VN Ren'Py Troubled Legacy [v0.0.30] [Blackthunder_vn]

[UnfinishedSentenc]

This may be picky, but it bugs the crap out of me when game authors don't even research for 5 minutes on a search engine.

Where is "Midland" anyway? It cannot possibly be in the USA, as Interpol has zero jurisdiction and no authority in the USA. Interpol is generally just a means for law enforcement to share information and cooperation between nations. Interpol does not have diplomatic immunity either. It job is it helps organizations like the FBI when other countries are involved. Each nation's law enforcement handles investigations and arrests, not Interpol. Interpol keeps them up to date, and has no agents of their own... at all.

The entire premise for the beginning of this game is an eye roller. Instead of Interpol, make it the CIA or His Majesty's Secret Service, which have secret agents, but not Interpol. They are an office-only organization, basically a secure database for nations to draw from for information, with people on workstations.

For someone to be arrested based on an Interpol red flag or notice, that evidence must satisfy the USA's legal standards, and any witnesses MUST be able to be questioned and cross-examined. Also, unless a crime outside of the USA constitutes a direct attack on the USA or its agents, the USA has no authority to arrest and try them. However, if the nation requesting punishment requests extradition, then that individual can fight extradition in US court and then the nation requesting can arrest and charge them once extradited, or be given the finger if the judge determines extradition is uncalled for. Nations must have permission from other nations to arrest someone in their sovereign land.

Yes, it's just a porn game, but come on, give a liitle believability to the fantasy.

Black, I am also a published author, and I have helped in writing two different VN games, one of them was fairly popular, and I am helping in editing another VN as I write this. Since your story is fiction AND it IS porn, somewhat, to a "cartoon" degree, I guess, instead of being whatever this dude is being, if I were writing it, just to add a bit of humor, I might name the "agency" one of two choices: 1. Interpole or 2. Inherhole.

Hey, Black, not to appease this dude, but if you ever wanted to insert a chuckle or two in your work, something like that would do it. In fact, it would be hilarious! Or don't. It doesn't matter. Just do your thing, man. My original suggestion was for the aesthetics of the sexual act; to make it more arousing, intimate, and tantalizing, you know? This guy's suggestion is more about taking a fictitious work of art and making it non-fiction, which is a fine line with fiction. In one of my published novels, I used a fictitious town. In a subsequent novel, Book 2 of the series, I introduced another town, which was real, in another part of the country. But it really didn't matter. The crux of the story really hadn't much to do at all with the names of the towns but more of what was going on within them and with their residents.

swelldude: And where in the world did you get the idea that even the remotest scintilla of believability accompanies fantasy? The definition of fantasy is: The creative, capricious imagination; unrestrained fancy.

Now, does that sound like something that is supposed to be believed? Your proposal is simply ridiculous. If you have a problem with alphabet agencies, then you're in the wrong forum, chief!

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

The writing is a little weird but I'm loving the fuckfest... One thing bothers me though.... The last scene could do with a bit of emotional polish...
(The bar scene) Given that he could die Sofie should be a bit broken and unravelled about it

 

[mdmnsjs1]

i get an error when the mc and vellia are in bed and the phone rings from michaela this is the error
```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/myday12.rpy", line 483, in script
jump day12_callincomming_michaelanear
ScriptError: could not find label 'day12_callincomming_michaelanear'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/myday12.rpy", line 483, in script
jump day12_callincomming_michaelanear
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day12_callincomming_michaelanear'.

Windows-10-10.0.22621
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Troubled Legacy
Fri Aug 18 11:59:36 2023
```
is this the end of the update or is there a fix? thanks for any help

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

2 other had the error but we can't reproduce tre error here or at our team.

All files and labels are where they should be and are funktionable at all our test system.
It only switches between language based Phone screens, so you can just press ignore.

 

[Tr89]

i have not played this novel in a while the last time i played it was like v0.18 so i started for the beginning for 0.25 OMG god this was a good one i can't wait for 0.26 so what is the time frame of the update 1 every month or every other month??? just want to know cause i am hyped and want know how long i have to wait but i don't mind waiting on good novel like this one

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

The 0.0.26 release is planned (hope i can get it ready in time 50% are already rendered) the Patrons prerelease starts at 15.09.23 and the release for all should happen at 01.10.23.

That's how i planned it, hope nothing hit this tight timeline (but everything looks fine so far.)

 

[PhantomNT]

Is there a way to make a Replay / Gallery mode for this VN or is there 1 already if so can someone link it please

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

Ingame from my side not and isn't planned for not (too much other things to do like the charsheet and new content) don't know if there is a mod.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Ingame from my side not and isn't planned for not (too much other things to do like the charsheet and new content) don't know if there is a mod.

Nope, no mod.

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

I'll take it on the list we'll see what i can do, since TL still takes a lot of time to finish.

 

[ChaoticFlame457]

Fist time playing and I have to say I really like it, I have to ask though is Melinda a Mayor or Major? because I saw a few mayor and a lot of major but also if she is a Mayor how is she a Judge?

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

Sorry she's the Mayor yes typed it wrong but it will be corrected.

I've heared about a Mayor in the us can be also a Judge in the city (Don't know how and why but I liked the idea to give her both jobs)

 

[e6mill]

Sorry she's the Mayor yes typed it wrong but it will be corrected.

I've heared about a Mayor in the us can be also a Judge in the city (Don't know how and why but I liked the idea to give her both jobs)

It wouldn't be unheard of to continue calling someone "judge" after they changed careers either.

 

[Blackthunder_vn]

Don't worry all teh typos which are left will be revisited, but we'll do it in the bachground without stopping to develope fresh updates.

e6mill Good to hear that i wasn't that wrong with Melindas jobs.

 

[OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney]

Man!! I made a single run!! The story is so intrigueing!! I must know what happens next!!

 

[estrada777]

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[DavidCF]

Hi there,
Love the game.

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[Blackthunder_vn]

Thank you very much

 

[DavidCF]

Two new ones
script.rpy:123: cheated her -> cheated on her
script.rpy:1033: it't -> it's

 

[Blades4119]

When I attempted the latest version in Android, the previously mentioned error came up. However, the only options to deal with it were the rollback and quit. Ignore wasn't available. Should I attempt to reload the game and try again?

EDIT TO ADD: I just tried reloading and playing. Got the same error as before with rollback or quit as only resolution options. Anyone have any ideas?