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[Biggjay]

“This is how you were meant to be fucked. From behind in a dirty bathroom stall like a cheap whore. Squeeze my cock Sarah.”

The above statement aptly describes the total transformation, descent and fall of the once innocent, delectable and classy Ms. Sarah Williams. I know that 'art imitates life'; but I can not help but wonder if such a 180 degrees turnaround is actually possible in real life?

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Waiting to hear from VERIS and PSIBER but in the mean time does anybody have undercover blonde chapter 10 and 11 thanks.

Here mine is: I hate to say it, but this chapter I go along with all the critics, negative expounders, and naysayers. This chapter was a waste of Don's time writing it, the patreon web site for hosting it, and my time for reading it. It added nothing and became nothing more than genre cliche and falls heavily toward unbelievable tropism. Fine, you're in the bathroom fucking and the bathroom has a strong gay glory hole tool (no pun intended). The symbolism he uses doesn't really work as well in the ladies room as it would the men's but everything comes off??? What??? Why is that necessary? Don just got done using Unfaithful as a reflective hammer to hit the reader over the head unless they got it. I feel like Don was elbowing us in the collective rib and saying, "yeah, funny stuff, right, yeah, come on, you like it -- right?"
However, I digress. There is a bathroom stall scene in that movie that fit much better into the whole fucking in public thing, just based on clothes. With clothes also makes it that much more passionate, as they want each other so bad they can't wait to take off clothing, just do it with each other, NOW!!! I just can't wrap my head around too much here. There is virtually no story and nothing that advances anything worthwhile.

Sorry, everyone, but for this month, with no significant changes from Don, Naysayers Rule!
SMH.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

It seems like continuity is a constant issue. Didn't Sarah just lose her job a night or 2 before? And their credit cards are already maxed out?

Maybe they only had those $300 platinum cards that you have to put the money down in the bank to get one. Or, perhaps coincidence made it to where Dan was emptying out there credit with all the trips to DC, Virginia, Chicago, etc. Maybe he paid everything for the jobs, instead of letting them pay for travel. He's probably much more macho then. "Hey, Sarah, I just cleaned out our $25,000 discover card in airfare, hotels, and car rentals, you horny yet?" ROWR, hot stuff.

Just to say, I was a manager for a lot of years and I do not believe in coincidence, even in fictional settings.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I was thinking about ending the chapters with Sarah leaving Dan. Does she still have the ring? Did Sarah take Lester's ring with her? Lester, in relation to Renee, would want to impress her. Lester would offer to be the driver who would host the Chicago night for the girls, something VIP like the time with Sarah. The girls' night would be better livened up by Jesses (I think that's the name) at the club and Lester using that to his advantage to irritate Dan even more. Rather than the scene with the black guy. Describing sex scenes with Lester in action is easy. Lester in jail talks about the inmates. Remembering something.

My question has been, why the fuck has Lester not demanded she take off her pathetic loser husband's (using Lester language here) ring and wear Lester's much more virile ring? That seems like the simplest and most powerful statement to Dan and one that Lester would insist on her using. She could tell the girls that she lost Daddy's rings but this is just for now to make up for those rings from a man who loves her very much (They just think she is talking about Daddy and Sarah is digging in with an open insult to Dan right in front of their daughters).

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

My question has been, why the fuck has Lester not demanded she take off her pathetic loser husband's (using Lester language here) ring and wear Lester's much more virile ring? That seems like the simplest and most powerful statement to Dan and one that Lester would insist on her using. She could tell the girls that she lost Daddy's rings but this is just for now to make up for those rings from a man who loves her very much (They just think she is talking about Daddy and Sarah is digging in with an open insult to Dan right in front of their daughters).

She could have left her ring with Dan at home and told him to porn it, as I have another one now.

 

[Stestall]

This is probably the least like chapter for me I just don't see where don going wit this story it's just not making any since Sara is a total slut now she really don't even need Lester any more for sex she done fucked at least 4 or 5 guys now and now you got a black dude gave her a phone number after she gave him some head this story just ain't goin no where Im ready to see him end this shit

 

[sdkain]

Maybe they only had those $300 platinum cards that you have to put the money down in the bank to get one. Or, perhaps coincidence made it to where Dan was emptying out there credit with all the trips to DC, Virginia, Chicago, etc. Maybe he paid everything for the jobs, instead of letting them pay for travel. He's probably much more macho then. "Hey, Sarah, I just cleaned out our $25,000 discover card in airfare, hotels, and car rentals, you horny yet?" ROWR, hot stuff.

Just to say, I was a manager for a lot of years and I do not believe in coincidence, even in fictional settings.

I totally hear you.

I think the original charm (and heat) was when the author was letting the story progress naturally, a couple discovering their kinks and falling victim to a predator. Now, he's just trying get from sex scene to sex scene losing the charm that kept the story semi-grounded and hot.

He has Sarah totally gaslighting Dan, but anytime Dan wants to talk to her about it, she points to his dick as proof that he's enjoying it. And, it would have added a lot of depth if he actually focuses a bit on Sarah and Dan's dynamic and contrasting that with Sarah and Lester's dynamic. But, instead, right now the plot is - as others have mentioned - how slutty can Sarah become.

Regarding the grocery scene, he could've generated the same sympathy for Dan, with Dan cooking dinner for the kids while Sarah's getting banged in a dirty bathroom. Or, Dan at the hardware store getting spackle to fix the hole in the drywall and bumps into a neighbor, or Dan cleaning up the dinning room throwing away broken dishes, or Dan washing the kid's sheets...

The first ten chapters or so, there was a very natural flow that made the story intriguing.

Now - to be honest - I'm reading it to see how slutty Sarah will get and when Dan is going to *actually* call her out on it. Because, it's obvious she's not doing this "for Dan" anymore.

 

[D2taA]

Dan was recognising all patterns and shit about Lester a few chs ago and now he's been nerfed again

They taking break at this point means basically gifting Sarah to Lester . Even the most idiot husband would recognise that Sarah is far more vulnerable to Lesters programming when she's alone

Now without her job at least keeping her busy . There is nothing stopping her from falling all in to . ( She does not care about the children to the extent that she allows Lester inside their house)

Dan has not made one wise decision since ch 20 . How are we even supposed to root for him??

Haven't then been on break for like the last 18 chapters

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

This is probably the least like chapter for me I just don't see where don going wit this story it's just not making any since Sara is a total slut now she really don't even need Lester any more for sex she done fucked at least 4 or 5 guys now and now you got a black dude gave her a phone number after she gave him some head this story just ain't goin no where Im ready to see him end this shit

It's sad the story should of ended many chapters ago
But it cheap trope cuck shit now
Feel sorry for a writer who had talent
But keeps wanting a financial pay day

 

[powerconti]

... She could tell the girls that she lost Daddy's rings but this is just for now to make up for those rings from a man who loves her very much (They just think she is talking about Daddy and Sarah is digging in with an open insult to Dan right in front of their daughters).

... And that gives you a feeling of fulfilment and makes your heart beat faster with happiness because it's so incredibly fascinating and exciting.
Perverted!

The thought of a beloved father being insulted and humiliated in front of his children by their mother, who has become a submissive slut, and her dirty whore son-of- a-fucker must be so hot that some people even get turned on and start masturbating and find ultimate fulfilment.
Hideous!

-- PC

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

... And that gives you a feeling of fulfilment and makes your heart beat faster with happiness because it's so incredibly fascinating and exciting.
Perverted!

The thought of a beloved father being insulted and humiliated in front of his children by their mother, who has become a submissive slut, and her dirty whore son-of- a-fucker must be so hot that some people even get turned on and start masturbating and find ultimate fulfilment.
Hideous!

-- PC

Its not hot, its story progression though, something sorely lacking this time. I really am getting tired of being judged by someone who fucking doesn't know me. Is your life so empty and shallow that all you do is follow stories you hate just so you can troll anyone who disagrees with you? This is what's wrong with the internet and world today. People say if they could go back in time they would take hitler out. I would instead take the creators of the internet out, because I remember what the world was like before it and it sure as hell was a lot friendlier.

 

[DarkStutzel]

It's sad the story should of ended many chapters ago
But it cheap trope cuck shit now
Feel sorry for a writer who had talent
But keeps wanting a financial pay day

I hope Dan doesn't fall for this cuckold weakness. He has to stay strong for the family. Sarah, as I always say, is already Lester's, she loves him, she said it of her own free will and it had nothing to do with Dan, she doesn't even think about her husband, just to humiliate him.

 

[DarkStutzel]

Not a bad half a chapter, but he's absolutely drawing it out to milk another month of subscription fees.

the worst chapter of the series.

 

[DarkStutzel]

She could have left her ring with Dan at home and told him to porn it, as I have another one now.

She went out on girls' night, could have gone with the new ring and even told her mother that Dan has improved at work. Lester is paying all the bills, so all of Dan's money goes straight to him. Showing an apparent financial improvement. Justifying the new ring. There are so many loose ends; the author only thinks about describing sex scenes.

 

[DarkStutzel]

This is probably the least like chapter for me I just don't see where don going wit this story it's just not making any since Sara is a total slut now she really don't even need Lester any more for sex she done fucked at least 4 or 5 guys now and now you got a black dude gave her a phone number after she gave him some head this story just ain't goin no where Im ready to see him end this shit

True and fearless, Lester is not a guy who intimidates anyone (physically), people could very well rape Sarah (although she even likes it), because people would respect an out-of-shape fat dwarf. In the theater there were several men. I hope that Lester's adventures in dangerous places never go wrong, the guys robbing both of them, having sex with Sarah but beating her. She arriving all broken... Something like that, because she thinks Lester is a superman, but he is not. He goes to many dangerous places and Lester is not physically able to do anything.

 

[DarkStutzel]

Don could have focused on Dan. He's not going to use Trisha, and the sentinel would have been better off not even having them in the story. He could have had Dan and the kids talking, Dan doing things around the house, cleaning up the mess, setting up the cameras without anyone knowing, the girls talking about the Troll to their dad again. The chapter is short and really bad, looking like a cheap porn movie where the actor talks about going to space, the actress in the kitchen, and then out of nowhere starts having sex. It didn't evolve at all, they even added another character. I hope Lester throws away that role with the phone because a black bully would have arrested Lester by his underwear at the bathroom door and ended up with Sarah. Don is losing the story.

 

[IdiotPedro1]

... And that gives you a feeling of fulfilment and makes your heart beat faster with happiness because it's so incredibly fascinating and exciting.
Perverted!

The thought of a beloved father being insulted and humiliated in front of his children by their mother, who has become a submissive slut, and her dirty whore son-of- a-fucker must be so hot that some people even get turned on and start masturbating and find ultimate fulfilment.
Hideous!

-- PC

Why are you reading it it you think people who get off on it are so reprehensible? It's not like this has any merit beyond sex. The story is absurd, the characters and plot are wildly inconsistent and not even good as metaphors for anything. It's a complete piece of shit at this point unless you get off on it. And yet here you are. If you can't accept your kink, work on it.

 

[powerconti]

Its not hot, its story progression though, something sorely lacking this time. I really am getting tired of being judged by someone who fucking doesn't know me. Is your life so empty and shallow that all you do is follow stories you hate just so you can troll anyone who disagrees with you? This is what's wrong with the internet and world today. People say if they could go back in time they would take hitler out. I would instead take the creators of the internet out, because I remember what the world was like before it and it sure as hell was a lot friendlier.

I don't give a damn about the story!
I have no respect for people who exploit innocent and underage children – regardless of whether it's fantasy or reality.
No author or writer would ever think of doing such a thing. At least not unless they were encouraged and emboldened to do so by their readers.

Comments such as those expressed in your case encourage the author to incorporate such offensive ideas into their stories.

It's disgusting, offensive and abhorrent!

-- PC

 

[powerconti]

Why are you reading it it you think people who get off on it are so reprehensible? It's not like this has any merit beyond sex. The story is absurd, the characters and plot are wildly inconsistent and not even good as metaphors for anything. It's a complete piece of shit at this point unless you get off on it. And yet here you are. If you can't accept your kink, work on it.

Quite simply: I love sex and practise it almost daily with my wife – according to the motto: Better eroticism than aerobics!
We have been reading erotic literature and short stories for decades.

I have read your and Viri's comments.
I find it sickening, disgusting and utterly despicable when ‘underage children’ are included in this or other stories. I also consider the thematisation and instrumentalisation of them to be sickening.
The excuse ‘It's just a fictional sex story that has no meaning in real life!’ should not be used as a pretext to hide behind and indirectly reward it.
Authors should not be encouraged to continue writing in this way either!
Because I think that comments of this kind, even if they are not meant that way, encourage the writer to include these awful themes in their story.

We all live in a world of principles of supply and demand.
If there is no demand (no desire) for these perversions, there will be no supply (no disgusting fantasies as stories).

That is my goal, because I want that which I wish to express to be understood exactly as I intend it and nothing else.
I do not intend to attack anyone directly, with one exception: if they openly approve of and even demand the thematisation of ‘underage children’!

--PC

 

[Captain Awesome]

I think this is all leading to Sarah having to make a choice. To send Lester or Dan to jail. Dan will eventually gather enough evidence to pin all the hacking on Lester. He will confide in Sarah what he has. The investigation is going to try and pin it on Dan. And then Sarah will choose to either expose Dan's evidence, or withhold it. Withholding sends Dan to jail, or exposing it sends Lester to jail. Her betrayal of Dan fully complete if she opts to send him to jail.