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Slow burn is okay by me, just hoping the Tiffany scenes will be worth the wait.
I don't think most people mind the slow burn, more of the slow pacing.
Imagine the MC has to take 3 months to get somewhere in a relationship. The game was still on the first few days. So 80 more days at this pacing and release schedule means year and a half or 2 years from now, and you have to be perfect in your going after that single person, otherwise nothing will happen.
If each release covered a week or 2 of time going by, things will still be slow burn, but it would seem like the story and life is progressing.
I am still lost on why the MC bought a full furnished place, then decides to get rid of the furniture and instead of staying at the place he owns while waiting on new furniture, he stays in a hotel. That is extreme rich people shit. When we get into that house, it better be a damn mansion.
Imagine the MC has to take 3 months to get somewhere in a relationship. The game was still on the first few days. So 80 more days at this pacing and release schedule means year and a half or 2 years from now, and you have to be perfect in your going after that single person, otherwise nothing will happen.
If each release covered a week or 2 of time going by, things will still be slow burn, but it would seem like the story and life is progressing.
I am still lost on why the MC bought a full furnished place, then decides to get rid of the furniture and instead of staying at the place he owns while waiting on new furniture, he stays in a hotel. That is extreme rich people shit. When we get into that house, it better be a damn mansion.
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I don't mind slow burn, I actually like plot. If I just wanted porn I would go watch porn. My only issue is many releases that end within 10 minutes of gameplay. Heck, I would even prefer no animation scenes as long the plot is developed faster. I would think supporting the dev on SubscribeStar since the models are gorgeous, but this way is impossible. Make less releases at least, as long they have more content.
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there is tiff only route but besides few minor sexual scenes no sexual content on it.
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Tiffany's mother and MC's ex wife, as she appears in MC's dreams.
I'm a little torn on this one. I feel that it has potential, but it's just way too slow progressing. I'm not referring to the whole slow burn thing, but that the actual content so far just seems like a somewhat long introduction/backstory and not at an "Episode 7" stage. It just doesn't feel like the story has even really started yet.
9thCrux I'm guessing that English isn't your native language due to certain grammatical errors.
Affirmative contractions (e.g. I'm, I've) aren't used at the end of clauses/sentences (in other words they can't be followed by any form of punctuation). A couple of examples (there are also others) of this in your work are:
"Yes, I'm. I want this too." should be "Yes, I am. I want this too."
"Of course I'm." should be "Of course I am."
You also made a common idiomatic mistake made by non-native English speakers, which was "have a sit", which should instead be "have a seat".
I hope that helps somewhat.
9thCrux I'm guessing that English isn't your native language due to certain grammatical errors.
Affirmative contractions (e.g. I'm, I've) aren't used at the end of clauses/sentences (in other words they can't be followed by any form of punctuation). A couple of examples (there are also others) of this in your work are:
"Yes, I'm. I want this too." should be "Yes, I am. I want this too."
"Of course I'm." should be "Of course I am."
You also made a common idiomatic mistake made by non-native English speakers, which was "have a sit", which should instead be "have a seat".
I hope that helps somewhat.
I played this game a couple of months ago and i want to play it again whit new chapters, but i think i'll wait for a kind soul who share chapter 8 (released today)
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We won't have access to it until the end of the month (this is for public access).
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i was thinking math too but chose history. doesn't matter much which he teaches atm.