VN Ren'Py ToxiCity [v0.12.0] [ILSProductions]

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Lynava

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Laura is a moron so tired of her doing stupid shit all the time that just ends up putting the group in danger or making stuff worse, but hey at least the new girl Eve is chill and love that she calls out all the other girls on their bullshit she is my new favorite girl for sure.
Okay, what would have changed if MC had gone with Loro and Sheli? Nothing, and most likely, when they got home, MC wouldn't have had the strength to fight the Scorched because he was in the fog for so long.
 

Ken Moreno

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Okay, what would have changed if MC had gone with Loro and Sheli? Nothing, and most likely, when they got home, MC wouldn't have had the strength to fight the Scorched because he was in the fog for so long.
He wouldn't have approved on going because MC wanted to leave Eve alone at least for some time it was Lauras whole idea to go back and bother Eve again behind his back after MC had literally just spoken to Eve and told them she wanted to be left alone, the point is Lauras whole idea to go alone without telling him was dumb to begin with because not only is she putting herself in danger but the whole group as well and she lied even Eve called her out on all of this.
 

Lynava

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He wouldn't have approved on going because MC wanted to leave Eve alone at least for some time it was Lauras whole idea to go back and bother Eve again behind his back after MC had literally just spoken to Eve and told them she wanted to be left alone, the point is Lauras whole idea to go alone without telling him was dumb to begin with because not only is she putting herself in danger but the whole group as well and she lied even Eve called her out on all of this.
I'm not arguing that she went early. but MS agreed that it would come off in 2 days.
 
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Ken Moreno

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Reading people complain about Laura is strange. It feels like people have never lied to cover for someone...:WaitWhat:
They are literally in a life or death scenario trying to survive one small mistake and somebody can die I think lying in this sort of situation is a pretty important thing and nothing to scuff at
 
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ImariKurumi

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Reading people complain about Laura is strange. It feels like people have never lied to cover for someone...:WaitWhat:
All 3 girls are idiots but i'm not that bothered and the story needs characters like them. Nice contrast to the new girl Eve.

It's not surprising that there are people who cannot perform under pressure and in dangerous situations.
I'm more appalled that some people believe that everyone must magically be a survivalist and their survival instincts still exists and will kick in automatically.
People forget the fact that the civilized world has domesticated humans and completely eliminated that instinct. Just gotta scroll through social media to confirm that. Only reason they're alive is because MC literally hard carried the party.
 

Coder62

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They are literally in a life or death scenario trying to survive one small mistake and somebody can die I think lying in this sort of situation is a pretty important thing and nothing to scuff at
It's worthwhile keeping in mind that they lied for a specific reason that imo wasn't relayed excellently (I have altered this in the script if ILS chooses to keep it) because the reason they were lying to MC, is to keep him safe. Over the last month he's been pushing himself more and more both physically and mentally. ILS has covered this nicely by bringing up him not eating as much food, not sleeping as much as he should and spending way too much time out in the fog than everyone else. Their worry, was that in the agreed upon plan, he would escort the women to see Eve and try and convince her that they're cool etc and in the process, would be left outside in the fog waiting for the conversation to end.

At the same time Kallie's side mission at the behest of Laura, was also helpful, because it's a quick jaunt outside to get into one of the other houses, to get MC desperately needed clothing (I've added dialog here as well, again if ILS likes it) because he had basically 1 change of clothing. If both sets of clothing are ruined by the fog and he's needed outside, he's fucked.

So my point is, whilst it's understandable that people are saying I can't believe they lied to him (because their reasoning wasn't made clear enough) they were ultimately trying to keep him alive and well and at the same time potentially get access to a vehicle via Eve.
 

Ken Moreno

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It's worthwhile keeping in mind that they lied for a specific reason that imo wasn't relayed excellently (I have altered this in the script if ILS chooses to keep it) because the reason they were lying to MC, is to keep him safe. Over the last month he's been pushing himself more and more both physically and mentally. ILS has covered this nicely by bringing up him not eating as much food, not sleeping as much as he should and spending way too much time out in the fog than everyone else. Their worry, was that in the agreed upon plan, he would escort the women to see Eve and try and convince her that they're cool etc and in the process, would be left outside in the fog waiting for the conversation to end.

At the same time Kallie's side mission at the behest of Laura, was also helpful, because it's a quick jaunt outside to get into one of the other houses, to get MC desperately needed clothing (I've added dialog here as well, again if ILS likes it) because he had basically 1 change of clothing. If both sets of clothing are ruined by the fog and he's needed outside, he's fucked.

So my point is, whilst it's understandable that people are saying I can't believe they lied to him (because their reasoning wasn't made clear enough) they were ultimately trying to keep him alive and well and at the same time potentially get access to a vehicle via Eve.
Counter point to this the end result is that they caused MC to exhaust himself more physically and mentally so in the end it backfire massively it was a pretty dumb decision on Laura's part in my opinion regardless of the intentions I don't really blame the other two girls though they were just going along Lauras plan plus they are young and naive.
 

Lynava

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Counter point to this the end result is that they caused MC to exhaust himself more physically and mentally so in the end it backfire massively it was a pretty dumb decision on Laura's part in my opinion regardless of the intentions I don't really blame the other two girls though they were just going along Lauras plan plus they are young and naive.
This would have happened anyway, but the MC would have been in the fog longer because he was waiting for the girls to talk.
 
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Lynava

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what? if they listen to him in the first place they wouldn't have gone out lol, not sure what you are talking about.
After MC returned from talking to Eva during dinner, Laura says she should talk to Eva because she might not be comfortable talking to a guy. She says she'll go see her in two days.
And MC agreed that Laura and Shelley would go, and MC would stay with Kallie, since it wasn't safe to wait outside.
 

cucubau111

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Counter point to this the end result is that they caused MC to exhaust himself more physically and mentally so in the end it backfire massively it was a pretty dumb decision on Laura's part in my opinion regardless of the intentions I don't really blame the other two girls though they were just going along Lauras plan plus they are young and naive.
Don't forget the worst thing, this whole deal really fucked up Kallie.
 
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