest of crimes. To be extremely clear on this topic: It would be a violation of a lot of Site TOS's as well as IRL laws, if minors were present. However my point was that without said characters present, it was just a room. A hammer isn't evil, but people can use a hammer to do evil things.

Edit: Furthermore if it had anything even remotely like that as content - I'm out and would not continue the story. It's why people got outraged when DS floated the idea of Lester "removing" the daughters from the picture. It was unnecessary and a far darker place than most of us would stand for. I still believe this was a mistake on his part; it's fine to provide knowledge that Dan and Sarah have offspring, but they don't need to be brought up in the story in any way other than thru oblique references; picking them up or who could watch them, etc.
Just to say, I didn't think you were speaking with anything but the best of intentions and I did mention that I thought you were right, a bed is a bed, when empty before use. The symbolism was there but he is trying to shove Sarah's mind toward sex and his dick is more important than anything and she should have seen what was coming when he claimed his intentions for the night with Sarah. As far as Dan, I do believe that Lester also believed that he would get Dan involved as a spectator in the hall, office, and every other place. I also believe he would have been wrong but maybe Sarah would have protected Lester, not sure.
 

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Seems Don wants a DARK ENDING..Eitherheor the person who's been writing the story since Alpha draft change of Dan tossing Lexter to SARAH walking him out..I don't believe Don is the writer of the last few chapters..Wording and sentence
Structure is so different. Guess we all will see
With the repeated mention of Lester looking like he's going to have a heart attack, and Dan receiving some form of interest from outside girls, I fully believe in the end Dan will have his daughters, lose Sarah, and Lester will end up arrested or dead after everything. It's just how it's lining up in my opinion.
 

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With the repeated mention of Lester looking like he's going to have a heart attack, and Dan receiving some form of interest from outside girls, I fully believe in the end Dan will have his daughters, lose Sarah, and Lester will end up arrested or dead after everything. It's just how it's lining up in my opinion.
Dan made a mistake in putting his wife at the disposal of another man, but they haven't been a team for a long time, and Sarah ran out of money, ran out of love (normal with most women). Now it's time to move on. I read the final chapter 33 again and didn't see anything about Dan using the new word (pineapple). Sarah and Dan agreed on this new word, but it was never used. It would be cool when Lester sent Dan to the author to have Sarah use the word (pineapple) so Dan wouldn't masturbate. I hope Dan fights with Sarah over the use of the girls' room. And in chapter 35, there will be more development for Dan (Sarah with unlimited sex, as we've seen constantly). I want to see their dialogue. I would be happy if the Sentinel employee called Dan while he was in the basement and realized he wasn't 100% by his voice. The woman is into Dan, so it's normal to look for him and find excuses to call.
 

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Rules 34 Back in the Saddle
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Things were different with Jeremy back. Not better. Not worse. Just changed. He still moved like himself, and Sage kept to her routines, but the rhythm between them was an entirely different frequency. Something had shifted, subtly enough that Sage would have missed it had she not been paying attention. triggerplug_brunette_woman_beautiful_long_straight_hair_sunny_42a53582-4007-49e8-9e85-3f1f36ec...jpg
 
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Dan made a mistake in putting his wife at the disposal of another man, but they haven't been a team for a long time, and Sarah ran out of money, ran out of love (normal with most women). Now it's time to move on. I read the final chapter 33 again and didn't see anything about Dan using the new word (pineapple). Sarah and Dan agreed on this new word, but it was never used. It would be cool when Lester sent Dan to the author to have Sarah use the word (pineapple) so Dan wouldn't masturbate. I hope Dan fights with Sarah over the use of the girls' room. And in chapter 35, there will be more development for Dan (Sarah with unlimited sex, as we've seen constantly). I want to see their dialogue. I would be happy if the Sentinel employee called Dan while he was in the basement and realized he wasn't 100% by his voice. The woman is into Dan, so it's normal to look for him and find excuses to call.
It was actually used, I believe, when Dan came home and found them in bed together. He hesitated but finally said it and then pulled Lester off of Sarah and kicked him out of the house. Lester could have heard it there and easily figured out what it was and used it himself, this time in the house to stop Dan like Dan used it to stop Lester.
 

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I am ambivalent with TA34.

The chapter itself isn’t bad at all(and sex is very good), it’s more me that I don’t like how Dan is portrayed than the writing itself. But I suppose it’s only me.

I don’t get Sarah’s parents play in Lester mind here, though.

Anyway the sex talk(because it was sex talk, be clear about that) of Sarah claiming her desire to be impregnated by Lester, could be an interesting twist in the story that the Lester I know would exploit very quickly.

But we all know, DS will write zillions of chapters before arriving to a point.