VN Ren'Py Tribulations of a Mage [v0.26.1] [Talothral]

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I know that my opinion won't be worth much but I have to say that I think this dev is a magnificent writer. He is one of the few that I enjoy reading every paragraph of his stories. And it never lets me down.
My most sincere congratulations. I advise everyone to look for something more than just pornography
 
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So far so good, things I recommend changing, the out of focus scene then out fade to clear, is just annoying. Does the extra time make up for the extra coding and annoying your viewers? A more positive use of your time and effort, go into a little side information about the Empress and Emperor being Fox with what I think she maybe a nine tails? Him I am unsure he has her white fox ears, but no blue glow eyes. I remember something Kitsue where in one story there were variables to the number of tails, the more the more powerful. Found a little info talking about the wives... kybi no kitsune. But it is your story, unless you want me to give information to your fans.
 
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Ursus4321 said:
I know that my opinion won't be worth much but I have to say that I think this dev is a magnificent writer. He is one of the few that I enjoy reading every paragraph of his stories. And it never lets me down.
My most sincere congratulations. I advise everyone to look for something more than just pornography
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Now that was a sloppy wet kiss!;)
 
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HornyyPussy said:
You don't wanna bang Mal and Nisha?
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Nisha hell yea, but Mal is gonna have to work for it
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Right, being serious for a moment. The main character status mostly mean that there is a bigger focus on them relating to the story. There is/will be relationship status for LI's when certain threshold has been passed. Although apparently need to fix it for Shani, eh something to fix for 0.7.0.
 
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Talo, with love, I adore the work you do but if you don't let me get that big green musclbound godess naked and fucked soon I will be ever so cross.

It's like opposites day.

Who do I like more, the giant green musclebound goddess or the tiny grey musclebound goddess....


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When has he ever disappointed? ;)
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When he made me wait for ages to get the giant titan musclebound goddess in Sorc naked and fucked.

Then he made me wait to get the other giant green musclebound goddess in Terminus 2 naked and fucked.

It's like an endless tease .... "see these musclebound goddess you would tongue fuck like you were the last lesbian on Earth ..... now wait bitch"
 
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Avaron1974 said:
Talo, with love, I adore the work you do but if you don't let me get that big green musclbound godess naked and fucked soon I will be ever so cross.

It's like opposites day.

Who do I like more, the giant green musclebound goddess or the tiny grey musclebound goddess....




When he made me wait for ages to get the giant titan musclebound goddess in Sorc naked and fucked.

Then he made me wait to get the other giant green musclebound goddess in Terminus 2 naked and fucked.

It's like an endless tease .... "see these musclebound goddess you would tongue fuck like you were the last lesbian on Earth ..... now wait bitch"
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But he always delivers in the end (PUN!), have patience woman! :love:
 
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Unworthy heathens of the whole - channeling the will of her goddess- intricate bare babe ceremony!!!
HornyyPussy said:
But he always delivers in the end (PUN!), have patience woman! :love:
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Avaron1974 said:
Talo, with love, I adore the work you do but if you don't let me get that big green musclbound godess naked and fucked soon I will be ever so cross.

It's like opposites day.

Who do I like more, the giant green musclebound goddess or the tiny grey musclebound goddess....




When he made me wait for ages to get the giant titan musclebound goddess in Sorc naked and fucked.

Then he made me wait to get the other giant green musclebound goddess in Terminus 2 naked and fucked.

It's like an endless tease .... "see these musclebound goddess you would tongue fuck like you were the last lesbian on Earth ..... now wait bitch"
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Changelog: Tribulations of a Mage 0.6.0

Changelog:

  • 287 renders
  • Implemented the next part of the story
  • 1 Hidden image
  • Codex update (Gods, added missing side characters, more to come.)
  • Added third font as UI font (Ren'py default font)
  • Grammar, spelling, and other fixes (Thanks to Adry, Shaddy, BryonSmothers3DX, Bread, ElectroKnight22, and Orion)
This one isn't that huge render wise, text wise depending on the choices.
It's about the same as other updates. Anyway, was relatively painless update to make.
 
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if this game has anywhere near as good a story as terminous or sorceror this will be interesting. however i will wait till its a bit more developed instead of getting my hopes up and getting them dashed by TO BE CONTINUED. keep up the good work
 
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rambo455 said:
if this game has anywhere near as good a story as terminous or sorceror this will be interesting. however i will wait till its a bit more developed instead of getting my hopes up and getting them dashed by TO BE CONTINUED. keep up the good work
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So you're gonna wait until it's finished?
 
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Avaron1974 said:
Talo, with love, I adore the work you do but if you don't let me get that big green musclbound godess naked and fucked soon I will be ever so cross.

It's like opposites day.

Who do I like more, the giant green musclebound goddess or the tiny grey musclebound goddess....




When he made me wait for ages to get the giant titan musclebound goddess in Sorc naked and fucked.

Then he made me wait to get the other giant green musclebound goddess in Terminus 2 naked and fucked.

It's like an endless tease .... "see these musclebound goddess you would tongue fuck like you were the last lesbian on Earth ..... now wait bitch"
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Let's not forget Gertrud >.>

Hmmm... there is a scene written for Gweyr already, and technically Maevra does already have a scene but that doesn't lead into anything good. Although she does also have a proper scene written as well and I'm not THAT far ahead in writing, just on update 11 >.> But that being said, Gweyr is a bit more special case in a certain sense as she wants to do things properly, with a ritual and all, which might or might not involve a few other Amazonian orcs. And there is a draft for that, but it's not there yet story wise.
 
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Water marriage ceremony already performed and gone through without a glitch.
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Talothral said:
Let's not forget Gertrud >.>

Hmmm... there is a scene written for Gweyr already, and technically Maevra does already have a scene but that doesn't lead into anything good. Although she does also have a proper scene written as well and I'm not THAT far ahead in writing, just on update 11 >.> But that being said, Gweyr is a bit more special case in a certain sense as she wants to do things properly, with a ritual and all, which might or might not involve a few other Amazonian orcs. And there is a draft for that, but it's not there yet story wise.
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