D2taA
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Haven't then been on break for like the last 18 chapters
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It's sad the story should of ended many chapters ago
But it cheap trope cuck shit now
Feel sorry for a writer who had talent
But keeps wanting a financial pay day
... And that gives you a feeling of fulfilment and makes your heart beat faster with happiness because it's so incredibly fascinating and exciting.
Perverted!
The thought of a beloved father being insulted and humiliated in front of his children by their mother, who has become a submissive slut, and her dirty whore son-of- a-fucker must be so hot that some people even get turned on and start masturbating and find ultimate fulfilment.
Hideous!
-- PC
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Its not hot, its story progression though, something sorely lacking this time. I really am getting tired of being judged by someone who fucking doesn't know me. Is your life so empty and shallow that all you do is follow stories you hate just so you can troll anyone who disagrees with you? This is what's wrong with the internet and world today. People say if they could go back in time they would take hitler out. I would instead take the creators of the internet out, because I remember what the world was like before it and it sure as hell was a lot friendlier.
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I hope Dan doesn't fall for this cuckold weakness. He has to stay strong for the family. Sarah, as I always say, is already Lester's, she loves him, she said it of her own free will and it had nothing to do with Dan, she doesn't even think about her husband, just to humiliate him.
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the worst chapter of the series.
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She went out on girls' night, could have gone with the new ring and even told her mother that Dan has improved at work. Lester is paying all the bills, so all of Dan's money goes straight to him. Showing an apparent financial improvement. Justifying the new ring. There are so many loose ends; the author only thinks about describing sex scenes.
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True and fearless, Lester is not a guy who intimidates anyone (physically), people could very well rape Sarah (although she even likes it), because people would respect an out-of-shape fat dwarf. In the theater there were several men. I hope that Lester's adventures in dangerous places never go wrong, the guys robbing both of them, having sex with Sarah but beating her. She arriving all broken... Something like that, because she thinks Lester is a superman, but he is not. He goes to many dangerous places and Lester is not physically able to do anything.
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Don could have focused on Dan. He's not going to use Trisha, and the sentinel would have been better off not even having them in the story. He could have had Dan and the kids talking, Dan doing things around the house, cleaning up the mess, setting up the cameras without anyone knowing, the girls talking about the Troll to their dad again. The chapter is short and really bad, looking like a cheap porn movie where the actor talks about going to space, the actress in the kitchen, and then out of nowhere starts having sex. It didn't evolve at all, they even added another character. I hope Lester throws away that role with the phone because a black bully would have arrested Lester by his underwear at the bathroom door and ended up with Sarah. Don is losing the story.
Why are you reading it it you think people who get off on it are so reprehensible? It's not like this has any merit beyond sex. The story is absurd, the characters and plot are wildly inconsistent and not even good as metaphors for anything. It's a complete piece of shit at this point unless you get off on it. And yet here you are. If you can't accept your kink, work on it.
I don't give a damn about the story!
I have no respect for people who exploit innocent and underage children – regardless of whether it's fantasy or reality.
No author or writer would ever think of doing such a thing. At least not unless they were encouraged and emboldened to do so by their readers.
Comments such as those expressed in your case encourage the author to incorporate such offensive ideas into their stories.
It's disgusting, offensive and abhorrent!
-- PC
Quite simply: I love sex and practise it almost daily with my wife – according to the motto: Better eroticism than aerobics!
We have been reading erotic literature and short stories for decades.
I have read your and Viri's comments.
I find it sickening, disgusting and utterly despicable when ‘underage children’ are included in this or other stories. I also consider the thematisation and instrumentalisation of them to be sickening.
The excuse ‘It's just a fictional sex story that has no meaning in real life!’ should not be used as a pretext to hide behind and indirectly reward it.
Authors should not be encouraged to continue writing in this way either!
Because I think that comments of this kind, even if they are not meant that way, encourage the writer to include these awful themes in their story.
We all live in a world of principles of supply and demand.
If there is no demand (no desire) for these perversions, there will be no supply (no disgusting fantasies as stories).
That is my goal, because I want that which I wish to express to be understood exactly as I intend it and nothing else.
I do not intend to attack anyone directly, with one exception: if they openly approve of and even demand the thematisation of ‘underage children’!
--PC
I think this is all leading to Sarah having to make a choice. To send Lester or Dan to jail. Dan will eventually gather enough evidence to pin all the hacking on Lester. He will confide in Sarah what he has. The investigation is going to try and pin it on Dan. And then Sarah will choose to either expose Dan's evidence, or withhold it. Withholding sends Dan to jail, or exposing it sends Lester to jail. Her betrayal of Dan fully complete if she opts to send him to jail.
I love that scenario!!! though, why wouldn't Dan disclose his own evidence to his lawyer?
I think what might work to fill that plot hole, is there might be some knowledge or evidence that *Sarah* explicitly has that would exonerate Dan and implicate Lester.
But, I love the premise of her lying to protect Lester over Dan, even when it comes out that Lester orchestrated everything from Dan losing his job to Sarah losing her promotion and, ultimately, her job to who knows what else.
With this scenario, if I think with my heart, it'd be awesome for Sarah to tell the truth and exonerate Dan.
But, my perverse self - yes! I totally admit, I have a very perverse side - would love to see her lie to protect Lester. Then watch it all crumble down around her.
The compromise between my angel and demon would be, same scenario but flipped. She withholds evidence to protect Dan and Lester gets what's coming to him. And Sarah totally embraces her slutty self - i.e. she's no longer using the "I'm doing this for Dan" excuse, she's already broken down her barriers, plenty of guys with big cocks for her, what does she need Lester for? And of course, it ends with her being pregnant. Though not before Sarah has a gangbang behind Dan's back, with Dan later finding out, which would definitely end the "for Dan" excuse - if the two of them ever have a real f*cking conversation! - but I digress.
(I really want to see Sarah have a gangbang, not like a prearranged gangbang, but something that gets out of hand, with Sarah just going with it - like she did with Vernon with Lester realizing that he might have unleashed a true succubus - still digressing)
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im ready to see the story ends from like 10+ chapters ago. its no longer interesting. im curious on how it would end tho
Could it have been LESTER that somehow tampered with Dan's card through his hacking skills for Dan to look even weaker...?
Oh God! Another one!!
That's the reason there are 35 chapters, half of them completely dispensable and boring.
But your wishes can be granted though: just subscribe to DS patreon channel and become one more of his cheerleaders. I am pretty sure he'll be happy to oblige all your wishes if it means more 35 paid, stupid and boring chapters. lol
Your kinks are your kinks. I respect your right to have them.
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Agree, the idea of Sarah ultimately betraying dan and then her world crumbling around her is a very intriguing one
Huh? I asked if something happened. I said nothing suggesting I want underage children in the story. I think it was stupid to include them because Dan and Sarah never pay attention to them.
You're going off on people for their kinks that have nothing to do with children.
The most exciting part for me was Marcus and gang zeroing in on Lester, which is saying something when it comes to a sex story. Even the sex scenes have become mundane. We spent chapters with Sarah, so we had some attachment with her journey. I just don't feel the same about Renee.
Also the makers of the movie Unfaithful are very well within their right to sue Don. (JK, I know it's not gonna happen, just wondering what else Don's gonna rip off from that movie)
Also the makers of the movie Unfaithful are very well within their right to sue Don. (JK, I know it's not gonna happen, just wondering what else Don's gonna rip off from that movie)