So far so good, things I recommend changing, the out of focus scene then out fade to clear, is just annoying. Does the extra time make up for the extra coding and annoying your viewers? A more positive use of your time and effort, go into a little side information about the Empress and Emperor being Fox with what I think she maybe a nine tails? Him I am unsure he has her white fox ears, but no blue glow eyes. I remember something Kitsue where in one story there were variables to the number of tails, the more the more powerful. Found a little info talking about the wives... kybi no kitsune. But it is your story, unless you want me to give information to your fans.
