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[King_Gonta]

Is it just me or is Lester completely obsessed with Dan's dick...wanting Sarah to talk about every single time...this has gone too far IMO...even if Dan wanted this to happen I don't think he wanted to be humiliated like that and Sarah don't even get me started there...she is completely and utterly cock drunk at this point...real talk I know alot of people like whats happening to Dan but this story can still be excellent with a strong protagonist..DS needs to find a way to balance the two..

Sarahs progression makes sense to me. Lester is doing subliminal messaging here

Dans behaviour has been pathetic . He was "noticing " things earlier which he doesn't now.

He has been mind broken by Lester . The guys been taking L's since last so many chapters without a break

 

[Davidsays1]

Antarctica77's a young couples journey part 18 dropped today. Anyone happen to have it?

 

[polpolp]

Chapter 20:
The sight shook him to his core, and he felt his cock twitch, but he held onto the rage in his
chest. Let it spread.
“Pineapple,” He said loudly, causing Sarah to whip her head around. Her eyes opened like
saucers, finally registering his presence in the room.
“Dan!” Sarah grunted, “When did you? What? This isn’t..”
Lester palmed Sarah’s head and pushed her down into the mattress, the sheets obscuring her
face.

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I was searching this moment, were is this beast Dan know ? DS just kill his character, there is no way this Dan here doesnt kill Lester 10 times when he did far worst than that.

DS just wanted his dark ending and needed to wimp Dan a lot. He make him a joke of a character

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

I was searching this moment, were is this beast Dan know ? DS just kill his character, there is no way this Dan here doesnt kill Lester 10 times when he did far worst than that.

DS just wanted his dark ending and needed to wimp Dan a lot. He make him a joke of a character

Agree it's turned into cheap cuck porn, drama is long gone, think I am through with it now

 

[Ndbaelor]

Agree it's turned into cheap cuck porn, drama is long gone, think I am through with it now

Yeah, I started treating chapter 30 onwards as the bad parody of TA series.....doesn't make it any better, but enough to make peace with the fact that it's gone downhill now.

 

[DarkStutzel]

What's Left Unsaid - Chapter 10

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Daisy’s Day

How could I have been so stupid?

Probably because I grew up in a majority of time where everything getting backed up to ‘the cloud’ wasn’t a reality. But now everything is synced. Saving to servers in some unknown place. Trusting corporations and executives to stick to their ‘promises’ that they will keep my data safe. But in order to even do that, I first have to opt in. I have to encrypt. Password protect.

Conner had been the one to set my phone up when we first got them. Going through all the motions of entering our emails and names and passwords and probably even blood type. Of course, my wonderful husband, working in cybersecurity, would want my phone to be backed up in case of an accident. It was sensible and almost as easy as a simple button click.

I hadn’t even thought about it until I was sitting in the locker room after having a shower. My shift was over, but it had been particularly busy, and I was much grimier than usual. I didn’t want to go home to Conner smelling as bad as I did, so I rinsed off quickly, wrapped myself in a towel and sat down at my locker, pulling out my phone to let Conner know I was gonna head home.

 

[DarkStutzel]

The Black Belt Affair Ch. 25

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The apartment was a shoebox. One bedroom, galley kitchen, bathroom with a shower stall barely wide enough to turn around in. Ashley had signed the lease 1 week after receiving notice that Jacob had stopped paying rent on their old place. The property manager had been sympathetic but firm. Pay in full or vacate in thirty days. She couldn’t afford to cover it alone, not with her part-time graphic design job.

She’d been lucky to find this place at all on such short notice. The real estate agent had called it “cozy” and “efficient,” real estate code for cramped and barren. It came semi-furnished, a futon that doubled as her bed, a wobbly table with two mismatched chairs, and a dresser missing one drawer. The walls were institutional beige.

Ashley stood at the window, clutching a mug of cheap instant coffee as she watched rain streak the glass. Her reflection looked back at her. Pale, hollowed out, hair pulled back in a hasty ponytail. She barely recognized herself.

 

[adamblack144]

Comparing this forum 15 chapters ago to now is depressing. A week before and after the chapters dropped there was intense discussion about every detail. Debates about plot points, predictions etc.
Now it's dead. 3/4 is just requests for other stories. DS has killed our dreams

 

[Verisimilinude]

Agree it's turned into cheap cuck porn, drama is long gone, think I am through with it now

With respect, I think you may have missed the fact it's been a cuck story since the 1st chapter. Dan's been fighting it the whole time but he's always been a reluctant cuck.

 

[Verisimilinude]

So did I miss something? I thought DS said he was going to make a significant change. I only saw a paragraph or two that were slightly different and the cleaned up typos.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Comparing this forum 15 chapters ago to now is depressing. A week before and after the chapters dropped there was intense discussion about every detail. Debates about plot points, predictions etc.
Now it's dead. 3/4 is just requests for other stories. DS has killed our dreams

True, but I think part of the cause is reader fatigue and partly readers bouncing bc it's not the story they were hoping it would be. As for me, I've been focused on paying the rent and writing my own stuff. I just haven't had as much time to dedicate to opinions and analysis.

Then there's the elephant in the room - this last chapter was depressing. All the long term members know I've never been a Dan fan, but fuck, even I can see he is currently a pubic hair away from going postal.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Never really taught about it that way, guess like most people just know what I don't like. But I'll think about, I know most stories were they split always has the husband living a great life and the wife end up in the toilet. I don't like them because it's so far from the truth about how shit really plays out. I don't like the humiliation or were the husband is shown to be pathetic and weak. Even a weak man has a voice, another thing that about 75% of series on Lit it's always the wife will cheat with no being caught. I like it when at the end of the story it's not some vague weird open endings.i like it when the husband's opinion counts, but I don't like it when the husband is just open and so excited to see his wife getting beat in the sheats. I like it when he is written to be able to say hay this is goin to far or that they need to ease up a little. When their made out to just be super happy with what ever is goin on no matter what. Like I don't see how letting some dude and your wife kicking you out of your bedroom and sending you to the guest room would bode well for a marriage. I've never been a fan of the husband setting wife up with his best friend, that just seems stupid and just sets your self up for problems. If I think of some more shit I'll mess you. Just took a break from work if my new shop, mine burned down at the end of May. They got done Friday marnin building the new one. Trying to get my new shit in this one, happy to get all the stuff I've been storing in house out. Finally got my closet back, new tool set and new welder has been taking half of it up and it seems like every shirt I want is always behind them.

So to clarify:
- No humiliation
- Stable to strong willed husband (meaning not weak/pathetic/wimp)
- Husband has agency and a voice
- Wasn't sure about this one (so you want the husband to be the cheater?)
- And no Friend sex partner

Would that be accurate? If so sounds like you want a trad sharing story, or maybe a kinky couple that keeps it all between the two of them.

 

[powerconti]

After these vehement and clearly articulated justifications, I get the feeling that our friend ‘Verisimilinude’ is the so-called ‘phantom writer’.
Who knows !?!

-- PC

 

[powerconti]

When I was very young, I studied psychology for two semesters. When I look at the comments, statements and reactions of participants on this and other portals and compare them with my own experiences and insights, I come to the conclusion that, for the most part, they also reflect people's personalities in real life.

The filthy, disgusting ‘Lester’ says hello while being praised by another dog in heat, ‘Sarah’ ...

-- PC

 

[DarkStutzel]

I really didn't see anything different. The story lost a bit of focus, and I can't quite understand the passage of time. We're in the part of the story where Dan's destruction takes place. Not every woman is a queen of size. Dan can find another woman (Dan, after this destruction, might want to seek help). He's the father of two girls, and using the girls' room is bound to generate anger and a fight between the couple. There have to be some consequences; there will come a time when, just like Celebrimbor broke Sauron's spell, Dan will succeed. If Celebrimbor lost the city, Dan lost his marriage, and divorce is coming (Dan didn't want to share his wife; the guy at his work favored Lester and turned everything into Chaos). I hope Sarah goes shopping and buys Lester clothes, helps Lester become a little more hygienic. And I hope for a chapter with Dan and the Sentinel employee.

 

[Davidsays1]

For me it's just the story going nowhere. Dan being annoying.

I really didn't see anything different. The story lost a bit of focus, and I can't quite understand the passage of time. We're in the part of the story where Dan's destruction takes place. Not every woman is a queen of size. Dan can find another woman (Dan, after this destruction, might want to seek help). He's the father of two girls, and using the girls' room is bound to generate anger and a fight between the couple. There have to be some consequences; there will come a time when, just like Celebrimbor broke Sauron's spell, Dan will succeed. If Celebrimbor lost the city, Dan lost his marriage, and divorce is coming (Dan didn't want to share his wife; the guy at his work favored Lester and turned everything into Chaos). I hope Sarah goes shopping and buys Lester clothes, helps Lester become a little more hygienic. And I hope for a chapter with Dan and the Sentinel employee.

I've said it repeatedly Don has mentioned multiple times Lester looks like he's going to have a heart attack, that has to be the payoff Sarah gets pregnant loses Dan and the kids, and Lester dies. Or gets arrested.

 

[adamblack144]

Can we get some public scenes with Sarah and Lester? Chapter 16 where she pretends to be his gf was one of the best. Now that she actually is, id like to see more. Have them go shopping. Have them go to the pools/beach. Have her act jealous in front of other women when Lester's eye wanders.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I didn't mind it, but I like dark. Empire Strikes Back is the best Star Wars film, to me, by miles and miles. This is mostly due to the idea that the empire wins this one and Darth really fucks Luke's mind up.

Basically, though, the finished version is not too much different from the Alpha, as only cosmetic changes were applied. It reads cleaner now and several sections that just repeated what had already happened in the chapter were eliminated. I am glad that he lengthened the area where Lester tells Dan that now he has completely reversed the time he was humiliated by Dan and Sarah. I completely forgot about that, so now it makes sense here. Don realized that everyone doesn't have a perfect memory, especially since he never mentioned it again.

 

[Verisimilinude]

After these vehement and clearly articulated justifications, I get the feeling that our friend ‘Verisimilinude’ is the so-called ‘phantom writer’.
Who knows !?!

-- PC

Why thank you PC, for the kind words about by writing capabilities. Sadly my bank account doesn't support your theory of me being a ghost writer for DS. Not that I'd want to be anyway; I prefer to write my own stories and make my own mistakes.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Can we get some public scenes with Sarah and Lester? Chapter 16 where she pretends to be his gf was one of the best. Now that she actually is, id like to see more. Have them go shopping. Have them go to the pools/beach. Have her act jealous in front of other women when Lester's eye wanders.

I do think you'll have to wait on this for a bit. It reads as if this is going to be the new corruption goal of the series; Sarah accepting Lester as a person, not a sex toy (paired with Sarah accepting she wants to have Lester's progeny). In order for that to happen, Lester will have to convert Renee. Once Sarah's parents accept him "publicly" then it will be easier for Sarah to accept it.