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I enjoyed Chapter 22. Setting up a confrontation between Lester, the Lincoln Group and Jessie over Sarah. Lester quickly adjusted his tactics after the failures in Chapter 20 and 21. Sarah saying the words I love you and her relationship with Lester gets deeper. Might not be everyones cup of tea but lot to like
 

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I get it tho don't should make a new story and cross sara and the others and make a whole new story because this is just dum now same sex scene now it's disrespect Dan now you add byron in the mix he might as well combine his other stories and make a new one this is too long and stupid
 

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Bryon, next Jessie, next d&d gang members one by one,,, wtf this story' Going... Lol I don't know who are paying for this shit story line going on now
 
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Others said Don’s big money supporters on Discord and Patreon have a big influence on the story’s direction lately. It’s the reason why there was two additional sex scenes at the end of chapter 20 final because supporters thought it was too short. I made it this far I’m sticking it out
 

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Me too I don't know why tho lol but I honestly don't like how he changed Sara into a slut wife for Lester and got Dan like a chump but like I stated earlier it be cool if he crosses his other stories into a new one I read the one about Saul can't remember the name of it yet and the new one he just started on
 
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Me too I don't know why tho lol but I honestly don't like how he changed Sara into a slut wife for Lester and got Dan like a chump but like I stated earlier it be cool if he crosses his other stories into a new one I read the one about Saul can't remember the name of it yet and the new one he just started on
I think the only story he has admitted to use a minor crossover character was Neighborhood Encounter. His greatest opportunity to do a crossover is Detestable Liaisons athe character arc is somewhat similar to Toxic Attraction. Archer the nemesis who cucks the husband Harry fucking his wife Courtney from her husband. His other long form stories don’t grab my attention and I assume his supporters also agree as Don has slow walked the other stories in favor of Toxic Attraction
 

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I really don't like it cause I feel like Dan can get mo aggressive and I don't see a female throwing everything away over no bigger dick she fuck bryon but if it's gonna be Dan just watching his wife turn in to a slut he could've done this along time ago
 
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I really don't like it cause I feel like Dan can get mo aggressive and I don't see a female throwing everything away over no bigger dick she fuck bryon but if it's gonna be Dan just watching his wife turn in to a slut he could've done this along time ago
My take after Ch. 22: I think Dan and Sarah were on the rocks before Lester was ever introduced. Long distance relationships never work if kids are involved, the stressors of a loss of income, jobi, and social status were maybe too much for Sarah. Some people are not built for better or worse. Maybe Sarah is rebelling from all the expectations placed on her or maybe going through midlife crisis. Sarah now has an outlet to get away from all the bad with Dan and live the “good” and exciting life with Lester.
 
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Well I hope he ended this up soon
That is the general consensus by everyone but it’s Don’s most popular and lucrative story. May be concerned he will not be able to catch lightning in the bottle twice even if he reuses the same characters to create spin-offs
 

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He could do one about that female he had wrote about the one spend the night wit Lester I think it was in chapter 5 or 6 it's been funny tho from chapter 7 to now Lester done had sex with Sara and it's all the same I really lost interest in it now I just wanna see how it end
 
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He could do one about that female he had wrote about the one spend the night wit Lester I think it was in chapter 5 or 6 it's been funny tho from chapter 7 to now Lester done had sex with Sara and it's all the same I really lost interest in it now I just wanna see how it end
The Lizzie angle played out rather quickly as a plot line, unless Lester wants to bring her in to stir up Sarah’s jealousy. Would be nice for Don to write a spin-off story about Lizzie