- Dec 5, 2023
- 4
- 9
Thank you.toxic attraction 16 alpha draft
Dan's impotence and lack of real agency is the main flaw in this story. And it isn't just with Lester & Sarah.I've read it. It seems it goes nowhere. Lester invites his buddies to "watch". Even Jesse came up from the crypt. It's like many stories inside a story. Dan has no say on the matter. Sarah doesn't care about other males watching her fuck Lester. Has anyone else had the same impression?
The story will continue to meander and puddle around because Don is hoping to squeeze ~30 chapters out of a story that probably should've wrapped up by now. His story Neighborhood Encounters will probably be more of the same unfortunately.I've read it. It seems it goes nowhere. Lester invites his buddies to "watch". Even Jesse came up from the crypt. It's like many stories inside a story. Dan has no say on the matter. Sarah doesn't care about other males watching her fuck Lester. Has anyone else had the same impression?
Doesn't look like anybody in the F95 community has it yet - it would've started popping up elsewhere by now if they did.Heard TA Chapter 17 Alpha dropped today