Ok, as a guy that doesn't like non three hole interactions, I can tolerate a handjob under certain circumstances.
That last scene with Shani was freaking great. Possibly one of the most actually erotic scenes you have ever made IMO. To be frank, I LOVE your stories but they are a bit lacking in eroticism. You seem to be definitely improving in that aspect judging from this release. Shani, red head freckles and small/medium perky breasts, committed and in active pursuit, Hot!
One thing I would say would be to not repeat similar sentences during sex scenes and do more non verbal noises in between verbal sentences. When girls get rammed they can often not form coherent words, there is a lot of moaning and grunting, same goes for guys. I know you said you don't like that, but a little uh uh, oh yeah can go a long way.
Anyway great job! When are you going to put TR1/TR2/Sorcerer on steam so I can buy them?
Oh and also, you are one of the very few devs who actually make an MC I am happy to play as in all your VN's! Keep that shit up!