3.80 star(s) 49 Votes

Phegor

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Mar 21, 2017
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TR:S was a promising start.
I enjoyed Sorcerer.
I couldn't finish TR:S2 because of the amount of dry and overly long conversations about political struggles (also known as Shit Nobody Cares About™). And unfortunately this game very quickly devolved into the same dry overly long conversations about political struggles.
As for the sex scenes - those haven't evolved since the first game, so why even bother at this point? It's clear you don't want to make them, and I doubt fans of your writing are here to masturbate to those unexciting, almost clinical depictions of copulation. Just drop them completely and focus on worldbuilding.
 
3.80 star(s) 49 Votes