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yeah the big problem here is the game doesnt have indetitymdev want all and want nothing and the cast is forced,and after 3 years dont have a quality replay gallery
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I went into this journey expecting to play a murder mystery/ protection theme with some sister-loving moments thrown in for those who enjoy them.
WOW, it's the exact opposite as far as I have gotten in the story.
The expectations were along the lines of, touching down at the arrival, more of a goodbye scene with the MC's new girlfriend with more meaning added to let the reader know she is supposed to be an integral part of his life now.
Getting picked up by either the security detail or Bartholemew himself to go over the safety routine and plan out a solid line of protection, which is the REASON he is there (and WHERE are the "Guards" or "protection" at ALL when he gets there??)
Once he arrives at his daughter's mansion there would have been a scene or two of "I hate you, why are you even here asshole, etc" when all he has to DO is show her the letter left for him in her mother's OWN handwriting...or she can talk to Jules...or ANYONE else that knew them since everyone seems to know exactly what happened and how he ISNT a prick after all...everyone BUT her of course.
OH, the scene where the MC loses his shit after Deb even suggests just explaining it to clear the air was confusing since there is no logical REASON to withhold that information at all.
Then perhaps, going over all the information the police had to figure out the M.O. and the one responsible for the "apparent murder or accident" trying to get more insight and background to solve that mystery with the help of the police, while every day, the MC calling his girlfriend to spend the last part of the evening with her before sleeping.
I passed through one scene of protection, almost like it was thrown in to make it relevant (so the viewer remembered WHY he was in that house in the first place) then right back to gawking at the 2 girls closest to him.
Speaking of those two, I find they look mighty..."Handsome" rather than beautiful, with the sister's thin frame and masculine face, and the Daughter, wow I seriously thought we were going to get an expo telling us how "She" used to be a "He, which is fine for a story, but many of the renders I have seen are difficult to look at her as a girl/ woman.
Most of the fitness-loving women I know are about half that size, still very muscular, but focusing on about 4% BF index (body fat) whereas some who are larger GOT that way with added assistance like male hormones (Why her mother found it a good idea to include the picture getting out of the pool as a main focus, which the MC even called "porn-like", is beyond me unless she is trying to get the MC to feel attracted to her).
The last shot I witnessed before I shut it down was the dinner scene, where the MC's Swedish girlfriend "returned the favor" by sending him a picture of a tasty morsel.
The way Milli's reaction renders were drawn literally made her look like a man with a pigtail wig on for real.
I went back a couple of times to look at it from a different perspective and still came out with the same result.
Most of the reading I had was focused on how his sister is the #1 girl in his life (something he mentioned to his new girlfriend??), Deb getting physically close is ALL her fault, he can never just put the distance between them at ALL and behave properly at Jules request, how he can't take his eyes off his daughter, with the other girls added in for flavor it seems.
If the story DOES pick up afterward, where we find out WHERE the fuck his daughter's security detail are (JULES even mentioned them yet we never see one at ALL, nor have we been introduced to the lead guard even), the plan of action where we are focused more on how to live till tomorrow when an apparent psychopath is REALLY wanting to get an information file or its DEATH to the family and spend less time thinking about and staring at his relatives almost exclusively, it would be a refreshing change, and a boost to continue the story for me.
This post is my own opinion, which is how I went through the story as far as I took it, and doesn't deserve backlash, anger, or abusive comments telling me how WRONG I must be to look at it that way at all.
If you see it differently or how you HOPE it is meant to be, that's on you, and possibly, you can enjoy your version or viewpoint further than I did.
WOW, it's the exact opposite as far as I have gotten in the story.
The expectations were along the lines of, touching down at the arrival, more of a goodbye scene with the MC's new girlfriend with more meaning added to let the reader know she is supposed to be an integral part of his life now.
Getting picked up by either the security detail or Bartholemew himself to go over the safety routine and plan out a solid line of protection, which is the REASON he is there (and WHERE are the "Guards" or "protection" at ALL when he gets there??)
Once he arrives at his daughter's mansion there would have been a scene or two of "I hate you, why are you even here asshole, etc" when all he has to DO is show her the letter left for him in her mother's OWN handwriting...or she can talk to Jules...or ANYONE else that knew them since everyone seems to know exactly what happened and how he ISNT a prick after all...everyone BUT her of course.
OH, the scene where the MC loses his shit after Deb even suggests just explaining it to clear the air was confusing since there is no logical REASON to withhold that information at all.
Then perhaps, going over all the information the police had to figure out the M.O. and the one responsible for the "apparent murder or accident" trying to get more insight and background to solve that mystery with the help of the police, while every day, the MC calling his girlfriend to spend the last part of the evening with her before sleeping.
I passed through one scene of protection, almost like it was thrown in to make it relevant (so the viewer remembered WHY he was in that house in the first place) then right back to gawking at the 2 girls closest to him.
Speaking of those two, I find they look mighty..."Handsome" rather than beautiful, with the sister's thin frame and masculine face, and the Daughter, wow I seriously thought we were going to get an expo telling us how "She" used to be a "He, which is fine for a story, but many of the renders I have seen are difficult to look at her as a girl/ woman.
Most of the fitness-loving women I know are about half that size, still very muscular, but focusing on about 4% BF index (body fat) whereas some who are larger GOT that way with added assistance like male hormones (Why her mother found it a good idea to include the picture getting out of the pool as a main focus, which the MC even called "porn-like", is beyond me unless she is trying to get the MC to feel attracted to her).
The last shot I witnessed before I shut it down was the dinner scene, where the MC's Swedish girlfriend "returned the favor" by sending him a picture of a tasty morsel.
The way Milli's reaction renders were drawn literally made her look like a man with a pigtail wig on for real.
I went back a couple of times to look at it from a different perspective and still came out with the same result.
Most of the reading I had was focused on how his sister is the #1 girl in his life (something he mentioned to his new girlfriend??), Deb getting physically close is ALL her fault, he can never just put the distance between them at ALL and behave properly at Jules request, how he can't take his eyes off his daughter, with the other girls added in for flavor it seems.
If the story DOES pick up afterward, where we find out WHERE the fuck his daughter's security detail are (JULES even mentioned them yet we never see one at ALL, nor have we been introduced to the lead guard even), the plan of action where we are focused more on how to live till tomorrow when an apparent psychopath is REALLY wanting to get an information file or its DEATH to the family and spend less time thinking about and staring at his relatives almost exclusively, it would be a refreshing change, and a boost to continue the story for me.
This post is my own opinion, which is how I went through the story as far as I took it, and doesn't deserve backlash, anger, or abusive comments telling me how WRONG I must be to look at it that way at all.
If you see it differently or how you HOPE it is meant to be, that's on you, and possibly, you can enjoy your version or viewpoint further than I did.
Umm a bit of crit on your constant misuse of the term "JOB" google define job ...... your usage is wrong. thing is proper in your usage. example. maria flashback scene when lawyer visits MC the first time.
Maria " It's a good job I'm sitting down, I go weak .............bla bla bla" the correct should be " It's a good thing I'm sitting down,....." I have seen you use this quite a few times during the script.
Maria " It's a good job I'm sitting down, I go weak .............bla bla bla" the correct should be " It's a good thing I'm sitting down,....." I have seen you use this quite a few times during the script.
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That's British English slang. The characters, for the most part don't speak American English. It's being used properly in context.
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Hello friends.
The latest update is slowly getting there. The current render count stands at 273, although there is still a small part of the accompanying script to complete before I make a start on the next batch of renders.
As usual, there will be one more batch of preview images before the eventual release of the update. I'll keep you informed of my progress. Stay safe and have fun!
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Not having a go here. But I'm really not sure whats funnier someone I can only prosume isn't british.
Trying to correct the Dev on the use british slang.
Or that they actually useing Google as a reference to do so?.
Trying to correct the Dev on the use british slang.
Or that they actually useing Google as a reference to do so?.
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Thanks for the reply. It is just one of my pet peeves. I write so proofing a natural habit for me.
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As long as you don't misinterpret a "Knock me up in the morning" statement, you're golden.
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when replying the story from the beginning she looks more manly and got progressive face gains to look feminine.
the daughter I mean. Maybe is the beauty In the eyes of the beholder.
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Since I gave up on taking this thing seriously I decided I'm going for the nan for the memes, since I've seen some pics and I got into another cuck 'choice'
This fucking game man...Do you want to be cucked? Choices Yes, or Yes.
Do you want the daughter to domme her group? Choices Yes, or Yes but don't tell me about it.
Do you want Deb to constantly humiliate you in front of the entire cast, choices Yes, or Yes but not as hardcore as before.
Do you want Deb to be predatory towards the entire LI roaster? Choices Yes, or Yes but don't show me the hardcore parts after the first half of the game.
Cock and ball torture, doesn't have the guts to commit to being a full on cuckfest, but also does everything in its power to fail at being a Harem Incest game.
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Since I gave up on taking this thing seriously I decided I'm going for the nan for the memes, since I've seen some pics and I got into another cuck 'choice'
This fucking game man...Do you want to be cucked? Choices Yes, or Yes.
Do you want the daughter to domme her group? Choices Yes, or Yes but don't tell me about it.
Do you want Deb to constantly humiliate you in front of the entire cast, choices Yes, or Yes but not as hardcore as before.
Do you want Deb to be predatory towards the entire LI roaster? Choices Yes, or Yes but don't show me the hardcore parts after the first half of the game.
Cock and ball torture, doesn't have the guts to commit to being a full on cuckfest, but also does everything in its power to fail at being a Harem Incest game.
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Telling Deb to stop doing something that should have been understood she should stop doing from the get go, I wonder how long it will last.
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Telling Deb to stop doing something that should have been understood she should stop doing from the get go, I wonder how long it will last.Oh, nvm. Zero respect for player choices, zero.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
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I think half the people here are for the memes and lols this game is a cluster fuck that dosent know what it wants to be but here i am reading the posts and looking like when you look a traffic accident but more funny
- May 8, 2022
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The daughter is hot, for that first creampie with her. I had to submit to my urges and eat clown Fiesta plot.
- May 7, 2018
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This is one of those games I just speed through the sex parts and not really read them. As many have pointed out, it has so much cuck-shit going on in them. I'm just here for the main plot at this point. I get the Dev wanting to get the MC to have sex with every female member of his family, and some not in his family. But I keep hoping Azrayal will continue the plot before long.
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Well, that might be what you wish for this game, but dev keeps pulling some mighty
humiliating breaks on MC and that motivation you seem to have attributed to him:
Pretty tough luck when game time is wasted in this manner to just beat MC down like a dead horse.
seem very much forced. They might be suppsoed to be humorous,
but neither the girls nore MC are laughing about those convos, so they fall flat every time.
humiliating breaks on MC and that motivation you seem to have attributed to him:
Like it was shared above, MC is backstabbed by his own ego, his body and the women he pursues.
Pretty tough luck when game time is wasted in this manner to just beat MC down like a dead horse.
After all the batshit crazy drought MC goes through in the beginning, these latest downers in his quality of life
seem very much forced. They might be suppsoed to be humorous,
but neither the girls nore MC are laughing about those convos, so they fall flat every time.
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